Invincible Begins by Tricking an Old Man into Cultivating Immortality

The plot of this book by the author is similar to what you wrote. Is it plagiarized from yours? 😌

Why do you always write the protagonist as a fool?

This book made me very confused, not to mention the writing style. From my point of view, the author's writing style is still okay. Today I will simply share some of my opinions based on the plot I saw. First of all, judging from the title and introduction of the book, the author should start from the novel theme of "guiding the old man to cultivate immortality" and write an article to initiate the recovery of spiritual energy and encourage all people to cultivate immortality. I have to say, it's a very good idea (at least I think it's acceptable) and the next dozen chapters are also written in the same way (I didn't pay attention to the specific number of chapters). However, the next reversal really made Zajia know what he is good at. I just really don't understand why the author describes the emotional line prematurely in this kind of article? It's not that you can't write, but you're putting the cart before the horse, right? You haven't figured out the main line clearly yet, so you just describe the emotional line? Also, are you writing a fairy tale or an urban novel? If it were a novel about cultivating immortals, wouldn't it be embarrassing for the author to forcefully insert the urban pretense-and-slap-in-the-face routine? If this is an urban novel, then I didn't say that I understood it wrong from the beginning. But with the title of your book and the introduction, does it feel like you are trying to sell someone else's book? (The author can delete it if he doesn't like it, no complaints at all) I started watching it today, and I didn't watch it for long, but when I saw the scene where so-and-so made the protagonist disappear for the sake of the protagonist's sister, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Are you sure this paragraph is not an old urban literary routine from a few years ago or even more than ten years ago? This is the first time I write such a long book review. It is purely based on my feelings. It is not just for the sake of commenting because I am idle and bored. We are not going to do it this late in the evening, right? If you don't like it, delete it quickly. Ang, don't argue with us. We won't do that kind of thing╮(＿)╭. We are inexperienced. Don't mess with it and make everyone unhappy.

The routines are just old, and the writing is not that good, so novices may be able to read it.

But it's too poisonous ~ The part where the police arrest fugitives is really a bit poisonous and I can't watch it anymore. A person who has practiced kung fu for several years can only shoot with one shot no matter how good he is. If the police are not good enough, there are armed police special police. There is no need to spend a lot of money to hire people from the world. The apprentices rob people in broad daylight. The order is broken, but the subject matter is still very good.

Don't you know how powerful you are? Everyone has a general feeling of gratitude.

Guided by inheritance and assisted by the system, spiritual energy is revived and all heavens merge. Immortal, a strong person who surpasses ordinary people. The supporting characters have high IQs, and the protagonist can be a bit silly, but he has better luck.

The more I look back, the more I think this is a pyramid scheme. Can't these people practice at home? Also, in this era, martial arts are bad and restrictions are set.

It's okay to go slower, there's no need to go so fast. If it's too fast, it won't taste like that.

The last time I read a book about fooling children, everyone went to Fudan and they haven't come back yet. The author, please don't disappoint me.