I Am the Same Author, Starting from Douluo and Plundering the Heavens

The martial soul is a five-clawed golden dragon, but he has been focusing on studying ninjutsu. All the skills of the five-clawed golden dragon are also ninjutsu. The five-clawed golden dragon belongs to the Japanese. When did China become a satellite state of the Japanese?

It's all nonsense from beginning to end, and it always does some mindless things. None of the three martial arts can be used directly. The starting setting is set so high, and then the whole process is done with brute force and self-created soul skills. The martial arts are of no use at all. The most ridiculous thing is the Sanshengwu. The soul set an innate level two, and then it took more than half a year to reach the tenth level. As a result, the first soul ring had to be a 40,000-year-old one. I mentioned earlier that other novels always got the first ring of ten thousand years, and said that others were unreasonable and so on. But it turned out that I was also like this.

Yes, the plot doesn't move forward very quickly, so it seems that the author may want to write a long story. The power system is also expressed well, and the degree of enjoyment is there but not very compact. There are many explanations in the early stage, which is acceptable for the setting party, but it is a bit slow for the plot party, the abuse party, the fun party, and the refreshing party. Can be accelerated appropriately. Overall, it's great. It's the best among fandoms. It's not poisonous and has no big bugs. Five stars. 👍

The sister Mei who was created at the beginning didn't even get a chance to appear. Why did you portray her? I always feel that your role was wasted. I just read the free chapter at the beginning, and I think it's okay. Although it's a bit long-winded, I can still read it. I hope you'll keep reading. Unlike the two books "The Heavens, From Douluo Begins to Fall Ink" and "From the Power of Space to the Heavens", it seems that they are written by two authors. My God, from the settings to the writing methods, they are almost exactly the same. I don't know how you set it here, but these two authors put Shura, Angel, Luo They are set as husband and wife, angels and Rakshasa are fighting for Shura, and finally the Douluo chapter is over and the family is reunited, which is really speechless; the writing method is the same, Luo Li is so embarrassed, three-quarters of the article explains why he did this, what his psychological thoughts are, it is the same as writing for water I told them later that the settings were the same, but they still couldn't send. It was really speechless.

A bunch of nonsense about the original work, there are modifiers, and you still learn things from others, modifiers are such a big deal...

The plot is too drawn out, too complicated, and too complicated. There is no need. If it is Zhu Tianwen, even the first dungeon of Douluo with 150 chapters is enough.

The subject matter is good, but it's too verbose. It has more than 100 chapters and I'm still six years old, and I'm just enjoying myself all by myself.

The ideas are clear and the martial arts soul skills are designed to be sophisticated. However, other aspects, such as the plot arrangement, are very childish and strange. Moreover, for the sake of the so-called plot point, the protagonist is placed in a strange circle that follows the original plot. If the plot is crazy, use detailed introduction skills, original plot, character description, source word count and all kinds of forced explanations. . It looks so awkward! There is an Ultimate Douluo by his side, but it is not as satisfying as Wu Nao Shuang Wen's routine, pretending to be a cross all the way and fight to the end!

. . . Fighting a Titan at level 10 at the age of six is ​​really outrageous, bro. If you want to write a cool article, why do you need so much foreshadowing?

A lot of crap. He kept talking to himself there. This can get 8 points? Spend money! ! !