The Mythical Daluo That Started with the Fox Demon
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Traveling through the world of fox demons, he became the cousin of Yang Yitan, the Lord of Three Consciousnesses. Yang Ping'an possessed the mythical Great Law, and Yang Ping'an wanted to reverse the outcome of the mask organization's destruction in the future. Since then, Yang Pingan has embarked on a journey to the heavens in pursuit of immortality. I am a new author, so I hope all book friends will bear with me.
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Official(17)Scraped 1mo ago
I, the Shinhwa Daluo, can kill, but I have to take my place.
I'll give you one star first and give the rest to you in batches.
Are you sure the title of your book is suitable? Mythical Da Luo, do you know what this thing is? Putting this world of fox demons into the world is not a dimensionality reduction attack. It is more than a dimensionality reduction. It is an attack on the ground from the atmosphere.
The path of immortality is mysterious and unfathomable. Humanity is ethereal, neither big nor small.
Why do you always turn to Taoism? They are not even immortals, they become Taoist as soon as they realize the Tao. You are not a Taoist ancestor
It's actually okay, but the cultivation and the plot and realm in between are a bit unclear.
I sincerely suggest that you remove the one that goes to Douluo Continent. It's too uncomfortable. It feels like a bull's head is wrong and a horse's mouth is wrong. It's better to go too far in the middle. It's very uncomfortable to go too far in Douluo Continent.
Passing on your own cultivation method to others is too brainless. It is forcibly conferring wisdom on others. If you are not the strongest, but you master such a powerful method, it is a crime to possess a treasure. Won't others try their best to snatch it away?
We just want to say, why is the author's description of the characters so magical? He winks at every turn and shows his teeth and claws.
The protagonist's name appears too many times, right?
It appears more than 40 times in Chapters 1 and 2. It's too frequent.
Is there a female protagonist? Is the heroine human or demon?
What rubbish, it's all poisonous. The protagonist doesn't behave like a normal person at all.
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Official(17)Scraped 1mo ago
I, the Shinhwa Daluo, can kill, but I have to take my place.
I'll give you one star first and give the rest to you in batches.
Are you sure the title of your book is suitable? Mythical Da Luo, do you know what this thing is? Putting this world of fox demons into the world is not a dimensionality reduction attack. It is more than a dimensionality reduction. It is an attack on the ground from the atmosphere.
The path of immortality is mysterious and unfathomable. Humanity is ethereal, neither big nor small.
Why do you always turn to Taoism? They are not even immortals, they become Taoist as soon as they realize the Tao. You are not a Taoist ancestor
It's actually okay, but the cultivation and the plot and realm in between are a bit unclear.
I sincerely suggest that you remove the one that goes to Douluo Continent. It's too uncomfortable. It feels like a bull's head is wrong and a horse's mouth is wrong. It's better to go too far in the middle. It's very uncomfortable to go too far in Douluo Continent.
Passing on your own cultivation method to others is too brainless. It is forcibly conferring wisdom on others. If you are not the strongest, but you master such a powerful method, it is a crime to possess a treasure. Won't others try their best to snatch it away?
We just want to say, why is the author's description of the characters so magical? He winks at every turn and shows his teeth and claws.
The protagonist's name appears too many times, right?
It appears more than 40 times in Chapters 1 and 2. It's too frequent.
Is there a female protagonist? Is the heroine human or demon?
What rubbish, it's all poisonous. The protagonist doesn't behave like a normal person at all.
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