Urban Cultivation Almighty Student
About This Novel
This book is also called "I Have a Hades" The peerless god king was reborn in the city and became a high school sophomore? He chuckled when he heard others say he was invincible. Invincible? Too weak, I am truly omniscient and omnipotent! The God of Martial Arts, the Patriarch of Immortality, the Strongest Medical Sage, the Super Academic... Protagonist Zhang Yang: The author will match me with thousands more girls! I want to have a harem! In the corner, an author is trembling for fear that his new book will be 404...
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Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
Adjustments to the writing format of this article
The full text has been overhauled. I have saved the manuscript and will not stop updating it. The plot has not been changed, just the sentence length has been adjusted. Interested readers can go back and read it again...
You should focus on what readers want, not what you want to write, come on
To be honest, after reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist was aggrieved. Other than that, there was no sense of domineering power from the coming of a god-king to the world. It can be understood that the author wants to shape the protagonist's character into someone with the arrogance and pride of a king, but he has to compromise due to reality. But have you noticed that such a plot is almost to undermine the character of the protagonist? He is already a god king, and the reader is allowed to see the ceiling from the beginning. This is the strongest point, and the sense of suspense and expectation drops instantly. Since you want to be recognized by readers and write popular works, why do you always stay in your own horns and refuse to come out? As someone who has been following you, I really see the author's efforts, but time and time again, he has been unable to capture the readers' interest. In fact, it is not that others don't know how to appreciate it, but that I want to prove that I am right too much.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
Adjustments to the writing format of this article
The full text has been overhauled. I have saved the manuscript and will not stop updating it. The plot has not been changed, just the sentence length has been adjusted. Interested readers can go back and read it again...
You should focus on what readers want, not what you want to write, come on
To be honest, after reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist was aggrieved. Other than that, there was no sense of domineering power from the coming of a god-king to the world. It can be understood that the author wants to shape the protagonist's character into someone with the arrogance and pride of a king, but he has to compromise due to reality. But have you noticed that such a plot is almost to undermine the character of the protagonist? He is already a god king, and the reader is allowed to see the ceiling from the beginning. This is the strongest point, and the sense of suspense and expectation drops instantly. Since you want to be recognized by readers and write popular works, why do you always stay in your own horns and refuse to come out? As someone who has been following you, I really see the author's efforts, but time and time again, he has been unable to capture the readers' interest. In fact, it is not that others don't know how to appreciate it, but that I want to prove that I am right too much.
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