
The Demon King of Douluo
About This Novel
The Douluo fanfic, Invincible flow, is a bit biased towards farming and the main line of the original Douluo novel. It is almost finished now. It is the author's first work. I still hope someone can come and comment on it more, hahaha. No one is recommending the new book "Dragon Ball: The Starting System Runs Away", so just promote it yourself. Don't worry, the author has learned his lesson and it is absolutely non-toxic! The new book "Boten: Starting from Scaring Muzan Away", Joten-ryu, tentatively includes Demon Slayer, Inuyasha, and Naruto. The other worlds are still being thought about. (This book is extremely poisonous. Don't read it. The author himself will be poisonous if he looks back.)
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Official(195)Scraped 7d ago
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Can there be a female protagonist? It would be better if she is a self-created one, otherwise there are so many female protagonists like Qian Renxue, Xiao Wu, Bibi Dong, etc., And I can't even figure out who their boyfriend is.
Author: I feel like my eyes can still evolve
The first: Ao Hongchen, the second: Break through all realms, the third: Bury three lives, the fourth: Punish the world, the sixth: Chaos Yin and Yang, the seventh: fix the universe, the ninth: Falling stars Bury three lives: previous life, next life I don't know about the other ones. I feel like the author could have evolved his eyes a little bit and made them have double celestial eyes. Isn't that flattering😚
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I've been reading it for so long and I still don't know who the heroine is. Or is there no heroine in this book at all?
Tell me about the shortcomings of the book
After reading more than 20 chapters, I think the setting of the protagonist is okay. As for following the original plot, I have no objection. After all, if you are not capable, it will easily be much more boring than the original. It is better to change the original plot. As for the rating, giving two extra stars is to encourage the author's efforts. Looking at the entire book alone, it can only be given one star. After reading more than twenty chapters, I felt like I was reading the outline of a novel. The descriptions of characters, the details of each plot point, the connection of the plot, and the battle scenes were so bad that I don't know if they will be corrected in the future, but at least the first few dozen chapters are very convincing. Generally speaking, it feels boring and difficult to resonate with readers emotionally. That's it. I rarely write comments, and they are still such long comments. I just saw that the author has worked hard to write a lot, and I want to give my opinions. Come on.
Reading this book from beginning to end, not a single chapter was missed.
Read this book from beginning to end without missing a chapter! But the protagonist feels very useless to me. After all, the protagonist already has a golden finger, which is very unnatural, and he still knows the plot, but he still needs to be so useless! ? The whole book has been promoting the idea that Tang San is the "protagonist" and is being cared for by a master of destiny and blessed by luck, and I can't mess with him! (The writing of the book is good, but it's hard to figure out who the protagonist is, or the "protagonist" with a golden finger)
So-so
It's like a running account, and there are masters who think you are too useless and recommend you Huang Dou Academy. Can you tolerate this? ? ? If it were me, I would go to Huangdou Academy, find Dugu Bo from Dugu Yan first, and get all the celestial herbs in Shrek's eyes of ice and fire, which are the basis for becoming a god. Then in the Soul Master Academy Elite Tournament, he brutally tortured Shrek and swollen the master's face to see if he still had the nerve! Are you going to lick Shrek like this? ? ? ? ? ?
lick 🐶
Licking all the way, following all the way, no plot of his own
Author's question
What is the time difference between Douluo Continent and God Realm? For example, ten thousand years have passed in the Douluo Continent, and a relatively short period of time has passed in the God Realm, right?
running account
The plot is boring to the core, and the writing style is dull and boring without any sense of substitution. I thought it was because I didn't get into the main plot. But as I continued to be patient, I discovered that I was wrong... Should this novel be called... A record of the protagonist's life? Okay, I'm at a loss for words, but that's what it means Summary: If you can't sleep at night, you can watch it
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Official(195)Scraped 7d ago
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Can there be a female protagonist? It would be better if she is a self-created one, otherwise there are so many female protagonists like Qian Renxue, Xiao Wu, Bibi Dong, etc., And I can't even figure out who their boyfriend is.
Author: I feel like my eyes can still evolve
The first: Ao Hongchen, the second: Break through all realms, the third: Bury three lives, the fourth: Punish the world, the sixth: Chaos Yin and Yang, the seventh: fix the universe, the ninth: Falling stars Bury three lives: previous life, next life I don't know about the other ones. I feel like the author could have evolved his eyes a little bit and made them have double celestial eyes. Isn't that flattering😚
author
I've been reading it for so long and I still don't know who the heroine is. Or is there no heroine in this book at all?
Tell me about the shortcomings of the book
After reading more than 20 chapters, I think the setting of the protagonist is okay. As for following the original plot, I have no objection. After all, if you are not capable, it will easily be much more boring than the original. It is better to change the original plot. As for the rating, giving two extra stars is to encourage the author's efforts. Looking at the entire book alone, it can only be given one star. After reading more than twenty chapters, I felt like I was reading the outline of a novel. The descriptions of characters, the details of each plot point, the connection of the plot, and the battle scenes were so bad that I don't know if they will be corrected in the future, but at least the first few dozen chapters are very convincing. Generally speaking, it feels boring and difficult to resonate with readers emotionally. That's it. I rarely write comments, and they are still such long comments. I just saw that the author has worked hard to write a lot, and I want to give my opinions. Come on.
Reading this book from beginning to end, not a single chapter was missed.
Read this book from beginning to end without missing a chapter! But the protagonist feels very useless to me. After all, the protagonist already has a golden finger, which is very unnatural, and he still knows the plot, but he still needs to be so useless! ? The whole book has been promoting the idea that Tang San is the "protagonist" and is being cared for by a master of destiny and blessed by luck, and I can't mess with him! (The writing of the book is good, but it's hard to figure out who the protagonist is, or the "protagonist" with a golden finger)
So-so
It's like a running account, and there are masters who think you are too useless and recommend you Huang Dou Academy. Can you tolerate this? ? ? If it were me, I would go to Huangdou Academy, find Dugu Bo from Dugu Yan first, and get all the celestial herbs in Shrek's eyes of ice and fire, which are the basis for becoming a god. Then in the Soul Master Academy Elite Tournament, he brutally tortured Shrek and swollen the master's face to see if he still had the nerve! Are you going to lick Shrek like this? ? ? ? ? ?
lick 🐶
Licking all the way, following all the way, no plot of his own
Author's question
What is the time difference between Douluo Continent and God Realm? For example, ten thousand years have passed in the Douluo Continent, and a relatively short period of time has passed in the God Realm, right?
running account
The plot is boring to the core, and the writing style is dull and boring without any sense of substitution. I thought it was because I didn't get into the main plot. But as I continued to be patient, I discovered that I was wrong... Should this novel be called... A record of the protagonist's life? Okay, I'm at a loss for words, but that's what it means Summary: If you can't sleep at night, you can watch it
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(It may require TJ, but it basically doesn't affect it. The content before it is put on the shelf has already become a god, and the following can be read according to personal needs) Protagonist: Zhou Ming Time: Dou 1 Camp: early stage with Shrek Martial spirit: eyes Heroine: Luo Xin'er (the catwoman bought by Ning Fengzhi at the auction house) Systematic, similar to invincible flow He has not participated in the Continental Senior Soul Master Elite Competition, some background settings of Dou 2 have been incorporated, and he has not entered the Douluo God Realm.




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