One Piece: I Am an Immortal

Can you kill Ace and Luffy?

He will save Ace! He will save Ace! He will save Ace!

In the first chapter, the mistake was made. What are the 26 English letters between G and F? Don't you know which one is first and which one is last?

A time traveler who doesn't know basic information about the Pirate King?

Go to the Grand Line, seize Enel's Devil Fruit, use electricity to generate magnetism, rotate the magnetic field, and start the path of evolution! Also, how do you pronounce the penultimate picture in pinyin, and how do you pronounce the penultimate picture?

The writing is pretty good, but when people read fanfics, they hope to see the interaction between the protagonist and the original characters, rather than seeing you write a bunch of messy original characters. There is no sense of immersion at all. I suggest the author remove the eunuch from the book and stop writing fanfics. Isn't the originality bad?

It's so messy and messy, what a bunch of stuff, has the author seen One Piece? Go and read it, or don't write a Pirates novel and make your own original work. If you write a fanfic without even watching the anime, just write it in vain, this is just trying to sell something like a sheep over someone else's head!

This kind of fanfic is one of the few that I can keep reading. It's super cool.

I thought it was a eunuch, but I didn't expect it to be updated again. Sending gifts should not be illegal.

It is obviously wrong to attribute all kinds of domineering power to the power of the heart. Whether it is weapons, sex, sight, sight, or sex, you can become stronger through training and fighting with strong men. This is obviously a physical ability.