Naruto, This Civilian Ninja is so Despicable

If the fan doesn't know the plot, it only deserves one star. It's a time traveler who has a system but doesn't know Bai Jue.

The writing is very strong, the plot is funny, and it is a masterpiece on its own merits. I will give it a five-star support. However, the character creation is not good, and I can't say that. In fact, the creation is quite flesh-and-blood. Most of the time, it is very stupid to create new characters to serve the plot. The most important thing is the number of updates. It is too few. I have a hunch that one day this five-star may become two-star if this continues.

This book is full of a lot of private settings, first of all, chakra. Many people confuse chakra with internal power, which is actually wrong. It is said in the original comic that if chakra is not used for a long time, it will slowly dissipate and return to the body and become physical strength. This is why the Yin Seal is a famous ninjutsu, but many authors like to treat internal energy and chakra as one thing, thinking that it can be stored. The second point is the conspiracy theory of the Three Generations. Naturally, there is no need to talk about the three thousand Yuan Fei ninjas or those who seek power for personal gain or the three generations of shady people. It's basically a cliché. We don't need to say more. The third issue is the division of combat power. This is also an area that many Naruto fan authors like to mess with. Like how my chakra increased so much after practicing so hard that I actually had the strength of a jounin. First of all, it is clear that the lower and middle jounin are not divided into combat power, but by position. A jounin must be controllable in a village. It does not mean that you can be a jounin no matter how powerful you are. After becoming a jounin, you are qualified to elect and vote for the Kage. You belong to the top. A village can not have as many jounin as they want. There are some Chuunin who can defeat Jonin, and there are even Genin who can serve as Jounin, such as the old man who carries the blame. Of course, if you can accept the above problems, then it is still very good to regard this novel as a good martial arts novel. Simply put, it's fun and good.

Author update, Author update, Author update

When I saw Orochimaru being given money, I didn't like it very much! Natural energy, I would spend money to go to Tsunade to get a psychic scroll, teleport to the Slug Immortal Land and ask the Slug Immortal!

Is this the rhythm of wanting pigeons? Is this the rhythm of wanting pigeons?

Can we increase the number of updates by 50% in one day?

Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster

Very interesting, please update more author

Too little, too little, too little, too little