
Zhu Xian: Become a Worldly Swordsman from the Entry of Luck!
by Drunk And Cherishing The Sound Of Flowers
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Official(23)Scraped 15d ago
Hurry up and write, it looks good, I like it, I like it
Too many punctuation marks and typos hamper reading.
Come on, author, the early stage is pretty good.
It feels like rubbish reading, what the hell is it writing about? First grade composition level?
Update quickly, why don't you update again?
It's very beautiful, better than most of Zhu Xian's fics, but I don't know why there is no data.
It's better than most other Zhu Xian fics, but still not much better. There are many female protagonists, and some of them are awkward when writing about emotions.
Your punctuation marks are too messy. You can change them. There are also some words that are missing or wrong. Please correct them. It doesn't look right.
Now the authors are all the same, starting with Da Zhufengtian Ling'er.
I haven't finished the first chapter and I don't want to read it anymore
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 15d ago
Hurry up and write, it looks good, I like it, I like it
Too many punctuation marks and typos hamper reading.
Come on, author, the early stage is pretty good.
It feels like rubbish reading, what the hell is it writing about? First grade composition level?
Update quickly, why don't you update again?
It's very beautiful, better than most of Zhu Xian's fics, but I don't know why there is no data.
It's better than most other Zhu Xian fics, but still not much better. There are many female protagonists, and some of them are awkward when writing about emotions.
Your punctuation marks are too messy. You can change them. There are also some words that are missing or wrong. Please correct them. It doesn't look right.
Now the authors are all the same, starting with Da Zhufengtian Ling'er.
I haven't finished the first chapter and I don't want to read it anymore









