Fu Daoxianxiu

It was really good before it was put on the shelves, the cheats were reasonable, the language was pretty good, the first copy had a good design, but after it was put on the shelves, I felt like it had been changed, it was a mess, the logic was confusing, it was running smoothly, the price system collapsed, the characters were not established, the writing was useless, repetitive and verbose, the settings were random and the logic was inconsistent, and the occasional modern Internet terms were extremely embarrassing compared to the previous settings. Not a single copy is impressive, which is a pity. The protagonist's personality is really that of a mortal. I don't see anything extraordinary about him. He spends tens of thousands on a meal and is not cautious at all. In short, the character is not established.

This book well describes the difficulty of cultivating immortality. Although the protagonist has a certain golden finger, he is not strong, and the logic is relatively reasonable. There are not so many murders and treasure grabbing in many cultivating immortals, and he treats others as fools and keeps giving you resources. He mainly relies on his own efforts and intelligence to cultivate. It is less impetuous and allows people to read with calmness.

Do you have poor spiritual root qualifications? Are you going to buy inferior elixirs? Is your brain flooded?

So-so, the more I look at it, the worse it becomes. It's the same old development of killing people and grabbing treasures😐

Very well written, organized and logical

The writing is a bit clumsy. How can a normal person join an unknown organization casually? What is the difference between following a pyramid scheme? What others give you is hard to eat. If you haven't received a beating from society, how many people have been harmed by the hidden poison in cigarettes? How come there are still people who don't know about it?

The main character is good-looking but he is mentally retarded and has to wander around.

It's so difficult to break through 4 levels, how can I write in the future?

It's pretty good. It would be better if it were updated soon.

The author's writing style is sophisticated and has the tension of watching "Ghost Blowing the Lamp". The male protagonist's golden finger is a jade bead that can improve his own understanding. However, after using the jade beads once, it will take a long time and the next time or he will need some wisdom-related treasures to recover quickly. It seems that the male protagonist will suffer a lot in the future, and it should be exciting too, come on.