Immortality: Fairy, Don't Run Away, Cao is a Good Person

To put it bluntly, this book is just a headline-grabber. It is similar to a farming novel. It is all about daily trivial matters. The plot progress is extremely slow, and there are several poisonous points, which are very serious. First, the protagonist has the memory of his original body, but he behaves like an idiot. For example, he doesn't understand the exercises, and ignores the exercises he majored in. Did he find the exercises by looking through his memory? ? ? Isn't it possible to think of fused memory with just one thought? What the hell is this rummaging about? Even if you have traveled through time, shouldn't the first and most important thing after you settle down be to thoroughly absorb all your memories? Shouldn't you have a general idea of ​​the world as a whole? Why did you write the protagonist as mentally retarded? One question and three questions? Second, writing your own experiences into novels and publishing them is very poisonous. You are afraid that others will not be able to find you. If a powerful person comes and wants to find you, he will directly search the soul of the shopkeeper who distributed the book and kill him. You can't run away. Your so-called help in hiding your identity is a joke. Anyone who has read villain articles and writes his own experiences into novels is too good to kill, for fear that others will not be able to catch you. Third, the essence of the system is to find high-quality women to have sex with, but it was written into a romance novel. I even doubted that it was on a female channel. Niuniannian was still playing Wei Guangzheng's tricks, forcing the rhythm to drag on, and opening a harem to grind. I don't know what kind of devil you are. With this kind of obsession, wouldn't it make sense for you to write it as a slutty devil? Fourth, this book feels like a scenario drama, as if there is nothing to write about in this world. All the plots are limited to a small range, which makes the readers feel very depressed and have no room for imagination. I suspect that you have not even conceived the outline world view of the entire novel. You are writing about a demon emperor. At your pace, you have to wait until the main plot is connected. Do you want to delay it until after two thousand chapters? I'm sorry, others are already in the fairy world in 200 chapters and have a complete world view. Why should readers pay for your slow pace?

What is August 15th? I don't understand.

Taste, taste, taste. Worth having