
I Become a Dragon in the Real World
by Black Armed
About This Novel
At first, Chen Xing thought he was just sick. Bright yellow eyes like fire, indelible electric shock, partially albino skin... It wasn't until scales grew that he fully realized, This is not an ordinary disease. (Become a dragon, explore, grow, daily, farm, develop) Alternative book titles: "I Transformed into a Dragon in the World", "Memoirs of My Transformation into a Dragon"
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Official(28)Scraped 8d ago
Hey, at the beginning, the woman chased the protagonist in the middle of the night and scared the protagonist half to death. After that, she said to test you and it was fine. Official leaders can kill their subordinates at will. They said that being an official was no different from being a slave. Such a chaotic and terrifying setting was full of human nature. The protagonist was hit by a car while walking, and he had to pay for it. It's okay to count the money. The protagonist was robbed and killed. After defeating the enemy, he left. The protagonist was pointed at a gun and shot. After the counterattack, no one on the opposite side died or was even injured. Not even a single person was disabled. There were also various little people who provoked him. Not to mention the protagonist's coquettish counterattacks. Is the protagonist turning into a dragon? It's the kind of thing that Prime Minister Turtle left behind, right? If you can't write about conflicts or fights, then don't write about it. If you can't write about conflicts, you still describe so many conflicts and so many fights in such a long space.
Seeing this, I can't stand it anymore.
I always feel that the protagonist is like a nanny, a dragon, and aloof. When I come to him, I feel that he owes the whole world. Even the tiger is alone. He is good at licking others everywhere. Wouldn't it be nice to remember his goodness, make yourself stronger, and then give him the reward he deserves? Do you want to take her into your arms? Then pretend I have nothing to say. Dragon nature is inherently licentious.
What does the protagonist say? He has an unpleasant personality. He frequently asks whether he wants to lose money, and his low self-esteem and cowardice are inexplicably revealed in his words. It gives the impression that he has a big psychological problem.
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The author is a newbie and has a good heart. There are some pitfalls in the front. It's hard to explain in one sentence. Please try to avoid it later. Readers who don't like it, just leave quietly. Anyway... I sat there for hours after seeing the negative reviews and didn't have the heart to write. In order to maintain the status, some reviews may be deleted. Please forgive me. Also, the requirements for the first book are not high. If there are about 300 first orders, I will keep writing. I don't have to worry about eunuchs. Of course... If I don't meet the requirements, I will probably keep writing. As I grow, the next book will be better.
running account
It's all just a running account, meaningless.
The cowardly protagonist is full of cowardice and has no blood at all. Others took out their firearms and made it clear that they wanted to kill him, so they would give him a beating. You were obviously being bullied, but after you fought back, you talked all kinds of nonsense, and you were unwilling to take a vicious step. What's the matter? You don't think you can become buddies with your enemies. What kind of plot from 20 years ago, repaying evil with kindness, no one likes to watch this kind of plot. When people read your book, they want to see a dragon transforming into a carefree person, not a tortoise who stays and tolerates everything.
It's good to watch, but I think it should be written more about the plot. There are too many irrelevant contents.
I'm actually quite interested in this book. I've read everything you wrote, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.
Da da da da da da da da da da
I want to ask, by which chapter did I turn into a dragon completely?
Get out of the way! I'm going to show off!
Oh, no, it's the protagonist...
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Official(28)Scraped 8d ago
Hey, at the beginning, the woman chased the protagonist in the middle of the night and scared the protagonist half to death. After that, she said to test you and it was fine. Official leaders can kill their subordinates at will. They said that being an official was no different from being a slave. Such a chaotic and terrifying setting was full of human nature. The protagonist was hit by a car while walking, and he had to pay for it. It's okay to count the money. The protagonist was robbed and killed. After defeating the enemy, he left. The protagonist was pointed at a gun and shot. After the counterattack, no one on the opposite side died or was even injured. Not even a single person was disabled. There were also various little people who provoked him. Not to mention the protagonist's coquettish counterattacks. Is the protagonist turning into a dragon? It's the kind of thing that Prime Minister Turtle left behind, right? If you can't write about conflicts or fights, then don't write about it. If you can't write about conflicts, you still describe so many conflicts and so many fights in such a long space.
Seeing this, I can't stand it anymore.
I always feel that the protagonist is like a nanny, a dragon, and aloof. When I come to him, I feel that he owes the whole world. Even the tiger is alone. He is good at licking others everywhere. Wouldn't it be nice to remember his goodness, make yourself stronger, and then give him the reward he deserves? Do you want to take her into your arms? Then pretend I have nothing to say. Dragon nature is inherently licentious.
What does the protagonist say? He has an unpleasant personality. He frequently asks whether he wants to lose money, and his low self-esteem and cowardice are inexplicably revealed in his words. It gives the impression that he has a big psychological problem.
Just say a few words
The author is a newbie and has a good heart. There are some pitfalls in the front. It's hard to explain in one sentence. Please try to avoid it later. Readers who don't like it, just leave quietly. Anyway... I sat there for hours after seeing the negative reviews and didn't have the heart to write. In order to maintain the status, some reviews may be deleted. Please forgive me. Also, the requirements for the first book are not high. If there are about 300 first orders, I will keep writing. I don't have to worry about eunuchs. Of course... If I don't meet the requirements, I will probably keep writing. As I grow, the next book will be better.
running account
It's all just a running account, meaningless.
The cowardly protagonist is full of cowardice and has no blood at all. Others took out their firearms and made it clear that they wanted to kill him, so they would give him a beating. You were obviously being bullied, but after you fought back, you talked all kinds of nonsense, and you were unwilling to take a vicious step. What's the matter? You don't think you can become buddies with your enemies. What kind of plot from 20 years ago, repaying evil with kindness, no one likes to watch this kind of plot. When people read your book, they want to see a dragon transforming into a carefree person, not a tortoise who stays and tolerates everything.
It's good to watch, but I think it should be written more about the plot. There are too many irrelevant contents.
I'm actually quite interested in this book. I've read everything you wrote, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.
Da da da da da da da da da da
I want to ask, by which chapter did I turn into a dragon completely?
Get out of the way! I'm going to show off!
Oh, no, it's the protagonist...









