
When I Was Reborn, I Really Didn't Want to Be Chased Down
About This Novel
Bai Yueguang may have rejected you when he was young, but he can't reject you driving a Ferrari. However, when Chen Yang understood this truth, it was already too late. When my career was on the rise, I chose to be a god of pure love. The end result was that I was injured by green tea and lost everything. "The god of pure love? It's just synonymous with dog-licking." Fortunately, he was reborn in 2010, when business opportunities abounded. The first goal of rebirth is of course making money! But there is no woman in my heart, nor is there no woman around me. At this time, Chen Yang, who was once again at a crossroads in life, encountered a problem again. Was it the treasured girl who silently protected him in his previous life? Or the cold rich woman who suddenly descended from the sky?
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Take a look, the author's writing skills still need to be improved. The story's coherence and logic are a bit unsatisfactory. It's normal, everything grows slowly. Keep it up first and look forward to the follow-up
As a writer, you don't handle the emotional plot well. The other plots are pretty good, including the heroine. This is the first time I've seen such a bad emotional scene.
Now that I have read Chapter 58, I feel that it will be quite interesting, but there is a slight flaw in the relationship. People are so proactive. Even if you already have a plan in mind, you can at least give them a promise. The heroine is always worried about gains and losses, and you don't even know if you don't tell her. Also, I feel that the current number of female protagonists is enough. How to solve the problem of dual female protagonists in the later stage is a problem. Don't increase the number of people.
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Take a look, the author's writing skills still need to be improved. The story's coherence and logic are a bit unsatisfactory. It's normal, everything grows slowly. Keep it up first and look forward to the follow-up
As a writer, you don't handle the emotional plot well. The other plots are pretty good, including the heroine. This is the first time I've seen such a bad emotional scene.
Now that I have read Chapter 58, I feel that it will be quite interesting, but there is a slight flaw in the relationship. People are so proactive. Even if you already have a plan in mind, you can at least give them a promise. The heroine is always worried about gains and losses, and you don't even know if you don't tell her. Also, I feel that the current number of female protagonists is enough. How to solve the problem of dual female protagonists in the later stage is a problem. Don't increase the number of people.









