Versatile Mage's Destiny Blessing

The author is great. Although the heroine is Lingling, she is too young! This is the same as writing with or without. If you write about other female protagonists in the future, I suggest that the author should not write the protagonist as an innocent little boy in the subsequent plot. The photo will make people feel stomach ache if they look at it, which will make people want to abandon the book. I am not threatening you with abandoning the book, and the photo will make people have this idea. Besides, this kind of writing is considered to have been eliminated. Basically no one likes to read this kind of writing now. So assuming that there are other female protagonists, you'd better write the protagonist's emotional personality more decisively. After all, we can't read it. Japanese anime are not interested in gentle and indecisive male protagonists. In the end, as I said, if there is another female protagonist, it should appear as soon as possible. This will not only prevent some readers (including me😘😘) from wasting their expectations, but also make readers determined to continue watching. , Of course, I hope that the author did not write the emotional line just to see Huangse plot (after all, why not just go to the website if you want to see it?), But also to make the character of the protagonist more full. After all, you are a time traveler and you tell me that you are not close to women. Do you think it is possible? Either he is a eunuch or there is something wrong with his orientation! It's not a fantasy novel, and there is no need to establish a desire for Taoism. The woman is just the character of the pink skull. These are personal suggestions that I hope to adopt

Destiny? Actually, I don't need you, okay? All of you, Mo Fan, is destiny! You have almost no role. The title of the book is completely awkward. I glanced at the table of contents and browsed the comment area. The heroine has a spirit, which can be +3 points. The other heroines are almost broken, so +3 points. The plot is currently considered 1.5, But I glanced at the plot again. The pace is too fast. Generally speaking, it should not survive 300 chapters. Well, the protagonist traveled through time and then traveled to a full-time mage. However, in such a dangerous plane as the whole world, there is no powerful plug-in, what should the protagonist do? Well, there is no system. Well, there are plug-ins, but they are not very powerful! Then Brother Mo Fan, the migrant worker, came online again, so I still think that the protagonist is really useless (of course, if there is no such thing as the protagonist's fate, I would not comment like this). After thinking about it, let's give it a review. From a visual inspection, this book can be rated 6 out of 10.

When I read all French fanfics, they all contain harem stories. I felt like I was reading a romance novel. One or two heroines are enough. If there are too many, it will taste bad.

The protagonist who is destined to be full of luck is very, very rare to be written like this among all French fics. I have only read one before, and that one was unfinished. Sure enough, as long as the luck value is full, even if the protagonist only has the IQ and means of an ordinary person, he can still have fun and pass the level all the way! I also thought of one such benefit. It is obvious that the content contained in the intrigues and twists is not worth mentioning in the face of full luck. It also becomes a lot easier for the author to write. When we enjoy it, we increase the follow-up reading. With more readers, the author is more motivated to write the book and the probability of unfinished books is reduced. It is really a win-win situation.

The author looks at me and gives you five stars. Can you only sleep for 5 hours from now on? The rest of the time can be spent coding. Is Mu Ningxue the heroine?

There is no need for the protagonist to participate in the national competition. It is a bad thing to say. There is no point in going out to fight with your cultivation. It is better to hunt monsters and use your soul to strengthen the country. After all, the explosion rate is 100%, right? What's the point of going to the national competition? It will also drag down your cultivation and waste time.

Why do you all like to be a nanny? You are younger than him, you have more potential than him, and you are better than Mo Fan at this stage. Why did you protect him so early? You are not an elder nannying for the younger generation. You will save the world later. I don't believe that the protagonist will not save him.

Why didn't I update the author?

Isn't it destiny? This is too nannyy!

The protagonist is brainless. Yes, it would be outrageous to expose your trump card casually. Do you really want the Inquisition and the Holy City to do you?