Thank You for the Invitation. People Were Very Busy During the Colonial Era
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[New book "Please Don't Eat Me!" "Already online, there are all kinds of animal ears, Furui's paradise! Traveling back to the 17th century Rhode Island colony in North America, I asked a local gentleman: How should I live a decent life here? He said: Oh, people of God, it's very simple, you just need to bring a little good luck, and then step on the deck of the Atlantic route. When you get to Africa, there is "wild gold" walking everywhere... ...
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Official(7)Scraped 9d ago
You asked me to comment, so I will just give you a few comments.
The writing is quite good, and it makes people want to read it. However, it is understandable that the protagonist has a harem, but if he wants to recruit a subordinate, he must be a woman. If he wants to recruit a subordinate, he must be a woman. It is very speechless. His background is not so many girls who yearn for freedom, as well as those black slaves. Those with vested interests will not think about liberating their interests. If he is a powerful person, he will not do this. If he is a civilian, it will be difficult to live. And the combat power is not too ugly. It is similar to Pirates of the Caribbean. There are some legends and ancient creatures, there are also some simple but interesting spells, and some gods. Although the others are not perfect. But it is a novel after all. As long as there is a desire for people to watch it.
It still feels good to read, and the history is a bit fantasy, but there are too many female characters in more than 30 chapters, including a female pirate, a female slave, a female noble, and a female sailor. The suspected female apprentice hasn't done it yet.
There are many illogical places, where is the protagonist's capital?
The subject matter is well chosen, but unfortunately the writing is too messy and has no main thread, making it impossible to read.
What bullshit are you writing? In the Age of Discovery, there were less than three hundred sailors on Galen's ship. You were thrown to death along the way. Your destination is hell. Was he born to make money or reincarnate? Too casual to have fun
To be honest, the novel is quite well written, but the author is really perverted. He is a time traveler who spends all his time on the ship thinking about raising women and taming female slaves. When he sees a woman, he wants to get on board. Moreover, it is such a big ship and no one else knows that all the people on the ship are blind. If you write the adventure well, it will be quite successful, but the result is that it must be mixed with shit and disgusting.
The front is okay, the back is a bit worse.
To be honest, the first part was okay, but Chapter 46 was really poorly written.
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Official(7)Scraped 9d ago
You asked me to comment, so I will just give you a few comments.
The writing is quite good, and it makes people want to read it. However, it is understandable that the protagonist has a harem, but if he wants to recruit a subordinate, he must be a woman. If he wants to recruit a subordinate, he must be a woman. It is very speechless. His background is not so many girls who yearn for freedom, as well as those black slaves. Those with vested interests will not think about liberating their interests. If he is a powerful person, he will not do this. If he is a civilian, it will be difficult to live. And the combat power is not too ugly. It is similar to Pirates of the Caribbean. There are some legends and ancient creatures, there are also some simple but interesting spells, and some gods. Although the others are not perfect. But it is a novel after all. As long as there is a desire for people to watch it.
It still feels good to read, and the history is a bit fantasy, but there are too many female characters in more than 30 chapters, including a female pirate, a female slave, a female noble, and a female sailor. The suspected female apprentice hasn't done it yet.
There are many illogical places, where is the protagonist's capital?
The subject matter is well chosen, but unfortunately the writing is too messy and has no main thread, making it impossible to read.
What bullshit are you writing? In the Age of Discovery, there were less than three hundred sailors on Galen's ship. You were thrown to death along the way. Your destination is hell. Was he born to make money or reincarnate? Too casual to have fun
To be honest, the novel is quite well written, but the author is really perverted. He is a time traveler who spends all his time on the ship thinking about raising women and taming female slaves. When he sees a woman, he wants to get on board. Moreover, it is such a big ship and no one else knows that all the people on the ship are blind. If you write the adventure well, it will be quite successful, but the result is that it must be mixed with shit and disgusting.
The front is okay, the back is a bit worse.
To be honest, the first part was okay, but Chapter 46 was really poorly written.
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