
Starting from Qingyunmen, Panel Cultivation
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(The new book "After Rebirth, I Choose to Return to the Countryside" has been released. You are welcome to come and support!) Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs! Modern young man Chen Li traveled through time and was reborn in the Zhuxian world with an attribute panel that could not add points, and became a disciple of Feiyun Taoist, the elder of Qingyun Luoxia Peak! Chen Li: "Can't you add more? It's a rubbish panel, what use do you have!" "There are no bottlenecks in the technique? As long as you have full proficiency, you can break through it!!!... It smells so good!" Later I discovered that the ancestral Tai Chi was the biggest drawback...
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Official(66)Scraped 7d ago
Why is it that Lu Xueqi is basically the heroine in Qingyun fanfics? Doesn't Baguio smell good? Isn't it beautiful? I love Zhao Liying.
This novel is available for free here. If you don't like it, don't read it and don't criticize it.
Don't criticize people if you read it for free. I only made it free to facilitate your reading. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. Does it make sense for you to comment on me and criticize me?
It's not that great. After reading dozens of chapters, I naturally don't want to read anymore.
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Therefore, Zhu Xian's novel is originally a work with errors, but the author of the novel adapted from Zhu Xian's original work still does not realize the problem.
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This mistake is a very simple common sense problem, that is, spiritual perception. In reality, people who have practiced martial arts generally have stronger perceptions than ordinary people, let alone those who are cultivators. In other immortality books, after practicing, there is spiritual consciousness or divine perception that can detect movements within a certain range outside the self. However, the entire Zhuxian novel does not have this. In many plots, things that can only be done by divine perception are greatly changed because the original author did not set it.
You can discuss the relevant content of the novel with the author, don't rant, don't rant
You can discuss the relevant content with the author and make some suggestions, but don't criticize.
Hahahahahahaha
If God grants me glory, I will definitely be more arrogant than Heaven. He grew old overnight. He witnessed the destruction of his family with his own eyes. He cried silently but was unable to do anything... Have you ever longed for power? I have longed for it. Because I was weak, I witnessed the destruction of my family with my own eyes. Because I was weak, I could not protect the people I wanted to protect. At the age of seven, he lost everything, endless rainy nights, endless running, because of fatigue, his movements became weaker and weaker, and because of despair, she fell off the cliff. I don't know whether it was luck or God's blessing, but fortunately he survived... Praying for good harvest, he will return after completing his studies. He killed all his enemies, but sadly, it was his most beloved second uncle who massacred his family, whom she cared about so much. He witnessed the destruction of his family with his own eyes and did not cry. He did not cry in despair. At this moment, he cried heartbreakingly. He killed him with his own hands, and then left this sad place resolutely. No one knows whether he left or died. Only his legends and deeds are left in the world...
When I saw Qimai fighting, I thought of someone, where is Lin Jingyu?
The protagonist and the author have been influenced by modern culture to their bones. It is not easy to be monogamous in the world of immortality.
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Official(66)Scraped 7d ago
Why is it that Lu Xueqi is basically the heroine in Qingyun fanfics? Doesn't Baguio smell good? Isn't it beautiful? I love Zhao Liying.
This novel is available for free here. If you don't like it, don't read it and don't criticize it.
Don't criticize people if you read it for free. I only made it free to facilitate your reading. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. Does it make sense for you to comment on me and criticize me?
It's not that great. After reading dozens of chapters, I naturally don't want to read anymore.
/
Therefore, Zhu Xian's novel is originally a work with errors, but the author of the novel adapted from Zhu Xian's original work still does not realize the problem.
u
This mistake is a very simple common sense problem, that is, spiritual perception. In reality, people who have practiced martial arts generally have stronger perceptions than ordinary people, let alone those who are cultivators. In other immortality books, after practicing, there is spiritual consciousness or divine perception that can detect movements within a certain range outside the self. However, the entire Zhuxian novel does not have this. In many plots, things that can only be done by divine perception are greatly changed because the original author did not set it.
You can discuss the relevant content of the novel with the author, don't rant, don't rant
You can discuss the relevant content with the author and make some suggestions, but don't criticize.
Hahahahahahaha
If God grants me glory, I will definitely be more arrogant than Heaven. He grew old overnight. He witnessed the destruction of his family with his own eyes. He cried silently but was unable to do anything... Have you ever longed for power? I have longed for it. Because I was weak, I witnessed the destruction of my family with my own eyes. Because I was weak, I could not protect the people I wanted to protect. At the age of seven, he lost everything, endless rainy nights, endless running, because of fatigue, his movements became weaker and weaker, and because of despair, she fell off the cliff. I don't know whether it was luck or God's blessing, but fortunately he survived... Praying for good harvest, he will return after completing his studies. He killed all his enemies, but sadly, it was his most beloved second uncle who massacred his family, whom she cared about so much. He witnessed the destruction of his family with his own eyes and did not cry. He did not cry in despair. At this moment, he cried heartbreakingly. He killed him with his own hands, and then left this sad place resolutely. No one knows whether he left or died. Only his legends and deeds are left in the world...
When I saw Qimai fighting, I thought of someone, where is Lin Jingyu?
The protagonist and the author have been influenced by modern culture to their bones. It is not easy to be monogamous in the world of immortality.


















