Be My Apprentice

Hello all book friends, I am a troll hired by other authors for 50 cents to destroy this book, because it is so well written, so (*￣m￣).

Most new authors are very approachable at first, but once they become popular, they begin to forget their roots! Just like an Internet celebrity who completely forgets his roots after waiting for a big hit, just like a certain person. For example, if he becomes popular, he will become a superior person and become a member of the upper class, while you are still a poor girl with nothing to do, just like an adult cannot continue to play with a three-year-old child. Although this is very realistic, it is also possible that most people will not forget their roots. But I hope the author won't be the one who forgets his roots!

Why do I feel so embarrassed looking at Yan Rouxue? There is a male in the body. Although he is a biological brother, I think of being seen by a member of the opposite sex while eating, drinking and having sex. And if my guess is correct, Yan Rouxue will be the heroine in the future. This. . . Really looks awkward

Guess the horror puzzle... Son: Dad, are there really ghosts in this world? Dad: No Son: Our nanny said there are ghosts in the world Dad: Son, run quickly Son: What's wrong, dad? Dad: Our family doesn't have a nanny at all. The son was about to pack his things and went back to the room to see the nanny. Nanny: What's wrong with you? You're in a panic. Son: Who are you? My dad said that the family never hired a nanny. The nanny was stunned: Your father has been dead for four years. The son was stunned and fell to the ground unconsciously. He hit the vase and fell to the ground. Passers-by outside the house: This house has not been lived in for five years, how come there are sounds? One of the four people above is a ghost. Which one is it?

The character Yan Rouxue is too disgusting. Luan Xueer traveled through mountains and rivers for Yan Rouxue and went through all kinds of hardships, although there is an element of willfulness. But the protagonist is doting on his own people, and is ruthless and unfair to Luan Xueer. His own people are his life, but Luan Xueer is not his life. If he still has his own choice, he is forced to do so. Can he die if he adopts one more person? I was excited when I saw the orange qualification. I felt deeply disgusted by Luan Yiyi's attitude towards the protagonist and the protagonist's faction. After seeing this, I didn't want to read anymore. I didn't read the rest, and I don't know if it has changed. I believe that many book friends will be disgusted by the paragraph about Luan Xueer, and many book friends will abandon the book during that paragraph. The other plots are okay, I hope the author changes it. Don't be too tragic, that will just make people sick.

"A drop of lovesickness tears on the stone of three lives, guarding the reincarnation on the bridge" reproduces the stone of love of three lives, which is destined to be the fate of the past life, the fate of this life and the fate of the next life. On the Sansheng Stone, there is a tear of lovesickness engraved on it. I am a fool but I don't know. On the Sansheng Stone, there is a tear of lovesickness. I have read it for a thousand years, waited for a thousand years, the flowers bloomed for a thousand years, and the flowers fell for a thousand years. The love on the Sansheng Stone has been seen for a thousand years, but I have never been able to love in this life. I have been in love for a thousand years, but I have missed it for a thousand years. Falling in love at first sight is like a thousand years of love. In my memory, you are that boy, and it is also like a thousand years of waiting. It seems like we have known each other for a thousand years, and we have known each other for a thousand years. You are full of affection, his eyes are blurred, and he tells with his eyes, endless love, thousands of years of reluctance, until forever...●This is a kind of love, that kind of feeling, just want to know each other and love each other until eternity. It's like being held by a thread... It feels like déjà vu, and there are so many words that I can't say, but for no reason, just because of the heartbeat at that moment, I want time to stand still and space to solidify... - Looking at you for a thousand years, your green hair is wrapped around your shoulders, and you come here and there, and I have been fascinated for half my life by looking at you for a thousand years. Next to the Sansheng Stone, flowers bloom on the other side. On the Naihe Bridge, there is a bowl of Meng Po soup. If you go down to the world of jade, I will look for you for thousands of years. The name engraved on the Sansheng Stone is a destined love, and the tears of lovesickness shed on the Sansheng Stone are a thousand years of waiting. Po Meng said: Love is poison. If you drink it, you will forget the grudges of your previous life and go to reincarnation with a new soul. The world has fallen with just one glance. You were born just for me. You were born before you were born. I am already old. Three lives are carved on the stone of three lives. We are destined to meet each other in this life, but it is not the right time. You are still shining brightly. I am already old and old, and we meet but cannot meet. Buddha said: As long as you turn into a flower and wait here for thousands of years, you will finally meet again.

At the beginning, the apprentice is always a girl. I already know the plot behind it.

Why are there always female apprentices? I get annoyed just by looking at them. They are like princesses and don't know how to adapt.

I really want to complain about the author's social attempts. If so, this guy named Liu is just a country bumpkin who didn't try it. There are even rumors in the world that those who can't be trifled with are those who can't be trifled with, and immortal cultivators are inherently dangerous in their fights. Here, if you are so arrogant, the sect should have been leveled long ago, okay... Immortal cultivators fight against the sky, and they have to kill each other at the slightest disagreement. If you look at this kind of situation here, you will doubt that the other party has a strong background... Because everyone who cultivates immortals here knows the name of Wanjian Sect, and the protagonist said that he is not afraid, but the person named Liu actually calls the protagonist a bumpkin? ? My God, do those who cultivate immortality have no brains? The Wanjian Sect had been destroyed long ago for being so arrogant. Is it okay to generally restrain your disciples? What's more, a person at the Golden Elixir level has cultivated to the Golden Elixir, so naturally he cannot be stupid (as most people think). So the person named Liu should worry about whether the other person has a strong background... The author, you are too tough to pretend to slap someone in the face and make enemies. Moreover, the system said that immortal martial arts cannot be evolved, but the protagonist actually did not take the initiative to try it. Can he experiment to find a skill by himself? It's like you have a few codes, no matter how rubbish or simple they are. Can't you try it yourself? Do you have to give it to someone else? Once you've figured out your skills, can't you get better in the future? I really want to laugh at this setting. Since there are so many skills, the protagonist never thought of trying to fuse and change them. Yu Feng can never change the wind pressure by himself, for example, reduce the wind power and increase the wind pressure to become Feng Ren Jue? ? The setting is like a third-level online game, the character description is weak, the pretentiousness and facial expressions are blunt, but it somehow manages to provoke the enemy, my God. The enemy didn't even care about the protagonist's background and just thought he was a casual cultivator? How can the enemy survive so big? They all say, they all say that the longer you live, the more you fear death, and don't tell me that purple qualifications are everywhere. An enemy in the golden elixir stage is thirty or forty years old? ? Which person with a normal physique is not hundreds of years old, golden elixir, (here refers to general qualifications) my God, a person who is hundreds of years old and a stupid young man... Don't think about the sect? ? Just like my father Li Gang cheated on the sect? ?

I didn't feel the style of Zhong Tian's novel, which was all about fighting and killing. Also, the method of absorbing stars is a trick. If you absorb a golden elixir, you will reach the golden elixir. Too poisonous. Your apprentice has improved so quickly that I have no sense of involvement. It feels too childish and not rigorous.