
I Became the Summoned Beast of the Empress
About This Novel
Jiang Chen, a genius disciple of the Taixu Sword Sect, in order to break through the barrier between heaven and man, went into seclusion to practice the Sword Sect's forbidden code "Sword Art of All Heavens", and did not want to die just like that. The nonsense is that he was reborn. What's even more ridiculous is that he was reborn as a little white tiger. What's even more ridiculous is that he turned out to be a summoned beast. Since then, a kendo tiger has appeared!
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Official(326)Scraped 3d ago
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Didn't the heroine summon four summoned beasts? After removing the hero, the remaining ones are an eagle, a dog and a snake. Personally, I think snakes should evolve into dragons or dragons later on. The dog roars to the sky. The eagle should be the golden-winged roc eagle
Well written, keep it up!
From the current point of view, the writing is quite good. I hope the author will not collapse later. In addition, since the little white tiger is set to use the sun to train his body, I suggest the author add another one to use the moon to train his soul, and then use the flying sword technique. Wouldn't it be better?
Take a look at the first three chapters of this book.
Before saying this, let's talk about the novel themes that are currently relatively easy to sign in QQ Bookstore. Before, it was a Douluo Dou Po fanfic, and then there were cool articles about invincible beginnings such as booting up and signing in, and then there were novel themes, preferably ones that no one on this site had written before. During this period of time, these three languages have been easier to sign and easier to achieve results. Then let's talk about my book. This book is an alien beast genre, not a new subject, but there are relatively few people writing about it, so I felt it would be easier to sign the contract before I started writing. Okay, then it's time to set the tone of the book, whether it will be an invincible and refreshing literary flow, or a plot flow that tends to be traditional fantasy. I observed the books in the bookstore and found that there were relatively few plot-based books, and they were basically in the cool-text category at the beginning, so I decided to follow the plot-based flow. (The so-called plot flow is a plot that makes you find it interesting and exciting, rather than a story that you know what will happen next at a glance.) There is another point. The beginning of Invincible Flow collapsed too quickly, and I was not strong enough to write. So since it is a plot flow, the beginning of the waste material flow is definitely the best to write. Well, here I want to talk about waste material flow. Think about it carefully, everyone, is the waste stream in your mind whether the protagonist starts low and goes high, or does he start low and then slap his face without thinking all the way? At the beginning of the invincible flow, it became dull in the later stages. Some readers immediately said that this is a bullshit invincible flow. So I have to ask, my protagonist started out as a loser, and after three chapters there were almost no brainless slaps in the face. How come no readers jumped out and said that you are a bullshit invincible flow, and the applause was not loud at all? I started the first three chapters with a standard fantasy routine, starting with useless materials, conflict, resolving the conflict, and then signed the contract smoothly. Only after signing the contract can the next plot happen. Without signing the contract, it means nothing. Don't talk about novel beginnings, you can also sign a contract with an imaginative beginning. Anyone who has written a book knows that the more novel and imaginative the beginning is, the more it will be written. The eunuch with a few hundred thousand words is destined to be short in length. The eunuch with a few hundred thousand words in a weak skill will end up with a million or two million words in a deep one, either it is just watering down, and it will make you wonder if the author has changed. The reason is that the imaginative opening cannot carry so many "reasonable" plots, so that the author himself does not know how to deal with it. Of course, the most important thing is that my writing skills are not good enough to make the invincible opening lengthy. So I choose to open low. If the results are good, the plot of the book will be about 3 million words, so it is wisest to start low. If the protagonist is talented and awesome from the beginning, what kind of training process is required according to normal logic? Besides pretending to be cool, what else can you do? After all, they are all invincible. Yes, I admit that the first three chapters are a little bit poisonous, but the subsequent plot is basically non-toxic, not to mention how good it is. How can the princess survive in the harem and be used as a gunman? Come on, I am not writing a palace battle. Why am I spending so much energy to modify her? Have you watched too many palace fighting dramas? Did I say they have a deep sisterly bond? Did I say that the letter was evasive? I did say that the princess must be pampered. In reality, there are many spoiled women who like to commit suicide. What's wrong with me writing one in a fantasy novel? What's wrong! ! ! ! These are all simple preparations for her to commit suicide, aren't they enough? Isn't it enough to say that you are favored because you are beautiful? Do you want me to write about her growth history? Please, I really can't do it, can I? Furthermore, some people say that this is a false story, and the heroine is not an empress at all. To be honest, I think these people have read too many mindless articles, so they habitually put their minds aside when they open the Bookstore APP. Do I have to start as the empress? Can't I grow up slowly? In this way: Eternal Emperor starts as Eternal Emperor? Devouring the Starry Sky: Swallowing the starry sky at the beginning? The Holy King starts as the Holy King? Is Shijing Satin a pornographic book? Okay, now that we've talked about the shortcomings of this book, let's talk about the advantages, ahem. (A little embarrassed...) Oh my god, there are so many advantages to this book. The sentences are smoother, there are fewer typos, the basic logic is reasonable, the villain has a brain, and has a sense of reason to do whatever he is in. There is a single female protagonist, and the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has twists and turns and is interesting ~ there are many layers throughout. Humorous dog licks people online! Humorous, interesting, funny, passionate, touching, and novel plot, you will find all of these if you keep reading. Friends who like this book remember to vote. (The intention is to explain that I don't want to start a fight. If you have opinions, you can discuss them. Don't read the family tree or bring your family members.)
I have a bold guess!
After reading a few chapters and combining the title of the book, I had a bold idea. This book is marked as having a single female protagonist, and the female protagonist has four summoned beasts, so does it mean there are four male protagonists? ?
Yuanfang, what do you think?
Upgrade, fight monsters and pick up equipment, cave academy auction. After completing the mission, go to the dungeon and change the map of the fairy world. He is extremely gifted and has good bones. One year of practice is worth ten years. I am a multi-faceted expert in refining elixirs, weapons and magic formations. There is an old man in the ring, and a pet is a mythical beast. Bai Fumei fell in love with me, even if the protagonist is very funny. Occasionally I go shopping on the street and sell bricks on a whim. After returning home, I found out that it was a castrated version of the ancient artifact. The beauty is hungry in the mountains, and a roast chicken makes her happy. A love triangle between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the male protagonist has a lot of beauties. The tiger's body shook, and his domineering energy leaked out. I will accept all the beauties, my little brother. The villain is mentally retarded and sends his subordinates to give him experience. The partners are all scumbags in fighting, and they stay on the sidelines to show off their surprise during the fight. With lots of ideas and good luck, junk skills can turn into treasures. You can sweep across the same level, and it's not difficult to fight across levels. Although he is useless now, he will definitely become a genius in the future. Feng shui has been taking turns for thirty years, so don't bully me into being poor as a young man. A continent is so big that it can accommodate hundreds of millions of people. The distance between the two ends is several light years, and I can cross it in three months. Although there are many countries, the national culture is the same. Currency grade weights and measures, commonly used in mainland China. The master is very powerful and can destroy the world with one move. But after tens of thousands of years of fighting, the mountains and seas still look the same. The protagonist is always healed when injured and will never become disabled. It doesn't matter if you never go to school, reading and writing are natural skills. You open your mouth and shut up to defy heaven. What does God owe you? The halo magic skill is plug-in, and you can kill immortals, Buddhas and demons at will. Tang San's potatoes and tomatoes, the east wind soared against the sky.
The author looks over
Author, you are the weakest protagonist I have ever seen. You have top-notch magic, magic, swords, and rare treasures, but you can only cross a small level to kill enemies. You are too weak. There are so many things that other pigs can do better than the protagonist, so what is the use of writing so many treasures? If you look at other people's books, it's easy to skip levels, but it would cost you half your life to reach this small level. Those skills are completely useless.
Some suggestions for authors
In fact, I haven't read the fantasy genre in a few years. This book is mainly because I was summoned and it was a bit novel. It felt good, but later on it felt a bit clichéd and boring. The heroine is constantly being caught. The protagonist keeps chasing the previous immortal novels, as if they want to know that time will destroy everything. They have very little time together... Anyway, I think it is not as exciting as before... Come on...
I feel like the main character is so weak
The heroine of this book is the protagonist, right? The protagonist gets beaten up when she goes out. She works hard to cultivate to improve the heroine's cultivation. It's really frustrating to watch. She is the best in Kyushu. In another world, she would fight against the five scum.
So-so
Some of these three are bad. Originally I wanted to give it two stars and add one on top of your imitation.
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Official(326)Scraped 3d ago
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Didn't the heroine summon four summoned beasts? After removing the hero, the remaining ones are an eagle, a dog and a snake. Personally, I think snakes should evolve into dragons or dragons later on. The dog roars to the sky. The eagle should be the golden-winged roc eagle
Well written, keep it up!
From the current point of view, the writing is quite good. I hope the author will not collapse later. In addition, since the little white tiger is set to use the sun to train his body, I suggest the author add another one to use the moon to train his soul, and then use the flying sword technique. Wouldn't it be better?
Take a look at the first three chapters of this book.
Before saying this, let's talk about the novel themes that are currently relatively easy to sign in QQ Bookstore. Before, it was a Douluo Dou Po fanfic, and then there were cool articles about invincible beginnings such as booting up and signing in, and then there were novel themes, preferably ones that no one on this site had written before. During this period of time, these three languages have been easier to sign and easier to achieve results. Then let's talk about my book. This book is an alien beast genre, not a new subject, but there are relatively few people writing about it, so I felt it would be easier to sign the contract before I started writing. Okay, then it's time to set the tone of the book, whether it will be an invincible and refreshing literary flow, or a plot flow that tends to be traditional fantasy. I observed the books in the bookstore and found that there were relatively few plot-based books, and they were basically in the cool-text category at the beginning, so I decided to follow the plot-based flow. (The so-called plot flow is a plot that makes you find it interesting and exciting, rather than a story that you know what will happen next at a glance.) There is another point. The beginning of Invincible Flow collapsed too quickly, and I was not strong enough to write. So since it is a plot flow, the beginning of the waste material flow is definitely the best to write. Well, here I want to talk about waste material flow. Think about it carefully, everyone, is the waste stream in your mind whether the protagonist starts low and goes high, or does he start low and then slap his face without thinking all the way? At the beginning of the invincible flow, it became dull in the later stages. Some readers immediately said that this is a bullshit invincible flow. So I have to ask, my protagonist started out as a loser, and after three chapters there were almost no brainless slaps in the face. How come no readers jumped out and said that you are a bullshit invincible flow, and the applause was not loud at all? I started the first three chapters with a standard fantasy routine, starting with useless materials, conflict, resolving the conflict, and then signed the contract smoothly. Only after signing the contract can the next plot happen. Without signing the contract, it means nothing. Don't talk about novel beginnings, you can also sign a contract with an imaginative beginning. Anyone who has written a book knows that the more novel and imaginative the beginning is, the more it will be written. The eunuch with a few hundred thousand words is destined to be short in length. The eunuch with a few hundred thousand words in a weak skill will end up with a million or two million words in a deep one, either it is just watering down, and it will make you wonder if the author has changed. The reason is that the imaginative opening cannot carry so many "reasonable" plots, so that the author himself does not know how to deal with it. Of course, the most important thing is that my writing skills are not good enough to make the invincible opening lengthy. So I choose to open low. If the results are good, the plot of the book will be about 3 million words, so it is wisest to start low. If the protagonist is talented and awesome from the beginning, what kind of training process is required according to normal logic? Besides pretending to be cool, what else can you do? After all, they are all invincible. Yes, I admit that the first three chapters are a little bit poisonous, but the subsequent plot is basically non-toxic, not to mention how good it is. How can the princess survive in the harem and be used as a gunman? Come on, I am not writing a palace battle. Why am I spending so much energy to modify her? Have you watched too many palace fighting dramas? Did I say they have a deep sisterly bond? Did I say that the letter was evasive? I did say that the princess must be pampered. In reality, there are many spoiled women who like to commit suicide. What's wrong with me writing one in a fantasy novel? What's wrong! ! ! ! These are all simple preparations for her to commit suicide, aren't they enough? Isn't it enough to say that you are favored because you are beautiful? Do you want me to write about her growth history? Please, I really can't do it, can I? Furthermore, some people say that this is a false story, and the heroine is not an empress at all. To be honest, I think these people have read too many mindless articles, so they habitually put their minds aside when they open the Bookstore APP. Do I have to start as the empress? Can't I grow up slowly? In this way: Eternal Emperor starts as Eternal Emperor? Devouring the Starry Sky: Swallowing the starry sky at the beginning? The Holy King starts as the Holy King? Is Shijing Satin a pornographic book? Okay, now that we've talked about the shortcomings of this book, let's talk about the advantages, ahem. (A little embarrassed...) Oh my god, there are so many advantages to this book. The sentences are smoother, there are fewer typos, the basic logic is reasonable, the villain has a brain, and has a sense of reason to do whatever he is in. There is a single female protagonist, and the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has twists and turns and is interesting ~ there are many layers throughout. Humorous dog licks people online! Humorous, interesting, funny, passionate, touching, and novel plot, you will find all of these if you keep reading. Friends who like this book remember to vote. (The intention is to explain that I don't want to start a fight. If you have opinions, you can discuss them. Don't read the family tree or bring your family members.)
I have a bold guess!
After reading a few chapters and combining the title of the book, I had a bold idea. This book is marked as having a single female protagonist, and the female protagonist has four summoned beasts, so does it mean there are four male protagonists? ?
Yuanfang, what do you think?
Upgrade, fight monsters and pick up equipment, cave academy auction. After completing the mission, go to the dungeon and change the map of the fairy world. He is extremely gifted and has good bones. One year of practice is worth ten years. I am a multi-faceted expert in refining elixirs, weapons and magic formations. There is an old man in the ring, and a pet is a mythical beast. Bai Fumei fell in love with me, even if the protagonist is very funny. Occasionally I go shopping on the street and sell bricks on a whim. After returning home, I found out that it was a castrated version of the ancient artifact. The beauty is hungry in the mountains, and a roast chicken makes her happy. A love triangle between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the male protagonist has a lot of beauties. The tiger's body shook, and his domineering energy leaked out. I will accept all the beauties, my little brother. The villain is mentally retarded and sends his subordinates to give him experience. The partners are all scumbags in fighting, and they stay on the sidelines to show off their surprise during the fight. With lots of ideas and good luck, junk skills can turn into treasures. You can sweep across the same level, and it's not difficult to fight across levels. Although he is useless now, he will definitely become a genius in the future. Feng shui has been taking turns for thirty years, so don't bully me into being poor as a young man. A continent is so big that it can accommodate hundreds of millions of people. The distance between the two ends is several light years, and I can cross it in three months. Although there are many countries, the national culture is the same. Currency grade weights and measures, commonly used in mainland China. The master is very powerful and can destroy the world with one move. But after tens of thousands of years of fighting, the mountains and seas still look the same. The protagonist is always healed when injured and will never become disabled. It doesn't matter if you never go to school, reading and writing are natural skills. You open your mouth and shut up to defy heaven. What does God owe you? The halo magic skill is plug-in, and you can kill immortals, Buddhas and demons at will. Tang San's potatoes and tomatoes, the east wind soared against the sky.
The author looks over
Author, you are the weakest protagonist I have ever seen. You have top-notch magic, magic, swords, and rare treasures, but you can only cross a small level to kill enemies. You are too weak. There are so many things that other pigs can do better than the protagonist, so what is the use of writing so many treasures? If you look at other people's books, it's easy to skip levels, but it would cost you half your life to reach this small level. Those skills are completely useless.
Some suggestions for authors
In fact, I haven't read the fantasy genre in a few years. This book is mainly because I was summoned and it was a bit novel. It felt good, but later on it felt a bit clichéd and boring. The heroine is constantly being caught. The protagonist keeps chasing the previous immortal novels, as if they want to know that time will destroy everything. They have very little time together... Anyway, I think it is not as exciting as before... Come on...
I feel like the main character is so weak
The heroine of this book is the protagonist, right? The protagonist gets beaten up when she goes out. She works hard to cultivate to improve the heroine's cultivation. It's really frustrating to watch. She is the best in Kyushu. In another world, she would fight against the five scum.
So-so
Some of these three are bad. Originally I wanted to give it two stars and add one on top of your imitation.

















