Creating the Mythical Hokage: Eviscerating the Bones at the Beginning and Returning the Father

I think Luo Liba is so arrogant and the author is just enjoying himself.

Because being affected by Asura's chakra, in essence, this influence may not be good or bad. A baby with a blank sheet of paper will naturally be dyed in the color of Asura and become a good person. Is it a bad thing to force-educate a baby who is destined to have great power to become a good person? It's hard to say! But for a time traveler, it is like a part of the self that has been forcibly "formatted". A piece of paper that is already filled with words is dyed with its own color by Asura chakra. Many words will definitely be covered. Part of yourself will inevitably be lost. This is definitely unacceptable, and we can only try our best to find a way to resist... (Book lovers who don't like guessing can read Chapter 28 first, and then go back and read from the beginning; book friends who don't mind too much are advised to read from the beginning, as the spoiler-free experience will be better) The foreshadowing of this part of the opening is not pretentious; The ultimate goal is to overdo it reasonably and lead to the imaginative plot of "The List of Gods", I hope book friends can be a little more patient. Please pay attention to the words "big imagination" and "clear ideas" in the tags. In essence, it is an intellectual article that is as reasonable as possible. Thank you!

It's imaginative, but it's not suitable for novices. Although it's a bit hurtful to say this, novices have too many limitations. They care about a little bit of inherent plot and self-awareness. After all, it's better to not let go of yourself and limit yourself. I have been chasing books for seven or eight years. I no longer care about the so-called plot, and a running account is fine. I only care about whether the author can write something new, innovative and creative. This is what I need. In addition, the author should write well and don't worry about these bad things.

As for the topic, it's getting further and further away from the title.

How can I become a celestial being after practicing chakra, and the description of Kyuubi is so awesome that I feel stupid, is this talking about the big orange fox in Naruto? It's really a good second grade, I'm already touching the ground with my toes...

Wouldn't it be better to wait until the plan is implemented or reveal it after the fact? However, too many readers said that the title did not match the content, and cursed that the title was being used instead of the dog's meat... Therefore, Chapter 20 was written in "outline style", A small part of the bottom was uncovered, I hope you can think about it a little bit, How could the "funeral" be grand enough without all the preparations in advance? Not being murderous enough and not being able to let Konoha fall apart after death would only make you look ridiculous and stupid. This doesn't feel good! Moreover, Nezha had his master Taiyi Zhenren prepare it for him. If the time traveler does not prepare himself and make the process as reasonable and credible as possible, Is it up to the author to forcibly "deus ex machina"? (As for why he insists on dying, there are still some settings that have not been revealed. I hope to keep it secret for a while) But I'm still confused about whether to write more straightforwardly like now. I hope everyone can be a little more objective about this and put forward more opinions. As long as I don't curse people right away or have a serious hostile attitude, I will think about it as appropriate. According to the ratio of readers who support and oppose it, I will adjust the plot arrangement appropriately to improve the reading experience as much as possible. Thank you.

Tags: Big brain! Wonderful thinking! -- Standing in front of you is: The time traveler, the former crown prince of Konoha, the former "son of prophecy", the person with uncertain destiny who cut off the so-called "savior"'s cycle of cause and effect, The great demon who completely overturned the ninja village and the ninja system, involved the ninja village and the nobles, ninjas and ordinary people in the war, ignited the world, and gave hope and despair to the world at the same time. The future great sage and mentor of the Kingdom of Rain, the founder of the mythological organization "Heavenly Court", the refiner of the acquired treasures "Apotheosis of the Gods" and the "Six Paths of Reincarnation Disk", The Great Love Immortal who sympathizes with the suffering of all sentient beings, loves all things in the world, sacrifices his life to sacrifice himself, opens up "reincarnation" in the netherworld, and gives all people the opportunity to reincarnate... -- (The first 27 chapters are foreshadowing for Chapter 28, "The Traveler's Diary-the 'historical text' that records everything." In order to avoid spoilers and affect the reading experience, No further details will be given here. Readers who are impatient or feel something is not quite right after reading the first three chapters can read Chapter 28 first, then go back and read from the beginning. In the first 27 chapters, the emotional questions that are deliberately misleading are answered in Chapter 28. ) The ultimate goal of this part of the plot at the beginning is to overdo it reasonably and lead to the mind-expanding plot of "The List of Gods". I hope book friends can be a little more patient. Please pay attention to the words "big imagination" and "clear ideas" in the tags. In essence, it is an intellectual article that is as reasonable as possible. Thank you! -- You can only change your profile once in seven days. You have just changed it once and you still have to wait seven days.

Damn it, it's so imaginative, especially Chapter 61, I was simply amazed. The last time I saw such a reasonable fanfic was Naruto, and my kaleidoscope was dark blue with dots. Other fan novels either feel that the protagonist is inexplicably strong, or feels inexplicably weird, but only these two novels have strong protagonists. He is also very strong-willed and very reasonable. Of course there are shortcomings, it's just that it's a bit crazy.

The writing of this novel is so awkward. Just look at Naruto's fan fiction. It is described as super tall and verbose. He is like a huge shadow like a demon, dancing on the rock wall, as if at the beginning of ancient times, when the primitive flames of ignorance of human civilization were first born, in the desolate wilderness, primitive shamans who believed in the existence of heaven and earth lit bonfires, etc. Is this possible in Naruto? My head hurts from watching it.

It's so imaginative and so well written.