Against the Odds, Everything Started with Jia Baoyu
by Big Cats Love To Eat Braised Pork
About This Novel
Traveling through Jia Baoyu, the future is doomed to be miserable. But with the advent of the fighting system, as long as you have a passionate heart and keep fighting, you can become stronger without limit. Inside, forcefully destroy evil slaves, reverse family traditions, and beat unworthy elders. In addition, he was the top scholar in high school, became the prince-in-law, conquered the Liangshan Mountains and exterminated the foreign races, and became the champion candidate. In this way, Jia Baoyu gradually became the new emperor of the dynasty... It wasn't until the day he ascended the throne, when the heavenly soldiers and heavenly generals descended to earth, that he realized that he had a great background! "Jia Baoyu, the demon from the lower realm! You were a stone monkey and were punished by heaven to be mutilated and reincarnated. You should have been turned into ashes. However, God has the virtue of a good life, and the Jade Emperor has issued an order, allowing you to abolish your cultivation and be imprisoned in the heavenly prison forever. If you don't obey, you will be struck by lightning and fire, and you will never be reincarnated! "
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Official(2)Scraped 13d ago
Too wordy
The plot is okay, but it's too wordy. Also, I've said it over and over again, and things are moving too slowly. I'm not saying that I want you to move at a fast pace, but it's equivalent to saying you've eaten, you've eaten vegetables, you've eaten cabbage, you've eaten fried vegetables, you've eaten braised vegetables, you can't say it's wordy.
I feel like you will collapse if you write like this
For example, if you don't grasp the level of immortal cultivation, you may end up writing a bad book.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 13d ago
Too wordy
The plot is okay, but it's too wordy. Also, I've said it over and over again, and things are moving too slowly. I'm not saying that I want you to move at a fast pace, but it's equivalent to saying you've eaten, you've eaten vegetables, you've eaten cabbage, you've eaten fried vegetables, you've eaten braised vegetables, you can't say it's wordy.
I feel like you will collapse if you write like this
For example, if you don't grasp the level of immortal cultivation, you may end up writing a bad book.
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