Reborn as a Demon, I Became a Totem as a Full-time Mage

There is no highlight in your fan fiction, so there is no doubt that if you change the title of this book and don't take advantage of the popularity of the original work, almost no one will care about it. There are thousands of fan fictions out there, and they are all as bad as history. Don't be discouraged, after all, fan fiction is all about being bad, and you're not the worst one.

Here I would like to emphasize again that although the protagonist is a totem, he is not blindly kneeling down to lick the holy mother of mankind. On the contrary, he just wants to use humans to gain reputation and worship points to enhance his strength. The reason why I turned into a human form is also very simple. How can I contact humans if I don't turn into a human? I don't need to tell you how the totem beasts are treated. Even the totem black snake is framed and missed by others. I don't want to be a human being and go to the human world to provide food for others! The totem identity will not be exposed in a short period of time. The human identity is just a tool to gain reputation and worship points. To put it bluntly, I am just using humans to become stronger. By the way, I haven't even written about the human world yet. How did you see that I was kneeling and licking humans? ! !

Why does this feel like a person wearing a demon's skin? It's better to just write about a human being.

If you want to write a full-time demon, but you can't write it well and the setting is messy, why not write a demon from Chinese mythology, a full-time unique demon. Throughout Quanshu. Com, the protagonists of the good books on traveling through other worlds all have their own set of upgraded names. Even though you are a monster, you can't cover up the ordinary fact by raising banners. You are okay as a supporting role. The protagonist is not bright enough. No matter how powerful you are, you are still very loud. There is no passion, no resourcefulness, and the writing style is worse than vernacular. If you write a fanfic for your first book, you can just ride on the popularity of the title. Full Time is a good book. How much of your own writing can you write? Can't get on the stage

You need ability but not ability, you need strength but not strength, you need to learn but not learn, and you don't need anything. What are you just commenting on? Things that cannot be seen or received in a person. It's not relying on the system, what an idiot. A pure wage earner, isn't this just a mess of collecting luck and stuff. Rubbish

It's better to read this book about demons than to read the one about the man who turned into a wolf.

The fact that the system is intelligent is not written well, and I can't see its use. It may become a poisonous point later, just like writing an emotional essay. If it is not well written, it is better not to write it.

The protagonist is so weak, Mo Fan. Even at the mid-level, he can deal with generals alone. The protagonist also has five times the increase of spiritual seeds and totems. He can't kill a general at once. What an idiot. And with the size of the monster, you have seen several monsters that can dodge magic. Moreover, the skill of Fist is a large-scale skill, not a single one.

From the beginning of Chapter 120 to Chapter 243 of Zhen Neng Shui, the main character's strength is that he is motionless. Also, if you talk about becoming a human to gain reputation, you started with 120 cards and ended up with more than 240 cards. You didn't move at all. Just rely on your mother. How many monsters can be caught by the Hunter Association? That's a lot of reputation. Whenever you write about joining the army, you just make up a few plots, and the reputation of tmd is not rising suddenly. Now let's talk about your flattery, I can accept you making a little bit more, but if you have flattered hundreds of photos, isn't it a bit too much? This thing is just a person in demon skin. It's not interesting at all. The first few dozen chapters are okay, but by the end of it, oh, it's so disgusting.

I didn't want to read it as soon as I read it. The worst review was written by a genius. First of all, isn't it good to specialize in cultivating the bloodline body? You have to learn magic to make it funny. Even the emperor's five forbidden spells can't be defeated. What's the use of magic? Just a magical power can spread the world.