Elf Wandering Player

There are too many typos and sentences, and some sentences and typos are too low-level. It doesn't look like your writing style is perfect at all, but there is a problem with something like this. It is not so much written by you as it is written by AI, and it is the type of uploading it directly without checking it after writing.

An illusory and beautiful Pokémon world, an ordinary but real wanderer, a quiet and warm story, and several smart and cute Pokémon. An unusual fanfic. The more you see it, the more you will like it

Although there are some shortcomings in the writing, the core theme of the elf novels, the companionship and the fit between partners, is still what a reader of Pokémon novels expects. The author will give it a big boost👨👨👨

The love plot described is really a bit awkward and childish. It is known that A Wang likes Li Xia, but Li Xia has always felt that A Wang is a respectable opponent. When Li Xia suddenly heard that his opponent liked him, it was normal for him to blush and be shy. Without too much description of mutual understanding and mutual liking, how can we judge that Li Xia likes A Wang? ? ? Furthermore, the protagonist doesn't even know Li Xia, so what does it mean to go and push him? Are you trying to hurt your partner? ? ? This kind of description has been mentioned before. Chiyu is shy. As a martial artist, it seems reasonable. In the same way, Chiyu is shy and is also interesting to the protagonist? With all due respect, your description has a unique male perspective of wishful thinking and taking it for granted.

Teacher, at first I felt that what you wrote was like the plot of an animation, and your writing style was very similar to a Pokémon road novel. I really felt like digging for treasure, and then I transferred to the academy and started farming. It was really boring. There are too many people writing these, but there are very few Pokémon road novels. I hope the author can continue to work hard to create better works, come on ↖(^ω^)↗

I have read dozens of chapters, and the descriptions of the protagonists in these chapters make the protagonist seem to have no brains. I don't really like this kind of protagonist.

A little more, it's not enough

I feel that the living environment of the content is very primitive. In the modern society of the elf world, technology is very advanced. The author is not writing about modern times, but about the old times. Clothes are still made of book covers. People don't use elf balls, nor do they have cars. Many modern technologies are not available.

It's hard to comment, can't be said, can only be understood

It looks quite artistic, but the wrong sentences and typos are outrageous. Quick correction