Douluo's Steady Douluo

Let's complain, Qian Renxue's soul power level is too low (level 30). You must know that Qian Renxue's innate soul power is level 20, while Hu Liena Xieyue and others' soul power level is too high (level 42 to 44). Hu Liena's innate soul power is level 9. The age difference between Qian Renxue and Hu Liena is no more than five years (Qian Renxue is older than Hu Liena). It's understandable that the author wants to make magic changes, but the author can't make random changes. The golden generation of Wuhun Palace is a genius, but Qian Renxue is a genius. I suggest the author exchange the soul power levels of Qian Renxue and Hu Liena, otherwise it will be too poisonous. This book is okay for the plot, but fails for many character settings. The character setting of Douluo One World is that no more than five people are ranked first in twin martial arts, and no more than fifteen people are ranked second in innate soul power. The author does not want a character to be born with full soul power, and full innate soul power is a poisonous point. Titled Douluo have no soul bones, but the protagonist has a soul bone and shows it without hesitation. The best soul rings for Douluo fans are yellow, purple, purple, black, black, red, and red.

You said that Qian Renxue spent four years learning from those undercover agents without cultivating her soul power, which is a bit putting the cart before the horse. It is impossible for Qian Daoliu to agree. Qian Daoliu's purpose is to let Qian Renxue inherit the throne of Angel God instead of going to the same continent. So this doesn't make sense.

There is everything in the system. If you exchange a copy of Douluo Dalu and use the Ice and Fire Eyes, everything will be solved.

I just hope to continue writing. This outline is not bad. Just don't collapse.

I have seen many Douluo fandoms, but those who start out as apprentices to Bibi Dong (or Chen Xin) are not good... Yy is too much! Incredible talent, top teacher, top traffic power, what else should I write? ! Apart from Wuhun's imagination, the only thing left is to install coins... Look at other good books, whether they are the current useless ones, the grassy ones... Or the more classical martial arts novels, it is better to be like this... Even if the protagonist has a background, his life experience is too miserable to be used, so that there is something to write about. Tang San is like this, Zhang Wuji is like this, really, if these two are placed in the Wudang Sect of the Haotian Sect, what other stories can be written?

The magic reform is too serious. How can the golden generation be older than Qian Renxue? Is Tang San also the same age as Qian Renxue? The protagonist spends all day studying this and that, and he doesn't even know anything about it. He just passes some modern things to Douluo. It is purely a leisure and entertainment novel, with only a few words and a few chapters and a weak plot, which is very boring to read. The author probably has never read the original work. This is no longer a simple magic modification.

It's really a magic change, the change is inexplicable.

The author wouldn't think it was novel to write about Hu Liena's generation who was more than ten years older, and how the avalanche became full of soul power.

The sense of immersion is a bit weak

The sense of immersion is a bit weak