Douluo: Writing Diaries Silently, Their Characters Collapsed

After reading the plot written by the author, I found it quite interesting. It's this kind of Douluo Diary flow, with no new innovations. The ideas and the character of the protagonist were not well developed. There is no difference from fellow Douluo people. There are also heroines and supporting characters. Not much different from other fans. It's all the same routine. Are there no new routines? For example, when the protagonist meets the heroine and the supporting character, he just wants to save his life. Stay away from female protagonists and supporting characters. Then he complained crazily in his diary. Complaining while running away. Or have a female protagonist and a female supporting role. He crazily betrays the protagonist, but the protagonist rejects it crazily. Crazy complaints about *** in the diary. For example, the protagonist travels to Seven Houses in Notting City at the beginning. Damn it, is this still in the country? The protagonist gets up from bed and looks at the unfamiliar environment for four weeks. Just when the protagonist was still around, the system sound rang. [Ding dong, congratulations to the host for binding the voice diary system] [Congratulations to the host for coming to "Douluo Dalu"] The protagonist listened to the system prompts, and suddenly the quintessence of the Chinese nation came. Damn it, dog system, why did you bring me to "Douluo Dalu"? You must know that this "Douluo Dalu" is a fantasy floor tile. I would be happy if you could transport me to a perfect world and fight against the sky. After all, the people in both worlds are normal people. But they sent me to "Douluo Dalu". This "Douluo Dalu" is full of fucking love brains, and there is no normal person... ... After the protagonist finished complaining about the system, He looked in front of the dormitory door. A girl wearing pink hair and bunny ears walked in. When the protagonist looked at the girl, two words popped into his mind: Xiao Wu. [Fuck, since I am in the Seventh House, Tang San will probably come soon. No, I have to leave, otherwise Tang San will definitely tell you that you have a way to die] [And is this Xiao Wu from "Douluo Dalu"? How? It will arrive early, why is it not the same as the original plot? Forget it, forget it, it's none of my business, I'd better stop meddling in other people's business, anyway, Daming, Erming and himself will also sacrifice to Tang San in the future] Not far from the dormitory, Xiao Wu listened to the voice of the diary in her head, and her head suddenly buzzed. What is he talking about? In the future, he would be sacrificed to that guy named Tang San, and his two younger brothers would also be sacrificed to that guy named Tang San. [I probably never expected this 100,000-year-old transformed soul beast. As soon as I arrived in Notting City, I must have been overwhelmed by the titled Douluo] [If we don't leave Notting City as soon as possible, when Tang San comes, we won't be able to leave even if he wants to] Xiao Wu listened to the voice coming from the diary and kept thinking about it in her mind. Could it be that he was exposed when he first came to this world? No, I want to leave here and return to the Star Dou Forest. I haven't avenged my mother yet, so I can't die here. The protagonist doesn't know that because of your voice diary, the fate of the little rabbit has been changed unintentionally. Complaints, Lao Liu, multiple female protagonists. Each character has his own soul plot, Or post it upside down. This kind of plot is no more interesting than the bad street plot. Every character is written with soul. Have independent thought and wisdom. This kind of plot is no more interesting than the kind that only involves falling in love.

I really don't understand what you're expressing. I don't understand the protagonist's strength at all. Just write down the level of that skill, then the soul sect, and the soul ring and nothing. The plot is so confusing that I don't know what you're expressing. I'm convinced!

I just laughed. I read almost 40 of them, but I didn't even understand what was written. What are you writing about? I didn't even understand it.

It's better not to add too much second-generation content to the diary stream. It seems a bit too inconsistent. Would it be better to add some event imagination and plot details to speculate? The diary is too subjective and a bit unpopular.

Strange, why are rewards given to diary holders? Only when the things given get better and better will they like the protagonist. They are all a group of women who think about rewards. How are they different from the money-worshiping women outside?

I was put off after reading the first sentence.

One star cannot be more. What the hell is it writing? The more I read it, the more I want to vomit.

What kind of thing are you writing? You can just write whatever you want as a second creation?

The writing is really messy, I don't know what I want to express

It is recommended to say to Tang San after killing Tang Hao: My friend, I know that you have hated me to the core in the past few years, but what I want to say is that I killed your father and married your mother, but you still have me. I can completely be your father and your life mentor. Finally, I have to say that your mother is very rich. 🤡