He Failed to Cultivate Immortality and Was Caught Halfway

The biggest flaw of this book is probably that it frequently modifies people's memories. Although there is no malice, it is disgusting that you modify it so often and label the protagonist as a good person.

The world view seems to be very large, and it seems that the author is preparing to make Blue Star the center of all worlds. I don't know how long each world is. As the initial copy, Xiaoao doesn't seem to have much plot or sense of existence. Jianghu and the imperial court are solved by the protagonist in a few sentences. However, it may be that the author felt that the first low martial arts character was nothing to write about, so he just used it to start the story and push the plot away. I don't know what the world will be like in the future. Then there are the other countries of Blue Star. The Golden Thumb of the protagonist in the Gate of the World is not available in other countries. I don't know what plot the author will arrange to increase their force value. For example, a door to another world appears? It would be outrageous if it relied on genetic modification of mecha superpowers and ninjas. After all, with these, we can fight China after it has the World Gate, but China may be gone before it has the World Gate. Of course, we do not rule out the possibility that the author will directly take away other places in one wave, but that will reduce a lot of conflicts and intrigues. I don't know if there is any plot about the siblings at the beginning. Judging from the explanation in the previous article, it seems that there is a follow-up plot arranged. What kind of group does it seem to be? However, it seems that the protagonist upgrades too quickly and cannot use it anymore. In the end, it may just end like this. Of course, maybe it will continue to open up pits about ancient families with qualifications to cultivate immortals (but considering the current status of the protagonist, ancient families may not be important enough). Another one with more plots may be Su Qingqing, is it called this? According to ordinary novels, the perfect heroine template is not necessarily the case here. First of all, her stance is official, which may have an impact on the protagonist's future development. After all, given the protagonist's current status and relationship with the authorities, she does not need to be the pivot. If there is a real problem, she won't be able to deal with it. Overall, the beginning is pretty good, and the world view is great. It depends on how well the level training system, plots of each world, and the plot of Blue Star are written in the later stages. It's well written, but I don't feel like it can be completed in a thousand chapters. It would take at least 1,500 or 2,000 chapters to roughly complete the story. Of course, if you are not sure and just let yourself go, you may open the next book soon. In short, keep going, maybe you can see the birth of a big shot.

Author, are you out of control, or are you weak? The last book had one chapter with 10,000 words, but now the golden three chapters only have two chapters, and the total is less than 5,000 words?

The front is good, but the back is not good, so I don't like it.

It's starting to be poisonous. I don't know how to put it. Anyway, it's poisonous. This plot is a bit too dramatic. It's not okay if it's not poisonous.

Can. . . .