
The Collapse of the System in Super Theological Seminary
by The Ninth Son Of The Zhang Family
About This Novel
Congratulations on getting: Lightning Mei Yi Fragments*3 Congratulations on getting: Core of Reason*3 Congratulations on getting: A-level Valkyrie Kiana ! Brother D, labor and management can't beat you to death this time. Kiana bites him to death.
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Official(101)Scraped 8d ago
Apocalypse King Liang Bing is here for a visit
The subject matter is good and the imagination is quite big. I will leave a claw. Not giving full stars because of the outline and writing style For the fusion of Super God and Honkai, the outline setting might as well be a little bigger. Honkai is the will of nothingness, restarting the world for the sake of destruction. Then the fusion of Super God and Honkai can set the void to contain imaginary space, and the coming of Honkai is just a kind of devouring by the void. It can be set that the protagonist failed to eliminate Honkai in the original three Honkais, causing the world to collapse. At the critical moment, Himeko (tribute) sacrificed herself to break the world barrier and send Hyperion, the captain and the Valkyries to the super god world. At the same time, it also brought about Honkai. Second, the author's writing style is relatively immature, and the branching plots and characterizations seem hollow and inconsistent. I don't know if the author has skimmed the whole text and integrated it. I will write chapters according to the author. The protagonist is reborn through time and has a sister and obtains the Honkai System. Then he meets Xin Zhao, slaps the gangster in the face, summons Hyperion, and the sister is kidnapped by the gangster. At first glance, there's nothing wrong with it, but don't you think it's cliche? The reason why all orphans are reborn after time travel is because it's difficult to portray family members, as well as the handling of emotional lines and plot development. Let's change the perspective. The protagonist came to the Honkai World and failed to stop the Honkai Impact. The world was destroyed. Himeko sacrificed and gathered strength to forcefully break open the void space. He sent the degraded Valkyrie, Hyperion and the Captain to the Super God World, and settled in Grand Canyon City. Through the correction and influence of time and space, the Valkyries and the Captain had a profound influence on the Honkai Impact World. His memory was sealed, and Ai-chan arranged the protagonist's life in Grand Canyon City when the memory was about to be sealed. Hyperion and the Valkyries fell into a deep sleep. The protagonist was adopted in Grand Canyon City and had a younger sister. Before the start of the Chrysanthemum Cave, Ai-chan gradually recovered and gave the protagonist a differentiated subsystem to better understand and manage Hyperion. , In the process of unsealing Valkyrie and Hyperion, the protagonist encountered the threat of a gangster, which made the protagonist very angry and taught the gangster a lesson. At the same time, he summoned Hyperion to show his muscles and strength to the Grand Canyon City. Dukao sent Rose and the man in black to negotiate with the protagonist. The protagonist was not cold and expressed his feelings to the Grand Canyon City. Due to his own attitude, the gangsters in Juxia City were purged and imprisoned by the authorities. The protagonist had a peaceful and happy life in Juxia City for a while. Then the Chrysanthemum Wormhole opened. The Super Seminary wanted to cooperate with the protagonist to close the impulse. The protagonist hesitated because the gangster was not interested in the so-called official and refused the cooperation with the Super Seminary. The same outline, Xiaogang's branch and background, polish it up, and change the plot. Doesn't it look more reasonable? In my opinion, it is obvious that Hyperion was exposed in Grand Canyon City, which attracted the attention of the authorities. The Super Seminary even negotiated with the protagonist and his sister, and even let someone abduct your sister and put it on the roof. This plot arrangement is that the Super Seminary and the official have cooperation with you or national strategic cooperation. When the eyes are focused on the protagonist, such outrageous things can happen, holding Hugh in hand Berrian doesn't know how to use it. This is a deterrent that is no less than or even greater than nuclear weapons. It is impossible for the country not to pay attention, and it will definitely clean up the gangsters. There is no doubt that when Hyperion came, the army was sent out. The protagonist was in Grand Canyon City for one day. It is impossible to remove the military's attention. The army must be around Grand Canyon City. The army exists. How smart a gangster would start to kidnap the sister of a person who is highly valued by the military, especially when there is only one relative.
Honkai's combat power is still very strong As soon as the post-Honkai books came out, a large part of the worldview was completed. A leaf is a complete universe, and each universe is different There is fantasy, there is technology, there is cultivation, there is martial arts World Tree is the super multiverse
There are so few books in the Honkai Impact series that I have read on QQ. I hope I won't be a eunuch.
Himeko's Red Knight is made from the Herrscher core of the last civilization and the Blank Key. In the end, if Himeko couldn't bear Kiana's death, it wouldn't have struck the queen of the three cores. It can be seen that the Herrscher of the last civilization is more than a little bit stronger than the Herrscher of this civilization. Finally, I pay tribute to Himeko.
The protagonist's confusing behavior
1. Challenge others if you don't have the strength. If you don't have the strength, you just hold it in, and you actually dare to provoke a lot of people. 2. Make trouble for Dukao in the early stage. This person has contributed to the earth, and you should not fall out with him. The result is that an alien rolls off the earth in one bite? As long as he has a conspiracy to guard against, is it okay to be conceited? Wait until it's over and liquidate. The result is distrust internally and war externally. 3. Behaving childishly. Killing people just for a test, they all told me not to provoke the Xiongbing Company if they don't have the strength. The result is that I am the best in the world, saying that I am not wrong, but Dukao is wrong. He said such childish words without crushing the opponent's strength. Rules can be broken. The prerequisite for destruction is that you have the strength to overturn the chessboard. If you don't have the strength, you will die. Let's put it this way, in addition to the novel subject matter, the content is not as good as the cool writing. At least I'll give it 3 stars for the cool article.
reluctantly
I don't feel anything, and it's a little bit poisonous. But it depends on what you like! I just want to say that the protagonist is a bit weak, bullied, not very accomplished, a bit... Naive, not decisive, and has a bad personality. And the characters in Honkai Impact appear too slowly. The protagonist feels brainless... Subjective evaluation, no criticism, just personal opinion!
Complain, must complain
Just drag, all kinds of water! The speaker here is a bit cautious, but in the end, he took ten mortals, a B-level Mei and a castrated monkey to provoke a civilization from the top of the universe... The confidence you gave me? Who gave you confidence? It would be logical if you were carrying a double S, but what about you? Not doing it? Also, there are already divine machine troops, so why do we still need to harvest the indigenous forces? Are you twitching the beards of those big local guys? Do you really think others don't know anything? On the surface, I want to be stubborn, keep a low profile, and engage in inner drama, and then I start all kinds of honey operations... The battleship is exposed! Are you telling me how confident you are? Facing a big machine like a country, do you really think they can't do anything to you? Besides, you are still a weak piece of garbage without any strong protection. I really don't understand, why are there so many dramas? Not strong in strength, but soft in tone... He's really awesome... What do you think? As far as my current impression is concerned... It's really bad... He has no strength and likes to seek death. You said that if you have an S-class guard to watch you being so promiscuous, then I won't say anything. After all, you have the qualifications, but some of your operations are really seeking death... Although Super God Universe is very weak. But the civilizations within its system are not something that you, a mere mortal who has just gained a little strength, can challenge. I'm done, I feel relieved...
Opinion
Personal opinion... It is best not to add fantasy or anything else unless the fantasy power is not so abnormal or it will collapse easily. Moreover, the captain pit will definitely have collapse resistance. Not to mention, it should be equipped with advanced stigmata to improve physical fitness. Combat skills can be practiced. Also, the balance of power must be grasped. Don't write if you are not sure that it is compatible with this power. The most important thing is, isn't this savior worthy of appearing? Jiuxiao has a very considerable growth potential. It can have a certain combat power in the early stage and can explode in the later stage. And the most important thing is that you don't have to worry about dying. Apocalypse will be called as soon as the person is cold. If he changes his number, Kesha will be able to call him. And the most, most, most important thing... I am so fucking heavy after thirty draws! Day!
The Key of God is not the real power of the Herrscher, and neither is the Herrscher. He has never shown it.
What Key of God has produced are all abridged versions, because the power of a civilization on a planet can reach cosmic-level capabilities. Do you think it is possible? The Lawyer of Reason, who makes and copies everything You can understand it at a glance The Herrscher of Space, has absolute control over space, has the ability to open imaginary numbers, and can travel to the multiverse (the boundless universe on the World Tree and the sea) Herrscher of Thunder, one of the fundamental forces of the electromagnetic universe The Herrscher of Wind, Ideal Fluid, everyone knows how strong this is Herrscher of Ice, controls inorganic matter The Herrscher of Death, controlling DNA can allow life to evolve quickly and degenerate quickly, and has absolute control over genes. Herrscher of Fire, molecular control, omnipotent physics department The Herrscher of Knowledge can create multiple superpositions in illusions, and can even dream, making herself think that she has this ability, so she can use it, but there are side effects. The Herrscher of Rock has gravitational repulsion, can create black holes, and can freely control the scope of his abilities. The Thousand Herrschers have 1,000 people with special abilities. Their initial combat effectiveness is very weak, but they have great potential and have extremely strong latent ability. The Herrscher of Binding can block all energy, destroy living things, use electricity, light, and nuclear energy to power all energy, even the energy of the living things themselves. The Herrscher of Erosion, the absolute erosion of all things, can even despise conceptual space. Of course, this illusory thing also includes the consciousness of life. The types of computers can evolve infinitely and have no entity. Herrscher of the End, undefeatable, unwinnable, absolute control of energy, whether atoms have all the above abilities The existence of the quantum sea has the ability to control quantum. The specific name is unknown, the specific strength is unknown, and the specific ability is unknown.
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Official(101)Scraped 8d ago
Apocalypse King Liang Bing is here for a visit
The subject matter is good and the imagination is quite big. I will leave a claw. Not giving full stars because of the outline and writing style For the fusion of Super God and Honkai, the outline setting might as well be a little bigger. Honkai is the will of nothingness, restarting the world for the sake of destruction. Then the fusion of Super God and Honkai can set the void to contain imaginary space, and the coming of Honkai is just a kind of devouring by the void. It can be set that the protagonist failed to eliminate Honkai in the original three Honkais, causing the world to collapse. At the critical moment, Himeko (tribute) sacrificed herself to break the world barrier and send Hyperion, the captain and the Valkyries to the super god world. At the same time, it also brought about Honkai. Second, the author's writing style is relatively immature, and the branching plots and characterizations seem hollow and inconsistent. I don't know if the author has skimmed the whole text and integrated it. I will write chapters according to the author. The protagonist is reborn through time and has a sister and obtains the Honkai System. Then he meets Xin Zhao, slaps the gangster in the face, summons Hyperion, and the sister is kidnapped by the gangster. At first glance, there's nothing wrong with it, but don't you think it's cliche? The reason why all orphans are reborn after time travel is because it's difficult to portray family members, as well as the handling of emotional lines and plot development. Let's change the perspective. The protagonist came to the Honkai World and failed to stop the Honkai Impact. The world was destroyed. Himeko sacrificed and gathered strength to forcefully break open the void space. He sent the degraded Valkyrie, Hyperion and the Captain to the Super God World, and settled in Grand Canyon City. Through the correction and influence of time and space, the Valkyries and the Captain had a profound influence on the Honkai Impact World. His memory was sealed, and Ai-chan arranged the protagonist's life in Grand Canyon City when the memory was about to be sealed. Hyperion and the Valkyries fell into a deep sleep. The protagonist was adopted in Grand Canyon City and had a younger sister. Before the start of the Chrysanthemum Cave, Ai-chan gradually recovered and gave the protagonist a differentiated subsystem to better understand and manage Hyperion. , In the process of unsealing Valkyrie and Hyperion, the protagonist encountered the threat of a gangster, which made the protagonist very angry and taught the gangster a lesson. At the same time, he summoned Hyperion to show his muscles and strength to the Grand Canyon City. Dukao sent Rose and the man in black to negotiate with the protagonist. The protagonist was not cold and expressed his feelings to the Grand Canyon City. Due to his own attitude, the gangsters in Juxia City were purged and imprisoned by the authorities. The protagonist had a peaceful and happy life in Juxia City for a while. Then the Chrysanthemum Wormhole opened. The Super Seminary wanted to cooperate with the protagonist to close the impulse. The protagonist hesitated because the gangster was not interested in the so-called official and refused the cooperation with the Super Seminary. The same outline, Xiaogang's branch and background, polish it up, and change the plot. Doesn't it look more reasonable? In my opinion, it is obvious that Hyperion was exposed in Grand Canyon City, which attracted the attention of the authorities. The Super Seminary even negotiated with the protagonist and his sister, and even let someone abduct your sister and put it on the roof. This plot arrangement is that the Super Seminary and the official have cooperation with you or national strategic cooperation. When the eyes are focused on the protagonist, such outrageous things can happen, holding Hugh in hand Berrian doesn't know how to use it. This is a deterrent that is no less than or even greater than nuclear weapons. It is impossible for the country not to pay attention, and it will definitely clean up the gangsters. There is no doubt that when Hyperion came, the army was sent out. The protagonist was in Grand Canyon City for one day. It is impossible to remove the military's attention. The army must be around Grand Canyon City. The army exists. How smart a gangster would start to kidnap the sister of a person who is highly valued by the military, especially when there is only one relative.
Honkai's combat power is still very strong As soon as the post-Honkai books came out, a large part of the worldview was completed. A leaf is a complete universe, and each universe is different There is fantasy, there is technology, there is cultivation, there is martial arts World Tree is the super multiverse
There are so few books in the Honkai Impact series that I have read on QQ. I hope I won't be a eunuch.
Himeko's Red Knight is made from the Herrscher core of the last civilization and the Blank Key. In the end, if Himeko couldn't bear Kiana's death, it wouldn't have struck the queen of the three cores. It can be seen that the Herrscher of the last civilization is more than a little bit stronger than the Herrscher of this civilization. Finally, I pay tribute to Himeko.
The protagonist's confusing behavior
1. Challenge others if you don't have the strength. If you don't have the strength, you just hold it in, and you actually dare to provoke a lot of people. 2. Make trouble for Dukao in the early stage. This person has contributed to the earth, and you should not fall out with him. The result is that an alien rolls off the earth in one bite? As long as he has a conspiracy to guard against, is it okay to be conceited? Wait until it's over and liquidate. The result is distrust internally and war externally. 3. Behaving childishly. Killing people just for a test, they all told me not to provoke the Xiongbing Company if they don't have the strength. The result is that I am the best in the world, saying that I am not wrong, but Dukao is wrong. He said such childish words without crushing the opponent's strength. Rules can be broken. The prerequisite for destruction is that you have the strength to overturn the chessboard. If you don't have the strength, you will die. Let's put it this way, in addition to the novel subject matter, the content is not as good as the cool writing. At least I'll give it 3 stars for the cool article.
reluctantly
I don't feel anything, and it's a little bit poisonous. But it depends on what you like! I just want to say that the protagonist is a bit weak, bullied, not very accomplished, a bit... Naive, not decisive, and has a bad personality. And the characters in Honkai Impact appear too slowly. The protagonist feels brainless... Subjective evaluation, no criticism, just personal opinion!
Complain, must complain
Just drag, all kinds of water! The speaker here is a bit cautious, but in the end, he took ten mortals, a B-level Mei and a castrated monkey to provoke a civilization from the top of the universe... The confidence you gave me? Who gave you confidence? It would be logical if you were carrying a double S, but what about you? Not doing it? Also, there are already divine machine troops, so why do we still need to harvest the indigenous forces? Are you twitching the beards of those big local guys? Do you really think others don't know anything? On the surface, I want to be stubborn, keep a low profile, and engage in inner drama, and then I start all kinds of honey operations... The battleship is exposed! Are you telling me how confident you are? Facing a big machine like a country, do you really think they can't do anything to you? Besides, you are still a weak piece of garbage without any strong protection. I really don't understand, why are there so many dramas? Not strong in strength, but soft in tone... He's really awesome... What do you think? As far as my current impression is concerned... It's really bad... He has no strength and likes to seek death. You said that if you have an S-class guard to watch you being so promiscuous, then I won't say anything. After all, you have the qualifications, but some of your operations are really seeking death... Although Super God Universe is very weak. But the civilizations within its system are not something that you, a mere mortal who has just gained a little strength, can challenge. I'm done, I feel relieved...
Opinion
Personal opinion... It is best not to add fantasy or anything else unless the fantasy power is not so abnormal or it will collapse easily. Moreover, the captain pit will definitely have collapse resistance. Not to mention, it should be equipped with advanced stigmata to improve physical fitness. Combat skills can be practiced. Also, the balance of power must be grasped. Don't write if you are not sure that it is compatible with this power. The most important thing is, isn't this savior worthy of appearing? Jiuxiao has a very considerable growth potential. It can have a certain combat power in the early stage and can explode in the later stage. And the most important thing is that you don't have to worry about dying. Apocalypse will be called as soon as the person is cold. If he changes his number, Kesha will be able to call him. And the most, most, most important thing... I am so fucking heavy after thirty draws! Day!
The Key of God is not the real power of the Herrscher, and neither is the Herrscher. He has never shown it.
What Key of God has produced are all abridged versions, because the power of a civilization on a planet can reach cosmic-level capabilities. Do you think it is possible? The Lawyer of Reason, who makes and copies everything You can understand it at a glance The Herrscher of Space, has absolute control over space, has the ability to open imaginary numbers, and can travel to the multiverse (the boundless universe on the World Tree and the sea) Herrscher of Thunder, one of the fundamental forces of the electromagnetic universe The Herrscher of Wind, Ideal Fluid, everyone knows how strong this is Herrscher of Ice, controls inorganic matter The Herrscher of Death, controlling DNA can allow life to evolve quickly and degenerate quickly, and has absolute control over genes. Herrscher of Fire, molecular control, omnipotent physics department The Herrscher of Knowledge can create multiple superpositions in illusions, and can even dream, making herself think that she has this ability, so she can use it, but there are side effects. The Herrscher of Rock has gravitational repulsion, can create black holes, and can freely control the scope of his abilities. The Thousand Herrschers have 1,000 people with special abilities. Their initial combat effectiveness is very weak, but they have great potential and have extremely strong latent ability. The Herrscher of Binding can block all energy, destroy living things, use electricity, light, and nuclear energy to power all energy, even the energy of the living things themselves. The Herrscher of Erosion, the absolute erosion of all things, can even despise conceptual space. Of course, this illusory thing also includes the consciousness of life. The types of computers can evolve infinitely and have no entity. Herrscher of the End, undefeatable, unwinnable, absolute control of energy, whether atoms have all the above abilities The existence of the quantum sea has the ability to control quantum. The specific name is unknown, the specific strength is unknown, and the specific ability is unknown.































