I Ask for Immortality with the Heart of the Sword
by Shang Yue W
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In troubled times, monsters are encountered, and the hidden dragon is frightened into sleep. In this world there are Buddhas, demons, immortals, demons, incense and fire, divine ways, and the underworld. Buddha can cast down demons with his angry eyes, and demons can swallow up the sun and moon. Shen Daoyi traveled here and stepped through the three layers of cause and effect with his sword: The first level kills all the demons and monsters, the second level breaks the barrier of immortality, and the third level asks questions above Qingming. Rising at the end of Qingping, he stepped out of the blue sky with his mortal body.
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
Let's have a few words with everyone.
I feel that the future plots will become more and more urgent as I write them, and I have also consulted the old author Wanding for advice. I believe everyone can also feel that the whole story is becoming more and more routine. As I write further down, I feel that everyone will know the follow-up content just by reading the title. The main problem is actually that before each previous part is explained clearly, it has already jumped to the next part. The more questions and loopholes accumulate, the more unclear it becomes. The sense of substitution has been broken before it is established. In fact, I can feel it myself as I am reading less and less every day recently. The plot of the immortal sermon should be pulled out after 400,000 to 500,000 words to complete the world view. Because the data is too poor, I made my own decision and mentioned it earlier, so it seems very abrupt. Several friends have said before that I am suitable for the style of telling stories in a eloquent way, but the problem now is that my writing is getting more and more messy. In my mind, there is a sentence in Chapter 7, "The setting sun burns the sunset red". I struggled for a long time about what word to use, and finally settled on "burn". After writing 150,000 words, I slowly realized that the words used for details are not unimportant. What is important is whether the story is attractive enough. Telling a complete story is the most important thing. But now that I'm writing it, I'm just formulating the "structure" of each story quickly, but the most important story itself is unclear and confusing, so I'm putting the cart before the horse. In fact, I have written almost 150,000 words now, and I will write another 50,000 words before it can be published on Chaquanqin. But that would be putting the cart before the horse. I originally came here to tell a good story. This is my first time writing a long novel, and I have stepped into many pitfalls. I should review it carefully. I am going to revise and sort out the outline and previous content of this book, and adjust the rhythm. It is currently a free chapter, so I won't put it on the shelves to deceive people. That's it~ Thank you everyone for seeing this, I'm really sorry.
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
Let's have a few words with everyone.
I feel that the future plots will become more and more urgent as I write them, and I have also consulted the old author Wanding for advice. I believe everyone can also feel that the whole story is becoming more and more routine. As I write further down, I feel that everyone will know the follow-up content just by reading the title. The main problem is actually that before each previous part is explained clearly, it has already jumped to the next part. The more questions and loopholes accumulate, the more unclear it becomes. The sense of substitution has been broken before it is established. In fact, I can feel it myself as I am reading less and less every day recently. The plot of the immortal sermon should be pulled out after 400,000 to 500,000 words to complete the world view. Because the data is too poor, I made my own decision and mentioned it earlier, so it seems very abrupt. Several friends have said before that I am suitable for the style of telling stories in a eloquent way, but the problem now is that my writing is getting more and more messy. In my mind, there is a sentence in Chapter 7, "The setting sun burns the sunset red". I struggled for a long time about what word to use, and finally settled on "burn". After writing 150,000 words, I slowly realized that the words used for details are not unimportant. What is important is whether the story is attractive enough. Telling a complete story is the most important thing. But now that I'm writing it, I'm just formulating the "structure" of each story quickly, but the most important story itself is unclear and confusing, so I'm putting the cart before the horse. In fact, I have written almost 150,000 words now, and I will write another 50,000 words before it can be published on Chaquanqin. But that would be putting the cart before the horse. I originally came here to tell a good story. This is my first time writing a long novel, and I have stepped into many pitfalls. I should review it carefully. I am going to revise and sort out the outline and previous content of this book, and adjust the rhythm. It is currently a free chapter, so I won't put it on the shelves to deceive people. That's it~ Thank you everyone for seeing this, I'm really sorry.
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