The Super-god Primary School Student in the Fantasy City
About This Novel
Ye Xuan, a fan of fantasy novels, traveled to a world without fantasy novels! Even dressed as a primary school student! Just when Ye Xuan was planning to compose a story about a prosperous era in which primary school students were scorning all the great online writers... The fantasy world has arrived! The Kung Fu Palace can concretize endless Kung Fu based on human thinking! While others were working hard to embody the internal skills and mental methods, Ye Xuan was worried... "Speaking of uncle, do you think the "Emperor of Heaven Sutra" is invincible, or the "Swallowing Heaven Demon Technique" is unparalleled?" Ye Xuan fell into a phobia of choice after waving his white and tender little hands and knocking away an unparalleled prodigy who claimed to be able to do heaven and earth in seconds. Defeat the unparalleled genius and get +100 experience! "Oh, by the way, he has also awakened the god-level combat talent-killing monsters and leveling up! Killing monsters and killing people will also level up. From then on, he will crush the three realms and destroy all dissenters!"
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Official(24)Scraped 3d ago
How to say it? Feeling a little speechless
The skills and magic weapons that the male major masters are not strong at all. For example, is your Heaven Swallowing Demon Skill very strong? It's true that the male protagonist may have poor qualifications. I need this for qualifications, but I'm really speechless about the magic weapon you chose. I don't want you to choose the Four Swords of Zhuxian for Pangu Ax. The Four Swords of Zhuxian are really strong. With one strike of Pangu Ax, everything will be gone. Well, I'm convinced, I'm convinced, He also said that Pangu Ax is not handsome. You, a practitioner of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Kung Fu, still want to be handsome. You have not chosen the right technique, you have not learned the magic weapon well, and you have not chosen the magic medicine well. Speaking of this magic medicine, do you know what Chaos Qinglian is? It was the first defense of chaos that gave birth to Pangu. You actually said it was a miracle medicine. Take it, take it.
Is this a mindless piece of writing?
There is no logic, no background, no details, just write whatever you like, it's just letting yourself go. You start with the Devouring Heavenly Demonic Skill, you are excellent! People in the Zhetian World can cultivate and use their bodies as seeds. That is because Emperor Huang Tian distributes Tao seeds throughout the universe! How did you gradually become successful? At the beginning, you immediately swallowed up others. Have you opened up the sea of suffering? The essence absorbed by the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique does not directly eat people. Isn't it good to show the original true solution of the whole book at the beginning? Does the Immortal Emperor's method exist? Anyone who has watched Perfect World knows that the very beginning of the original solution is a complete collection, which has everything. It is like a treasure trove. You can find whatever you want in it. The Heaven-Swallowing Demon Kung Fu is quite awesome, but it is a pure Kung Fu technique, with no martial arts or anything like that. If you want martial arts, you also need flying immortal power and Du Hua Jue, as well as a thought of flowers blooming, dominating the world, etc.
What about the protagonist's parents?
Where are the parents of the 7- and 8-year-old protagonist? Dead? Another orphan?
Speechless
It's good to watch without using your brain, but it's very poisonous if you use your brain.
One chapter persuades you to quit,
S ratio operation! Almost poisoned to death, nauseated and retching
,
The subject matter is good, but the progress is too fast. I lost my waist. And I have a question. Where did you travel to? You don't introduce anything and don't say anything. Directly kill people. OK, directly kill people. I can understand it, but there is no reaction at all. This is impossible. And is there too much villain? Okay, these are the points.
Author, do you have any misunderstandings about the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique? The origin of everything in the world can be swallowed. Since you know how to write the protagonist, you won't swallow those thunder beasts.
How old are you without parents? Where did my parents go?
too fast
Before I know it, I am invincible. I am not afraid of pulling my balls when I take such big steps😁
Have you ever written a book like this before?
I quite liked it, but then I stopped for some reason.
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Official(24)Scraped 3d ago
How to say it? Feeling a little speechless
The skills and magic weapons that the male major masters are not strong at all. For example, is your Heaven Swallowing Demon Skill very strong? It's true that the male protagonist may have poor qualifications. I need this for qualifications, but I'm really speechless about the magic weapon you chose. I don't want you to choose the Four Swords of Zhuxian for Pangu Ax. The Four Swords of Zhuxian are really strong. With one strike of Pangu Ax, everything will be gone. Well, I'm convinced, I'm convinced, He also said that Pangu Ax is not handsome. You, a practitioner of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Kung Fu, still want to be handsome. You have not chosen the right technique, you have not learned the magic weapon well, and you have not chosen the magic medicine well. Speaking of this magic medicine, do you know what Chaos Qinglian is? It was the first defense of chaos that gave birth to Pangu. You actually said it was a miracle medicine. Take it, take it.
Is this a mindless piece of writing?
There is no logic, no background, no details, just write whatever you like, it's just letting yourself go. You start with the Devouring Heavenly Demonic Skill, you are excellent! People in the Zhetian World can cultivate and use their bodies as seeds. That is because Emperor Huang Tian distributes Tao seeds throughout the universe! How did you gradually become successful? At the beginning, you immediately swallowed up others. Have you opened up the sea of suffering? The essence absorbed by the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique does not directly eat people. Isn't it good to show the original true solution of the whole book at the beginning? Does the Immortal Emperor's method exist? Anyone who has watched Perfect World knows that the very beginning of the original solution is a complete collection, which has everything. It is like a treasure trove. You can find whatever you want in it. The Heaven-Swallowing Demon Kung Fu is quite awesome, but it is a pure Kung Fu technique, with no martial arts or anything like that. If you want martial arts, you also need flying immortal power and Du Hua Jue, as well as a thought of flowers blooming, dominating the world, etc.
What about the protagonist's parents?
Where are the parents of the 7- and 8-year-old protagonist? Dead? Another orphan?
Speechless
It's good to watch without using your brain, but it's very poisonous if you use your brain.
One chapter persuades you to quit,
S ratio operation! Almost poisoned to death, nauseated and retching
,
The subject matter is good, but the progress is too fast. I lost my waist. And I have a question. Where did you travel to? You don't introduce anything and don't say anything. Directly kill people. OK, directly kill people. I can understand it, but there is no reaction at all. This is impossible. And is there too much villain? Okay, these are the points.
Author, do you have any misunderstandings about the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique? The origin of everything in the world can be swallowed. Since you know how to write the protagonist, you won't swallow those thunder beasts.
How old are you without parents? Where did my parents go?
too fast
Before I know it, I am invincible. I am not afraid of pulling my balls when I take such big steps😁
Have you ever written a book like this before?
I quite liked it, but then I stopped for some reason.
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