People Are in the Mortal World, Looking Down at the Wilderness

There aren't many that I can read in one go. It's so good that I can hardly find it. It's just too short and not enough to watch. Are you thinking about the ending?

I have written so much, but there are no comments yet?

1. When we write a novel, can we look at the setting? In that barbaric place of the ancient times, where did the porcelain come from? You still take the porcelain from the ancient times and sell it in modern times. 2. Innate and acquired. This is not a hierarchical division. It is not the acquired realm returning to the innate realm in martial arts. If you can master the innate treasure all at once, then where did the Qiankun Ding come from? 3. Time is respected and space is king. Destiny does not come out, cause and effect reigns supreme. When you come here, time is king and space is respected. If you really don't know, just check Baidu to see if it works. 4. Saints can be killed by ordinary Holy Spirits just because of their seal cultivation. Don't you look down on saints too much? Saints live as long as heaven and earth. They are immortal and immortal. Even with seal cultivation, ordinary beings cannot touch porcelain. This is not the Meteorite Pill. 5. Kong Xuan and Dapeng are the sons of the Phoenix. When it comes to you, Kong Xuan is almost the Chaos Demon God. 6. As a person living in a sandbox, don't you think it's ridiculous that you can affect the world outside the box? 7. Taishang Laojun is a young man? Oh my God, look at the current novel. In the movie, the Supreme Lord is a young man. Isn't this nonsense? 8. Taoist Duobao is the senior brother of Jiejiao. Look at the novel in which Duobao is a human race. According to your setting, Taoist Hongjun Butian only started to practice. How long will it take for Duobao to join Jiejiao, let alone become a senior brother? Do you think that a person can become a quasi-sage as soon as he can practice and convince other disciples? Is he still a human being? Not to mention convincing other disciples, aren't you writing nonsense? Master Hongdu is a disciple of Laojun. He is the first in his generation in terms of seniority and is the senior brother of the three religions. 9. If you insist on saying it's your setting, just pretend I didn't. Forget it, I won't read it anymore. I guess the author is just a jerk. He doesn't even know what he wrote. The more I read, the more I want to curse.

Chapter 89 Directly persuade you to quit? What are you writing about? You have to take two sips of the poison. It took a long time to lay the groundwork. Couldn't it be written in a more enjoyable way? One bite of poison poisoned me to death. I was immediately persuaded to quit. No one can even write such poisonous points.