My Slime Friend

Author, who is the heroine? (Just read Chapters 1 and 2) The author is great. The previous chapters 1 and 2 are not good enough. It will dissuade people who like Moe King and some people (except those who like the protagonist). I hope the author will continue to improve in the future and give us a good-looking Moe King fan novel. (I don't like the current Moe King fan fiction. The subject matter you wrote, author, attracted me.) I hope you can optimize it.

There are things to complain about in the first two chapters. One is the name but the character's identity setting. For readers who have just read this book, it may be dissuaded, because I have had such an experience, but I did not give up. I read a few more chapters and ignored these problems. The others are still pretty good so far. The protagonist has not watched this anime. Starting from the beginning with Lao Shi is also a good review time if the author can write it well. Worth a look at the moment

There are many readers who have objections to the name of the protagonist, and some even think that I am using the heroic policeman's affairs for manipulation. Here is a unified explanation. Yang Xuefeng is my real name. This name is very common. Please don't make too many guesses. Of course, feel free to complain and joke as long as it doesn't go too far.

1. First of all, the name Xuefeng. I don't understand why Meng Wang chose such a name. Not to mention that Meng Wang is a neon man and his world view is also Western fantasy. The name is nondescript. Moreover, those who write Japanese comics and humanities about Mao all like to have Chinese names, which they don't understand and violate when reading novels. 2. The plot is too lame. In the early stage, it was a complete copy of the Moe King anime, with almost no changes. There is almost no difference whether the protagonist is added or not. 3. The protagonist was a Chinese and a Chinese soldier in his previous life, and he has never seen King of Meng. Why would he believe it unconditionally? 4. The protagonist is written too much like a puppet. He is almost born for the cute king. He has no selfish desires at all. He accelerates his growth because of the cute king's predators, helps the cute king build a country, takes a name with the cute king, and goes out because there is only one king in the country. You can't see the protagonist's own emotions at all. 5. Not to mention the emotional line. First, the princess of the big ghost clan fell in love at first sight, and then the protagonist's skill to enhance the charm of the opposite sex. It was so embarrassing. Then the vampire devil also had the feeling of "a kind of man, you caught my attention". There was also the relationship of the protagonist. I said I didn't understand it. First, the princess of the big ghost clan almost GG, and then the protagonist expressed his affection for her after saving her? Then there is Luminas. After saving her, the protagonist says that this is the person of my destiny? The emotional line is awkwardly written. 6. Finally, the Demon King recognizes his father. She just likes to play and be cute. She is not mentally retarded, and she is a fighting maniac. Will she recognize the protagonist as her father just because he smells like her father when she meets him for the first time? This forced recognition of relatives is really embarrassing.

By the way, the prologue was blocked for no reason after four or five days. I'm really helpless. I don't know how to change it without an editor. I'm sorry. . .

Good guy, I thought it was an ordinary slime when I read the title. When I came in and saw the introduction, I was dumbfounded.

So is it true that the cover was taken casually? There's even Exide on the cover

If the content does not meet the requirements, it cannot be published and I can only take screenshots.

The author would like to ask, is this one world or can the protagonist travel through multiple worlds?

I have only read twenty chapters of this book. What should I say? These twenty chapters follow the original plot too closely and there is nothing new. The score of more than nine points should be improved later. The first chapter is too close to the original book and the score should be lower. This problem must have been corrected later, right? Otherwise, the rating wouldn't be so high. If anyone has finished reading it, please tell me where it changed. I'll make sure I want to subscribe.