Overbearing

At the beginning of the novel, Chu Xisheng's appearance is quite satisfactory, with no obvious omissions. However, in a trial outside the martial arts hall, there were some minor flaws in the display and setting of the martial arts. How amazing is the protagonist's swordsmanship? What state did he reach after awakening? These problems were not fully depicted in the original work, leaving readers with a vague impression of the protagonist's strength. On the other hand, Ye Zhiqiu's cultivation level is profound, and even if he is suppressed below the ninth level, he can still steadily surpass the protagonist. This kind of refreshing feeling of "leapfrog challenge" was not successfully created in the original work. As for Chu Yunyun, her background description is not convincing enough, and she lacks the demeanor and style that a first-class master should have. There was a lack of mystery in her actions, her speech and behavior were too ordinary, and the relevant information was revealed too early, which was a bit abrupt. As for Qin Muge's identity, the author may not describe it in too much detail. In the plot of "Yai Can Tu", the premature appearance of the fourth-grade master is undoubtedly a major mistake of the author, which seriously reduces the style of the story. The author fails to fully describe the strength gap between different levels. For example, fifth- and sixth-level masters can easily kill seventh-level opponents with one sword. This is confusing - where is the difference in realm between fifth-level and sixth-level masters? Why does the appearance of a fifth-grade master become less mysterious with the same sword move? Fourth-grade Li Daogui also talked to the ninth-grade master when he was escaping. This kind of plot setting is really substandard. As a fourth-grade master, when he appears in the early stages of the story, the protagonist can only glimpse a dark shadow, and even his name cannot be known. This is in line with the demeanor and behavior of a fourth-grade master. As for the division of realms, the setting of nine levels and eighteen levels seems too cumbersome, and the difference in strength is not clear enough. After experiencing several subplots, the protagonist is still lingering below the ninth level. This golden finger setting has a fake, super and solid sense of existence, which seems quite embarrassing. Lu Luanli showed that the strength of the ninth grade can crush the protagonist. This setting is unconvincing. In comparison, it is better to simplify the realm division into grades one to nine, and if necessary, add other realms upwards. This way, at least some sense of anticipation and mystery can be retained. The setting of nine levels and eighteen realms is really hard to agree with.

I just want to know if the QQ reading of this book will be updated one day later? Why couldn't I see updates yesterday, but today I can only see yesterday's updates?

The writing, plot and logic are all right. It is a good book. Just to complain, I personally feel that it is too easy for subordinates to improve. The protagonist is exhausted and the subordinates can be promoted as long as the protagonist is the protagonist, and the gap is too big. The protagonist is cheating, and the protagonist under him is cheating. The problem is that the protagonist needs to work hard, but his subordinates are very relaxed. The protagonist is like a part-time worker.

I finally waited until the new book was released by the pioneering boss. I was the one who fell into the trap of Destiny Lord. I also read it and found it a bit sentimental and cliche. Personally, I like Destiny's style. It has a huge and diversified world view and a single female protagonist... I hope that the new book will be better and the plot will be more colorful and novel.

Chu Yunyun was like an extremely dexterous civet cat, moving quickly through the night. She couldn't use her martial arts essence, but her physical body was still the 'impeccable golden body' of a first-level martial artist. Not only is there no sound when walking, but the breath is also condensed to the extreme. Although martial arts masters from the Zhengyang Martial Arts School patrolled and kept vigil along the way, no trace of her could be found. Even if Chu Yunyun walked by them, these martial arts masters would not notice it at all. It feels unreasonable. You are so strong, but you still have to worry about dozens of taels of magic silver? Worry

Is this character template intended to be used to mass-produce Qin Muge later? Everyone is like a dragon? ? ?

The protagonist couple came out of the urn, right? Otherwise, the prince's burial objects could be eaten and drank with just a few cheap ones, but how could he be so poor?

No update today? QQ Reading is ruined to the end, right? Don't play if you can't afford it. You can just withdraw the book from your membership.

No, there are already 522 chapters in the starting point, and also on the browser. I have read more than QQ Reading. Well, I originally signed up as a QQ Reading member just to read the author's books, but it turned out to be really sad. Why? Just want to know the reason.

I don't understand this. Aren't women physically powerful? There are many bad people. Are they still short of money?