Covering the Sky with a Flick of the Finger and Calming Down the Immortals
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Traveling through the world of Zhetian and becoming Ye Fan's classmate, there are still two years left before the coffin is pulled in Kowloon. A time bead that traces back to the past can reproduce all the past time. Use the "Tao Te Ching" to reproduce the "Tao Jing" of Dao Tian Zun, use the "Ling Bao Sutra" to reproduce the imperial scriptures of Ling Bao Tian Zun, and use Shennong's "Ben Cao Jing" to reproduce the "Heng Yu Jing" of Emperor Heng Yu...
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Official(49)Scraped 6d ago
Zhetianyou
Who is the peak at the end of the immortal road? When you see the beginningless path, it becomes empty. The way of heaven has neither beginning nor end, and the precious mirror holds the sky in the void. A green lotus is astonishing for eternity, and the Nine Saints reach the sky to ensure peace. Taiyin and Sun, whichever is weak and strong, mix Tai Chi to prove the emperor. The Qilin palm soldiers conquered the immortal road, and the silkworm finally became the emperor after ten transformations. Crazy monkeys fight against the Nine Heavens, the unfaithful and unjust immortal king. Before the ancient times, the emperor respected the sky, and the world turned into a tripod and wanted to become an immortal. Hengyu began to refine weapons in the restricted area, and Long Lingdao shouted and shocked Fuxi. Nine deities, nine secrets, nine extremes, the ancient tree of life speaks of Taoism. The Demon King has regrets for eternity, and Ming Zun finally became an immortal after nine deaths. Killing me to enlighten me will only disrupt the ancient times. The emperor's dragon sword can defeat thousands of people. Amitabha Buddha is wise and compassionate, and the Western Emperor appears in the womb of heaven. Soaring into the sky and shining in the sky, King Jiuli shows his magical power. The ruthless man swept through the three thousand worlds, and at the end of reincarnation, he saw the old madman, The God King in white is stunning for a long time. The Nine Netherworld's unparalleled arrogance. The red face and blue silk pity the purple moon, and a leaf of mortal dust covers the sky.
The writing is too messy
For example, when writing about time travel, is it a prehistoric one or a time-covering one? Another example is that the two are not the same cultivation system, and they are applied in a rigid way. Now, Emperor Zhetian is at most the Great Luo. As Chen Dongdu said, in this book, the Saint is on the same level as Emperor Zhetian?
Have some opinions
All in all, from the ten chapters until now, I feel that the characters are too little involved in the plot. There are too many chapters for the growth of the protagonist and trump cards. Instead, it is like a person plundering in an imaginary article, and there are really too many resources to plunder. You write it like a "water number". To be honest, I feel that it is very dragging after I have followed the fifty chapters. Up to now, more than seventy chapters are still stuck in that "article" with similar content, which makes me have no motivation to read it. I was afraid that a book I was following was very good before 500 chapters, but the next 400 or so chapters would be like this. Continuously writing is not a true flagship story (no nutrition), and will consume the reader's interest. What I want to see is the participation, passion, emotion, or bond of the world, and it is best to have a little foreshadowing (that is, to make the reader suspense). Of course, the author is also making progress. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the first 20 or 30 chapters. I wish the author a great success in the end.
It's a bit similar to another fanfic setting
The setting of the Time Pearl in the book to trace back to the past is very similar to that in another book called Zhetian. It is called "Proving the Way from Zhetian", but it is not just about tracing back to the past. It can be traced back to previous lives. Seeing the memories of other people or the immortal medicine's previous lives, as long as you are strong enough, it is not a problem to see other people's lives in the Immortal Ancient Period.
New work by a newcomer, please collect it.
Newbie reporting, please support me if you are passing by. 😘
This is a novel with a very low IQ and well-described characters. I don't like people with no IQ.
The first 1-2 chapters are very well written.
There is a problem in the third chapter. If your physical condition is not good, just give it a better one! What can the protagonist do if his physique is the worst...
The book is very nice and the genre is good. It's just a eunuch😔
The book is very nice and the genre is good. It's just a eunuch😔
There's something wrong with what you wrote. Didn't he travel through time and become Ye Fan?
Why do people still call her by her original name? Shouldn't he be called Ye Fan? And Jiulong Lacoffin may have gone to pick up Ye Fan specifically.
This book is well written and more in line with my taste.
If you update more than three times tomorrow, I will give you a reward
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Official(49)Scraped 6d ago
Zhetianyou
Who is the peak at the end of the immortal road? When you see the beginningless path, it becomes empty. The way of heaven has neither beginning nor end, and the precious mirror holds the sky in the void. A green lotus is astonishing for eternity, and the Nine Saints reach the sky to ensure peace. Taiyin and Sun, whichever is weak and strong, mix Tai Chi to prove the emperor. The Qilin palm soldiers conquered the immortal road, and the silkworm finally became the emperor after ten transformations. Crazy monkeys fight against the Nine Heavens, the unfaithful and unjust immortal king. Before the ancient times, the emperor respected the sky, and the world turned into a tripod and wanted to become an immortal. Hengyu began to refine weapons in the restricted area, and Long Lingdao shouted and shocked Fuxi. Nine deities, nine secrets, nine extremes, the ancient tree of life speaks of Taoism. The Demon King has regrets for eternity, and Ming Zun finally became an immortal after nine deaths. Killing me to enlighten me will only disrupt the ancient times. The emperor's dragon sword can defeat thousands of people. Amitabha Buddha is wise and compassionate, and the Western Emperor appears in the womb of heaven. Soaring into the sky and shining in the sky, King Jiuli shows his magical power. The ruthless man swept through the three thousand worlds, and at the end of reincarnation, he saw the old madman, The God King in white is stunning for a long time. The Nine Netherworld's unparalleled arrogance. The red face and blue silk pity the purple moon, and a leaf of mortal dust covers the sky.
The writing is too messy
For example, when writing about time travel, is it a prehistoric one or a time-covering one? Another example is that the two are not the same cultivation system, and they are applied in a rigid way. Now, Emperor Zhetian is at most the Great Luo. As Chen Dongdu said, in this book, the Saint is on the same level as Emperor Zhetian?
Have some opinions
All in all, from the ten chapters until now, I feel that the characters are too little involved in the plot. There are too many chapters for the growth of the protagonist and trump cards. Instead, it is like a person plundering in an imaginary article, and there are really too many resources to plunder. You write it like a "water number". To be honest, I feel that it is very dragging after I have followed the fifty chapters. Up to now, more than seventy chapters are still stuck in that "article" with similar content, which makes me have no motivation to read it. I was afraid that a book I was following was very good before 500 chapters, but the next 400 or so chapters would be like this. Continuously writing is not a true flagship story (no nutrition), and will consume the reader's interest. What I want to see is the participation, passion, emotion, or bond of the world, and it is best to have a little foreshadowing (that is, to make the reader suspense). Of course, the author is also making progress. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the first 20 or 30 chapters. I wish the author a great success in the end.
It's a bit similar to another fanfic setting
The setting of the Time Pearl in the book to trace back to the past is very similar to that in another book called Zhetian. It is called "Proving the Way from Zhetian", but it is not just about tracing back to the past. It can be traced back to previous lives. Seeing the memories of other people or the immortal medicine's previous lives, as long as you are strong enough, it is not a problem to see other people's lives in the Immortal Ancient Period.
New work by a newcomer, please collect it.
Newbie reporting, please support me if you are passing by. 😘
This is a novel with a very low IQ and well-described characters. I don't like people with no IQ.
The first 1-2 chapters are very well written.
There is a problem in the third chapter. If your physical condition is not good, just give it a better one! What can the protagonist do if his physique is the worst...
The book is very nice and the genre is good. It's just a eunuch😔
The book is very nice and the genre is good. It's just a eunuch😔
There's something wrong with what you wrote. Didn't he travel through time and become Ye Fan?
Why do people still call her by her original name? Shouldn't he be called Ye Fan? And Jiulong Lacoffin may have gone to pick up Ye Fan specifically.
This book is well written and more in line with my taste.
If you update more than three times tomorrow, I will give you a reward
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