
The Rise of the Family: I Have a Volume of Wanfa Dao Jing
by Original Intention Of Writing
About This Novel
GeniusSingle Female ProtagonistGroup Portrait The road to immortality is loneliness, loneliness, and the coldness of high places. Reborn in a different world, surrounded by dangers, fortunately, I received a mysterious Taoist scripture: Breaking through the early stage of Qi refining, he obtained the "Yin Yang Xuan Hua Sutra", which means he can practice both Yin and Yang by practicing the essence of the sun and the moon. Breaking through the middle stage of Qi refining, he obtained the "Breathing Concentration Technique", where the breath is collected and hidden, hiding the secrets of heaven. I broke through the late stage of Qi refining and obtained the "Water and Fire Control Method". Water and fire in the world are my precursors. Breakthrough to the Great Perfection of Qi Refining, get the "Breaking Illusion Eye Technique" to resolve confusion and trace the source. Break through the early stage of foundation building and obtain the "Five Beasts Body Forging Technique"... ... At this point, you have learned the Dharma, refined your magical powers, obtained the Great Way, and embarked on the road to eternal life. When you climb high and look back, the past disappears like smoke.
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Official(125)Scraped 3d ago
Anyway, I feel a little brainless. You have so many enemies in your family, so you just want to be Long Aotian, and you won't hide your clumsiness?
Is there any breath-holding technique that you don't need? Used it on dogs Equipment everywhere slaps you in the face, and your IQ is worrying. The enemy's IQ is written too low. Every family has enemy spies, and those with high talents will be assassinated.
The writing is okay, but the main thing is that your golden elixir must have all five elements. Isn't this spiritual object that complements the five elements too cheap? How long will it take you to break through the golden elixir? Only when others are transformed into gods do they have time to make up for it.
Really nice guys,
The writing is good. You should know the protagonists of many novels now. The protagonist has just met a person or a group of people. As long as they have a little affection, they are the kind of people who have a good impression of the protagonist, or family monks. They will never die, and it is difficult to get injured. But the people around the protagonist of this book will die. I think this is the normal world of immortality. Monks will struggle, get injured and die. How can there be such a lucky world where the people around the protagonist will not die? Isn't that pure bullshit? This novel is the situation in the normal world of immortality. Having said so much, there are still some shortcomings. The protagonist's aura is a little too big. The protagonist can find good things after just a few shots. They are all powerful.
The main character is a family monk who is walking on thin ice. The protagonist is a casual cultivator or a sect cultivator, and the family cultivators are arrogant and domineering.
I hope not all the elders will die
If all the elders are written off and only the protagonist is left as the senior one, the protagonist will feel like a loner. This kind of family novel no longer has the flavor of a family.
How can we form a family without a harem? Will it take a hundred years? Not considered dead yet
This work is very good, but I don't know how to write a review, so I'll just write it down.
The monster materials seem to be useless, there is a monster hunting team, the protagonist's attitude is very good towards the family, and there is no family connection in his actions.
The plot is rich, not brainless, well-founded, and not subdued. No matter the villain, main character, protagonist, or supporting character, they all have their own thoughts. One shortcoming is that the overall situation is not enough and the writing is not comprehensive. For example, the demon clan accounts for a little bit of the entire novel, so Why did you write about him? There are also ancient witches. Only two of them have appeared so far. What other foreign lands are there now such as the Shark tribe? You haven't written these clearly yet, and you are adding new ones. It's a bit urgent and the overall picture is not enough, but overall it is good! Worth recommending!
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Official(125)Scraped 3d ago
Anyway, I feel a little brainless. You have so many enemies in your family, so you just want to be Long Aotian, and you won't hide your clumsiness?
Is there any breath-holding technique that you don't need? Used it on dogs Equipment everywhere slaps you in the face, and your IQ is worrying. The enemy's IQ is written too low. Every family has enemy spies, and those with high talents will be assassinated.
The writing is okay, but the main thing is that your golden elixir must have all five elements. Isn't this spiritual object that complements the five elements too cheap? How long will it take you to break through the golden elixir? Only when others are transformed into gods do they have time to make up for it.
Really nice guys,
The writing is good. You should know the protagonists of many novels now. The protagonist has just met a person or a group of people. As long as they have a little affection, they are the kind of people who have a good impression of the protagonist, or family monks. They will never die, and it is difficult to get injured. But the people around the protagonist of this book will die. I think this is the normal world of immortality. Monks will struggle, get injured and die. How can there be such a lucky world where the people around the protagonist will not die? Isn't that pure bullshit? This novel is the situation in the normal world of immortality. Having said so much, there are still some shortcomings. The protagonist's aura is a little too big. The protagonist can find good things after just a few shots. They are all powerful.
The main character is a family monk who is walking on thin ice. The protagonist is a casual cultivator or a sect cultivator, and the family cultivators are arrogant and domineering.
I hope not all the elders will die
If all the elders are written off and only the protagonist is left as the senior one, the protagonist will feel like a loner. This kind of family novel no longer has the flavor of a family.
How can we form a family without a harem? Will it take a hundred years? Not considered dead yet
This work is very good, but I don't know how to write a review, so I'll just write it down.
The monster materials seem to be useless, there is a monster hunting team, the protagonist's attitude is very good towards the family, and there is no family connection in his actions.
The plot is rich, not brainless, well-founded, and not subdued. No matter the villain, main character, protagonist, or supporting character, they all have their own thoughts. One shortcoming is that the overall situation is not enough and the writing is not comprehensive. For example, the demon clan accounts for a little bit of the entire novel, so Why did you write about him? There are also ancient witches. Only two of them have appeared so far. What other foreign lands are there now such as the Shark tribe? You haven't written these clearly yet, and you are adding new ones. It's a bit urgent and the overall picture is not enough, but overall it is good! Worth recommending!













