My Strength is the Sum of the Whole Class

Recommended by book friends in the book review area, the following is my book review Hello, I have read a few chapters. I will give you an objective evaluation of your book. If you don't like it, you can ignore it. The author can sign a contract for your book with about 20,000 words, and it is also a bit of writing power. The title of the book is simple and intuitive, telling readers the protagonist Goldfinger, and through the novelty and humor of the introduction, it attracts readers to click in and read the book. The writing is relatively smooth and the paragraphs are appropriate. It also keeps pace with the times and uses some memes to enhance readers' reading empathy. But there are some flaws. The protagonist Goldfinger's strength is the total strength of the entire class. The sum of dozens of foundation building stages plus dozens of Qi Condensation stages has raised his strength to the Nascent Soul stage? This is too unreasonable. Calculate, if you send a hundred or so foundation building periods, you can get through one Nascent Soul stage. Then it becomes increasingly difficult for me to cultivate immortality, so why should I continue to cultivate? Just train hundreds of people to the foundation stage and you can attack the Nascent Soul stage. The protagonist Golden Finger has upgraded the protagonist's strength to the Nascent Soul stage, but he has not trained to fight. He has great strength, but does not have the combat power to match it. The biggest boss of the novel is revealed prematurely. When talking about the realm in the first chapter, when it comes to the realm of strength and immortality, you have to fight against the ancient demons and gods. If this is considered the boss of the book, if you want to continue writing later, you will have to change the map. The above comments are just my personal opinion, you can delete them if you don't like them.

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