Immortal, I Can Transfer the Price
About This Novel
Immortals and Buddhas are in decline, the system is in chaos, and evil spirits are making a comeback. Li Songxi wants to survive in troubled times. There are not many righteous paths to practice here, and practice often comes with a price, but the price can be transferred to others conditionally. At the beginning, he understood the "Evil-Repelling Sword Manual" and swung his sword from the palace at the cost. So, just when a certain villain he couldn't afford to offend for the time being was about to be free and happy... No more.
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Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
Thoughts after reading the first 10 chapters
There are three conscious mistakes and omissions: 1. The price of warding off evil is not a one-time thing. Doesn't it mean that the internal force that is running in the body all the time also flows through the body of the person who pays the price? 2. The description of "small county town" is too rich. I suggest you refer to "Water Margin". 3. There is too much self-talk. Sometimes a judgment does not require more words to explain why, because the reader already has an answer in their mind, and it will inevitably be offensive if you write it again.
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Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
Thoughts after reading the first 10 chapters
There are three conscious mistakes and omissions: 1. The price of warding off evil is not a one-time thing. Doesn't it mean that the internal force that is running in the body all the time also flows through the body of the person who pays the price? 2. The description of "small county town" is too rich. I suggest you refer to "Water Margin". 3. There is too much self-talk. Sometimes a judgment does not require more words to explain why, because the reader already has an answer in their mind, and it will inevitably be offensive if you write it again.
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