Starting from Douluo, He is the Master of All Realms

Starting from Douluo, He is the Master of All Realms

by The Beauty Of The World

Length:
117Kwords
Latest:
Ch. 63It's Obsolete and Has Been Reissued
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Updated 5y agoScraped 9d ago
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About This Novel

If Tang San was destined to become a god, he would get everything. So what am I here to do?

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Hongmeng Wuliang Taichu Dao Zun65mo ago

Some suggestions! It's up to you, we readers don't care!

I didn't want to watch it at first sight! , What about punctuation marks? What about segments? It's dizzying to see. Not to mention how it was written. Even this detail has not been taken care of! Also, work classification! Fantasy, is that fantasy? Let's not talk about it for now, you are a fan of time traveling, okay? ! If you choose to sign a contract with a fan, there will be more people! I'll come back and read the book after you change it! If you don't change your book, it will be useless! No, lick Tang San, worship the master! If you touch this poisonous point, the number of people watching will be reduced by half! Don't be perfunctory like a running account, you still need to have basic logic! Looking at your catalog, it feels like a running account! Even Zhutianliu is not the reason for your running accounts! Do these things well and your results will improve! Okay, let me know and I'll give you a five-star review when I get back. This is my first time writing a review of 240 words! !

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Listen to the Wind65mo ago

It's not good, no quotation marks are added, and sentences are constantly broken.

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