I Have Been Slaying Demons in the Demon Slayer Division for Thirty Years

The writing is very good. There is a desire to keep watching, it doesn't drag on, and the plot is well described. The character traits are described well enough. The Three Views are well written, but the shortcoming is that there are too many descriptions (some things are not easy to write, and some things are not written clearly enough. Although I use one or two sentences to vaguely introduce, the events are prioritized reasonably, the process of organization and arrangement, the configuration of characters, and the arrangement of the environment. And the overall layout, etc.), Minimalism, the writing is really good, three or four sentences are written well, try to divide it into several outline stories (hopefully there are story lines), it may be difficult, but I believe that people who write this kind of writing have a lot of room for improvement. This is my recognition of you. Come on! 👍 (Hope from an old bookworm)

Those who like mindless and cool writing should probably not read this book. The writing is impeccable and the descriptions of each character give people the impression that they were written the way they were originally written. Even the supporting characters are written with care, a bit similar to the feeling in the snow.

It feels weird since Ten Thousand Years of Mana, and the character of the protagonist looks completely different. In the dream, I felt that I was in trouble at home and actually rode home. There was an escape technique before, but now I am riding a horse. Can you imagine riding a horse with top-notch combat power in the world of cultivation? After that, he suddenly became compassionate, and at the same time he wanted to be evil and wanted to kill the culprit. The overall feeling was very strange.

Nowadays, almost every time traveler will follow the golden finger system, and the same is true for Zhou Yi. He also obtained the system when he just came here. The pills given by the system melt in the mouth, which is a lot of benefits for Zhou Yi.

Pig's Knuckle is really a bitch, and it was quite interesting at first. But after the fifty chapters, the character fell apart. They were obviously the most awesome group of people. Then if you don't like something, you just do it, just do it. You even do it in the name of others. When it gets too big, you throw away the mess and run away. You are really a friend. When you meet such a friend, it is easy for your family and your life to be ruined. I really accepted it.

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I don't know how a scumbag who betrays his wife and daughter for his lover and lets the innocent girl die for his wife who is kind to him have something to clean up? Also, seeing as the monsters the protagonist killed only killed a few people at most, they deserved to die. So isn't it an exaggeration to say that there was a drought in the world but the emperor did not allow rain and killed millions of people? We don't expect the protagonist to seek justice, but there's no psychological description at all? I saw the protagonist go home and kill the evil mountain god Qi Shu. I don't know what the protagonist meant when he said that this was not enough of a reason? No one appreciated the good weather for two hundred years, but a severe drought destroyed the mountain temple. Haha, the emperor obviously forbids rain, but those people came to destroy the mountain temple? This is also bullying the weak and fearing the strong. The emperor refused to let it rain and caused a severe drought in his pure territory, causing hundreds of people to die. Yet some people still praise the emperor as being like the King of ZTE? Is it really controllable by stupid people?

The picture below shows the calculation process of the abyss height in Chapter 2. Please correct me.

Let's not talk about the chaos of the realm. The protagonist has been practicing for thousands of years and is already the top person. Why do you pretend to be a grandson? If you are not strong enough, forget about it. You are almost invincible. You are still in this routine plot. Then wait for a few chapters and the protagonist will jump out to kill you, and then continue to cheat.

Kill demons just kill demons. It doesn't matter whether it's good or bad. After all, the protagonist is a human being, but it's disgusting to be a villain and build a memorial arch.