
Kill the Protagonist at the Beginning
About This Novel
"Su Luochen! I will kill you within three years!" He traveled back in time to the novel he wrote and became the twenty-seventh prince of the Cangbang Dynasty. He was threatened by the life and death of the original protagonist just after traveling through time. Helpless, Su Luochen could only kill the original owner and find his own path to invincibility!
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Official(119)Scraped 16d ago
Let me tell you a story
It's the part where the old man gives the protagonist the exercises. After all, he is the most powerful existence. Wouldn't he give a fake exercise? Or she could use some tricks to kill the protagonist after he is resurrected. . This plot is a little bit brainless. After all, the most powerful being in the world doesn't even have an IQ. He is frightened by the protagonist's few words and shakes everything. It's a little poisonous. Maybe the author didn't think about this and just wanted to advance the plot, so he didn't think about it. Anyway, readers of QRead are now used to it, so there's nothing more to say.
Feeling good
What a beautiful book. The male protagonists are all impotent. . I've read a lot of books where the male protagonist is impotent and it gives me a headache.
While reading the comments, I discovered another poisonous point that cannot be considered a poisonous point. Why can the protagonist remember everything in the book? I hope the author will explain in the article later, as well as the character of the protagonist, whether it is a pretense or the reason why he merges with the original owner. Anyway, I don't think people with this kind of character can exist in modern society. Anyway, it is best to mention it later in the article (it can also explain the number of words, so why not?)
Author, could you please write it faster?
The most enjoyable book about a villain in a book
I have been reading books since 2014 and it is the most enjoyable one I have ever seen. I don't know what I'm writing about other things, but the protagonist keeps raising them. You already know the protagonist's opportunities, why are you still keeping him? This book is so simple, kill the protagonist first at the beginning. The rest of the story is about nothing. The protagonist is left to stir up trouble, but is released again and again. It feels like the protagonist is jumping through the book
Can the plot be more natural? Shouldn't Tuoba Xiao hold grudges against the Yu family? Even if you have to take care of the Yu family, can you write it down? Now it's like the protagonist is the one who wants to kill him?
It's quite interesting, but I just hope that the protagonist can have a few brothers who depend on each other for life and death, and the protagonist's brothers hope that they can write about girls they like, hoping that it is the minimum to fall in love with someone. This is just a suggestion. I hope the author can refer to it. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and write better and better.
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Community(0)
Official(119)Scraped 16d ago
Let me tell you a story
It's the part where the old man gives the protagonist the exercises. After all, he is the most powerful existence. Wouldn't he give a fake exercise? Or she could use some tricks to kill the protagonist after he is resurrected. . This plot is a little bit brainless. After all, the most powerful being in the world doesn't even have an IQ. He is frightened by the protagonist's few words and shakes everything. It's a little poisonous. Maybe the author didn't think about this and just wanted to advance the plot, so he didn't think about it. Anyway, readers of QRead are now used to it, so there's nothing more to say.
Feeling good
What a beautiful book. The male protagonists are all impotent. . I've read a lot of books where the male protagonist is impotent and it gives me a headache.
While reading the comments, I discovered another poisonous point that cannot be considered a poisonous point. Why can the protagonist remember everything in the book? I hope the author will explain in the article later, as well as the character of the protagonist, whether it is a pretense or the reason why he merges with the original owner. Anyway, I don't think people with this kind of character can exist in modern society. Anyway, it is best to mention it later in the article (it can also explain the number of words, so why not?)
Author, could you please write it faster?
The most enjoyable book about a villain in a book
I have been reading books since 2014 and it is the most enjoyable one I have ever seen. I don't know what I'm writing about other things, but the protagonist keeps raising them. You already know the protagonist's opportunities, why are you still keeping him? This book is so simple, kill the protagonist first at the beginning. The rest of the story is about nothing. The protagonist is left to stir up trouble, but is released again and again. It feels like the protagonist is jumping through the book
Can the plot be more natural? Shouldn't Tuoba Xiao hold grudges against the Yu family? Even if you have to take care of the Yu family, can you write it down? Now it's like the protagonist is the one who wants to kill him?
It's quite interesting, but I just hope that the protagonist can have a few brothers who depend on each other for life and death, and the protagonist's brothers hope that they can write about girls they like, hoping that it is the minimum to fall in love with someone. This is just a suggestion. I hope the author can refer to it. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and write better and better.














