Naruto Black and White Hinata
About This Novel
The feud between the Hyuga clan and the branch families, the struggle for hegemony among the five great ninja villages, the root of darkness in Konoha, the immortal madman Orochimaru, the Akatsuki organization that collects tailed beasts, Madara who wants to carry out the Eye of the Moon plan, Black Zetsu who is plotting to resurrect Kaguya behind the scenes, and an enemy that even Otsutsuki Kaguya is afraid of. Snort! Since you are coming, I, Hinata and Riyue, are not welcome! There is no tampering, I just want to present an authentic Naruto fan story, showing every bit of Naruto that touches us. (Book group: qq344246542)
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Official(386)Scraped 3d ago
Konoha White Fang's name is Hatake Saun? When did Kakashi's father change his name?
Although I can write well, tell me why Konoha White Fang is called Sakumo, when his name is Hatake Sakumo. Kishimoto: Very good, I'll give you the pen and you can write. I don't know how to do a thorough research when writing a Naruto fanfic. What do you want people who like Kakashi to think?
I think you need to develop the protagonist into a kind protagonist. How can any ninja be kind? Naruto Naruto was naive enough.
Really disappointed
I was looking forward to it, but I was disappointed after reading the first dozen chapters. First of all, I thought the author was a fake Naruto fan. He used insulting words such as pink eye and cataract from the beginning. At least I won't use insulting words about the things I like. Secondly, the protagonist is actually afraid of the butterfly effect that will change the plot. If you respect the original work, just write the characters more vividly so that people don't feel like they are all fools. If you are afraid of changing the plot, why are you writing fan fiction? I don't know what will happen next, but I'm already disappointed. Bye-Bye
The author is great
When I opened the first chapter and saw that the Senju clan died in childbirth, I didn't want to read it anymore. You're kidding me. The characteristic of the Senju clan is their tenacious vitality, just like Uchiha's eyes! Can I bring snacks if I get paid to write a book while urinating?
No way, you just collected this book and became a eunuch?
I forcibly revived a poisonous spot in Kato Dan's life and gave up the book.
After reading more than 80 chapters, I don't know what I will think about it in the future. A time traveler, you have become a native! You are not a person from the Naruto world, you tell me your responsibility? In Naruto, the strong are in power and the weak are pawns and cannon fodder. Which of the supporting cast in the original novel is not cannon fodder? Obito killed so many people, including his parents, and Naruto cleared him. Nagato also killed so many people and razed Konoha to the ground, but Naruto still cleared him. As long as the person who killed someone had anything to do with Naruto, he would be cleared. Is there any fairness in the world of Naruto? No! Hinata killed your body's parents, is there anyone fighting for them? No! The Hyuga clan treats the branch family like a dog. Now you tell me that the clan branch must be treated fairly? What about love and hate? Is revenge necessary? I don't know whether you will take revenge in the future, but by Chapter 80 you have become a Holy Mother. Do you want to imitate Naruto?
So, you broke it off again?
Why are you like this? I read your books when I was a sophomore in high school, but in my freshman year there were still so many books?
The author never came back after all, so why are all the good fanfics written by Naruto almost unfinished?
A eunuch? Take a look if you have collected it
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Official(386)Scraped 3d ago
Konoha White Fang's name is Hatake Saun? When did Kakashi's father change his name?
Although I can write well, tell me why Konoha White Fang is called Sakumo, when his name is Hatake Sakumo. Kishimoto: Very good, I'll give you the pen and you can write. I don't know how to do a thorough research when writing a Naruto fanfic. What do you want people who like Kakashi to think?
I think you need to develop the protagonist into a kind protagonist. How can any ninja be kind? Naruto Naruto was naive enough.
Really disappointed
I was looking forward to it, but I was disappointed after reading the first dozen chapters. First of all, I thought the author was a fake Naruto fan. He used insulting words such as pink eye and cataract from the beginning. At least I won't use insulting words about the things I like. Secondly, the protagonist is actually afraid of the butterfly effect that will change the plot. If you respect the original work, just write the characters more vividly so that people don't feel like they are all fools. If you are afraid of changing the plot, why are you writing fan fiction? I don't know what will happen next, but I'm already disappointed. Bye-Bye
The author is great
When I opened the first chapter and saw that the Senju clan died in childbirth, I didn't want to read it anymore. You're kidding me. The characteristic of the Senju clan is their tenacious vitality, just like Uchiha's eyes! Can I bring snacks if I get paid to write a book while urinating?
No way, you just collected this book and became a eunuch?
I forcibly revived a poisonous spot in Kato Dan's life and gave up the book.
After reading more than 80 chapters, I don't know what I will think about it in the future. A time traveler, you have become a native! You are not a person from the Naruto world, you tell me your responsibility? In Naruto, the strong are in power and the weak are pawns and cannon fodder. Which of the supporting cast in the original novel is not cannon fodder? Obito killed so many people, including his parents, and Naruto cleared him. Nagato also killed so many people and razed Konoha to the ground, but Naruto still cleared him. As long as the person who killed someone had anything to do with Naruto, he would be cleared. Is there any fairness in the world of Naruto? No! Hinata killed your body's parents, is there anyone fighting for them? No! The Hyuga clan treats the branch family like a dog. Now you tell me that the clan branch must be treated fairly? What about love and hate? Is revenge necessary? I don't know whether you will take revenge in the future, but by Chapter 80 you have become a Holy Mother. Do you want to imitate Naruto?
So, you broke it off again?
Why are you like this? I read your books when I was a sophomore in high school, but in my freshman year there were still so many books?
The author never came back after all, so why are all the good fanfics written by Naruto almost unfinished?
A eunuch? Take a look if you have collected it
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It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic. The protagonist has a normal IQ (seems like this has become a must-have quality for good writing?) The plot is well arranged, and the use of imagination to reasonably save Dan and the rope tree is also a favorite for readers with a glass heart like me. However, I haven't finished it yet, so I can't analyze this novel thoroughly. Anyway, I recommend it to everyone😄
The protagonist who has everything going smoothly, the guardian of Konoha
As the Hyuga family is a wealthy family, there are few fan stories that can avoid bad writing. It has not yet entered the original plot, so it is tentatively scheduled.
I liked the early part, but I watched too many similar plots later on, so I didn't continue watching it. It looked like a eunuch
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