Naruto's Strongest Door

The so-called Daozi seems tacky in the author's writing, inconsistent with the setting, and there are some poisonous points, such as forcing the protagonist to be in the spotlight, the writing is too deliberate, and the part where Konan is accepted as a maid all lowers the quality of the work. It was originally a relatively grand setting, but it was tainted with some small patterns.

To judge whether a book is good or bad to your own taste, it is better to read it yourself.

The protagonist needs reputation to summon characters, but you're going in the wrong direction. The most common people in the ninja world are ordinary people. Even if everyone gives you 0.1 Reputation, 11 million can give you as much as you want. And then you have a relationship with Konoha and you can't get enough of Konoha's people. Later, he went to the Kingdom of Water to save the lost warehouse. What good would a peaceful Kingdom of Water do to you? The more chaos you preach to help the victims, the more you can get. If you write like this, you can basically guess what you are going to write next.

In fact, I think this would be better. As the introduction said, the prehistoric top secrets are revealed one by one. It is not a summoning flow like the system, but a real Taoist sect. The protagonist is really a Taoist, and is protected by people sent from the sect. The subject matter is still good.

Personally, I felt that the writing was confusing. It was mentioned earlier that the main character wanted fame to become stronger, in order to unify the ninja world and spread the orthodoxy. Then you took Konan as a maid, went to Kirigakure Village to develop the economy, then went to Sunagakure Village to develop oil, and then asked Orochimaru to study oil. Needless to say, Kabuto's attitude towards Orochimaru is a solid supporter, and Orochimaru is not dead. However, with just a few words, Obito asked Kabuto to give up Orochimaru and use the Earth Reincarnation to cooperate with him in the fight against the ninja world. Then by Shiro, he became one of the three Jinchuuriki. What happened? Is there any foreshadowing? He just did it hastily, and Kaguya came out with a backhand, and Kaguya was resurrected. At that time, Madara had to activate the infinite Tsukuyomi and absorb the chakra of the entire ninja world before Kaguya could be resurrected. As a result, Obito was resurrected as soon as he absorbed Kaguya, the sacred tree. This is nothing. As for the inheritance issue, what the hell, you can't even leave an inheritance. Do you understand what inheritance means? If inheritance will make you lose that thing, who will keep the inheritance? It was originally a good book, but it was ruined by me (I also paid to read it, if you don't like it, don't read my comments if you don't agree with my point of view, I'm too lazy to pay attention to those trolls)

By the way, if the author writes about cultivating immortals later, he must know that there has never been a Daluo Jinxian in Taoism.

The writing is very good, and it incorporates other anime characters. If the fighting scenes were written with more details, I strongly hope there is no female protagonist.

The protagonist can summon: the Taoist boss from Pili Puppet Show

Author, I feel that if you do this, will the plot be messed up by you? You said that the power system will not collapse, but what will you do if the plot system collapses? If the person summoned by the protagonist is too strong, will it collapse? I feel that if you summon others, don't summon those who are too strong later, and add more strength to the protagonist. My personal suggestion is, if you don't like it, don't complain!

I have read the author from Qin Shi's novel. Although you did not write the last one well, I hope you will write more Chinese comics. There should be no shortage of you among the three major Japanese comics for migrant workers.