Cultivation of Immortality: Leading the Family to Rise
by Pei Shiyi.
About This Novel
An ordinary person from Blue Star traveled to a dynasty family and became a child of the Yuanying family. His spark blossomed in this gorgeous and mysterious world of immortality. Let's see how he leads the family to rise in another world. Ps: This is not a mindless novel, it has farming and adventure. This is my first time writing, so my writing style is not very good at the beginning, but as I go on, I feel it's okay. If you like it, you can stick with it! QQ group:271374969
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Official(16)Scraped 15d ago
It can be said that the protagonist of this book is the flowers in a greenhouse
This book gave me the feeling that the main character was a passing brushstroke and boring.
Is there something wrong with the title of the book? It's obviously a family book, but now it's a sect book. It's off topic.
The author's writing is so poor! The characters are blunt and the narrative ability is too poor. , Like writing a diary.
There is nothing wrong with the writing
It's just that the protagonist is too smooth and the plot is too bland.
It's exactly the same as a novel I read. What a great copy.
Six-star rating
When you build a sect in the future, you don't need to name your child after your family. You have already bought the family.
hehe
Fighter among the garbage, what kind of thing is this thing that the protagonist has been practicing since he was a child?
It is rare for a novel to be written into a diary, not to mention hundreds of thousands of words written. The author still has some literary skills, but his ability to tell stories is still a bit lacking.
come on! You can write more about elixir training
The protagonist gets the cauldron, and a senior alchemist will contribute more to the family. If you are not good at writing fighting scenes, you can write more about treasure hunting and alchemy training.
Very good-looking. Very good-looking.
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 15d ago
It can be said that the protagonist of this book is the flowers in a greenhouse
This book gave me the feeling that the main character was a passing brushstroke and boring.
Is there something wrong with the title of the book? It's obviously a family book, but now it's a sect book. It's off topic.
The author's writing is so poor! The characters are blunt and the narrative ability is too poor. , Like writing a diary.
There is nothing wrong with the writing
It's just that the protagonist is too smooth and the plot is too bland.
It's exactly the same as a novel I read. What a great copy.
Six-star rating
When you build a sect in the future, you don't need to name your child after your family. You have already bought the family.
hehe
Fighter among the garbage, what kind of thing is this thing that the protagonist has been practicing since he was a child?
It is rare for a novel to be written into a diary, not to mention hundreds of thousands of words written. The author still has some literary skills, but his ability to tell stories is still a bit lacking.
come on! You can write more about elixir training
The protagonist gets the cauldron, and a senior alchemist will contribute more to the family. If you are not good at writing fighting scenes, you can write more about treasure hunting and alchemy training.
Very good-looking. Very good-looking.
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