Mystery: Fire and the Fool's Path

Haha I have no idea what I want to do Undoubtedly rubbish I feel like the author didn't know what he was going to write from the beginning I wrote about women, and then took the hunter route to change gender, but then teamed up with Xiao Ke. It is obvious that I will change my gender in the future and will not change. The name is already called Fiery, which is a million words, and it is still in the seventh sequence. The plot setting is unreasonable, and the characters are not OCC. After all, they are basically copying the original text. So what is OCC? You can say that you deleted the protagonist of this work Basically, it is equivalent to reading the original text. This also explains why there is still sequence seven after a million words. Generally speaking, if the fan fiction has the original work as a background, there is no need to spend so much time introducing the world view, but unfortunately this is just a novel that copies the original text. All the actions of the protagonist will not affect the development of the storyline. So what's the point of you? Why don't you read the original text? I can only say that it is worthy of being a daily flash sale (the flash sales are all free, and apart from the works that have been completed for a long time, the works in it are basically shit)

I want to know about this book. The protagonist is a rich girl who receives a lot of money every month, but for a discount of less than 100 pounds, she gets involved in a mess when she has not become a transcendent (or the original person was, but the protagonist is no longer after time travel). Can't she become a transcendent first and then take risks? If the protagonist goes on his own, he is complaining about his original adventure. Sooner or later, something will happen, but what about himself? At first, I read about 20 chapters. When I encountered this point, I thought the protagonist really had no money. But later on, I saw that the protagonist had several thousand pounds in the bank, so what? Is this designed just to let the protagonist go to Argentina?

It's so shocking. The protagonist only has fifteen pounds of pocket money a month to take risks in order to get tens of pounds of cheaper materials. He can obviously directly buy the materials and the subsequent 400 pounds of formulas. A normal ordinary person who has not yet stepped into the extraordinary realm even if he is very rich will definitely step into Sequence Nine and buy the Sequence Eight formula when he encounters an opportunity. For a problem that can be solved with only a small amount of money for me, I have to take the risk to remain an ordinary person and spend a lot of time dealing with a fraudster who is obviously an extraordinary person, just to save a small amount of money that is not painful to me. Also, why are the protagonists always characterized as bargaining? I have never seen a young boy who learned how to bargain from his mother and happily used it at all times. He is really unpleasant and has no sense of humor.

The promotion is a bit slow, but everything else is good. I really hope that the protagonist, a demigod, will turn to his own path to remain female and gain CP.

By the way, do you see a lot of men wearing women's clothes like this nowadays?

The protagonist accepted someone else's commission for a discount of dozens of pounds. It's not like the protagonist can't afford it, so there's no need to trick him like this. Besides, the protagonist's uncle also said before that he wanted to see how far the protagonist can do it, so he probably won't care about the protagonist's things.

If you change your marriage, I will give you a five-star rating!

Not recommended to watch, the water is a mess

There are no big mistakes in this article. It doesn't feel like Yog-Sothoth, it looks a bit like Nyarlathotep.

Although part of the plot is indeed not particularly reasonable, for me, the flaws are not concealed (the following are almost all my favorite points haha, they are what made me happy during the reading process, I have posted them everywhere 😂 I mainly hope that the author can see it and finish it according to the original setting 🙏) First of all, it is very consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also somewhat similar. Some people say that it is "copying the original work", but I really like this kind of mixing of the original work with my personal style. The writing style is complicated; I don't think it's a big problem to write the world view again. After all, most people can't remember all the settings of the mystery. Besides, it's not a direct copy and paste from the original work. Secondly, I also like this strange setting. I really think it's interesting for a man to dress as a woman and then change into a man. From the content of the article, it seems that Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke will not be together (after all, they are both straight men, which fits the original setting) and they have never been directly described. Xiao Ke and Xiao Gu have that kind of very direct generalized love. I feel that I prefer the shyness and awkwardness brought about by the identity of a man and a woman, which is similar to the shyness and awkwardness between men and women, but the essence is the same as Xiao Gu thinks - a pure revolutionary friendship, a deeper dependence than generalized love, that is, soul mates. I like this kind of sincere interdependence (probably because I like Platonic love) Love) is more interesting than the secular love on the street, so I hope the author can maintain the original setting: after all, Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke are originally straight men. It is weird to change back to men and then return to secular love. It is even weirder that Xiao Gu is still a girl and then falls in love with Xiao Ke, and it is also inconsistent with the setting. They were both men for 22 years. How could they be willing to be women just because they lived as girls for one or two years? It's very strange. I hope the author will not be affected by other influences, keep the original "Fire Setting", don't change the sequence, and don't come up with anything beyond the original setting (for example, Xiao Gu still can't change back to a man in sequence 4, it's just a setting to save the girl). After changing back to a man, he can get along with Xiao Ke more naturally, and continue to deepen the revolutionary friendship and become a double male protagonist. It will be good (but at first I saw that they were misunderstood by others) It's a really interesting couple, hahaha. I hope there are more plots like this🥰Especially during Hermann's time, the scandal of the cold-faced adventurer is definitely very interesting hahaha) Then, I personally feel that the pace is just right, because I am a careful reader, so I can't read the original work for too long, and I feel like I am forced to accept too much knowledge and my brain can't wrap my head around it () I also take notes along the way, otherwise I will forget it soon. But this book allows me to take my time and read it leisurely. I feel quite comfortable. Finally, I hope the author will not cheat. I really like this book. Some people say that the plot of the original book has not changed much, but I think for a time traveler who does not know the plot of the original book, Xiao Gu has tried his best. Important historical nodes are difficult to change, not to mention that he does not know the inside story at all. This development is very consistent with the setting. And I like the changes he brought even more: Xiaoke is no longer lonely, the characters I love are no longer gone, and the changes in the East District also make me feel that the dark background of the mysterious world has a little more beauty and light. I even hope that this is the development of the original work. The original work is very exciting, but when I put it into context, the darkness and distortion really made me feel sad and scared. But this book gave me a little hope and comfort and made me feel beautiful. I am very grateful to the author for keeping my eyes open. Li Xin 🙏🙏🙏 (Especially for people like me who are crazy followers of Xiaoke➕without CP. Seeing that Xiaoke is no longer lonely and has someone to accompany him, I am really happy and touched. This kind of bond is really more interesting and reasonable than love😭So I really beg the author to keep the original setting and finish it😭🙏🙏🙏)