
Wasteland Storm
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Welcome back, Commander! You've saved New York, you've saved Moscow, you've even saved Tokyo. You have experienced countless battles and are invincible. But next, you will face bigger problems. Your enemies are completely different from before. Are you ready? (The new book "The Final Storm" has been released. It is a Red Alert novel, but if you have not played Red Alert, you will not have dyslexia. Book club: 854115290)
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Official(64)Scraped 10d ago
The official sign-in building built by the author!
I read that other novels have a lot of sign-in floors, why is there not one in this book? After much thought, the author decided to build a sign-in building by himself! An additional chapter has been added to the 100th floor, everyone is welcome to be reasonable!
The original title of this book is "Red Alert: Wasteland Storm". Old readers must not delete it by mistake!
The original name of this book was "Red Alert: Wasteland Storm". Later, due to the author's various considerations, he finally decided to change the name to "Wasteland Storm". However, the mainstream content of Red Alert will not change. Readers who like Red Alert, please rest assured! In addition, the book has been signed, so you can enter the game with confidence!
He always puts himself in danger. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have died! If you have nothing to do, go to the enemy's house opposite to play! I am also speechless. You must know that you are the leader and not a soldier! Why doesn't the enemy leader come to your house to have a look?
I discovered something serious
Author, you really like to delete comments. All the comments in the comment section are five-star reviews. Is there only one with one star and one with two stars? A lot of others are all five-star reviews. The average result is only 6.4 Damn I love deleting comments.
I'm just commenting from my point of view
I looked at it and found it to be a pretty good Red Alert theme. Most of the other Red Alerts were just trying to make a bunch of things that the Red Alert didn't have, or they just created a bunch of heroine units or gave up other Red Alert technologies and just let engineers invent the technology. But it was too uncomfortable in the early stages. A protagonist who had just parted ways with his little girlfriend traveled through time as if nothing happened. Then there was the one who kept using a gun to speak cruel words to the protagonist and asked the protagonist to help get food for free. It would have been better if he had just added a sentence or two. After that, the author, did you get high? From now on, if you give me food or I will kill you, it will be like the old man in the mental hospital holding two kitchen knives and saying that if you don't give me good things, I will chop you to death. One moment, you will act like a calm person, and the next, you will act like a madman. There is also a paragraph where I feel that the protagonist is unusual, and then the next second, if you don't give me food, I will kill you. This is how sane you are. It's like a person who thinks that a stranger dropped a few wads of one hundred yuan on the ground. The next second, he thinks that this stranger is extraordinary. The next second, he thinks that he is a second-generation rich man or a second-generation official. He will chop you to death if he doesn't give you money. He doesn't think twice about this.
I found that I always had an inexplicable feeling when I read this book.
It made me feel a little uncomfortable. After thinking about it, I finally found that there should be some problems with the author's changes between plots. There is no foreshadowing in the middle, and the timeline changes are not clear. Often there may be only a few days between the upper and lower chapters. Sometimes it is difficult to switch between the upper and lower chapters. It is a bit uncomfortable, that is, the narrative is a bit confusing? But fortunately, the author has done a good job in other aspects, which made me continue to read it. But if the author can improve these problems, more people will read this book, and the results will be better. In short, cheers for the author! By the way, I haven't seen the paid chapters yet. If it will be better after the author puts it on the shelves, then what I say is nonsense.
Long suite building
Some characters will appear in the near future, mainly grassroots officers and non-commissioned officers of the Red Police Force and Militia Force, as well as leaders and important figures of various survivor forces. You can leave a message below to sign up to be a supporting actor for this book. Note that except for Yuriko and the possible appearance of Yuri, no one else in this book has superpowers. Mutations like wild orcs don't count. Therefore, when everyone signs up to be a supporting role, do not use supernatural powers such as fire magic, ice magic, war god, sword master, etc. In addition, the more powerful characters may appear later, such as the leader of a super power, the final boss, etc., They will definitely appear at the end. Also, it's best to Chineseize your name. Currently, you won't encounter many foreigners on the plateau. Well, that's it.
Friends who like this book can join the Penguin Book Club: 854115290 (Steam Storm)
Be careful of being blocked
In the Red Alert series of novels, Wasteland Commander was banned because of the military association. It is recommended not to write about the military association and the establishment of the army.
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Official(64)Scraped 10d ago
The official sign-in building built by the author!
I read that other novels have a lot of sign-in floors, why is there not one in this book? After much thought, the author decided to build a sign-in building by himself! An additional chapter has been added to the 100th floor, everyone is welcome to be reasonable!
The original title of this book is "Red Alert: Wasteland Storm". Old readers must not delete it by mistake!
The original name of this book was "Red Alert: Wasteland Storm". Later, due to the author's various considerations, he finally decided to change the name to "Wasteland Storm". However, the mainstream content of Red Alert will not change. Readers who like Red Alert, please rest assured! In addition, the book has been signed, so you can enter the game with confidence!
He always puts himself in danger. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have died! If you have nothing to do, go to the enemy's house opposite to play! I am also speechless. You must know that you are the leader and not a soldier! Why doesn't the enemy leader come to your house to have a look?
I discovered something serious
Author, you really like to delete comments. All the comments in the comment section are five-star reviews. Is there only one with one star and one with two stars? A lot of others are all five-star reviews. The average result is only 6.4 Damn I love deleting comments.
I'm just commenting from my point of view
I looked at it and found it to be a pretty good Red Alert theme. Most of the other Red Alerts were just trying to make a bunch of things that the Red Alert didn't have, or they just created a bunch of heroine units or gave up other Red Alert technologies and just let engineers invent the technology. But it was too uncomfortable in the early stages. A protagonist who had just parted ways with his little girlfriend traveled through time as if nothing happened. Then there was the one who kept using a gun to speak cruel words to the protagonist and asked the protagonist to help get food for free. It would have been better if he had just added a sentence or two. After that, the author, did you get high? From now on, if you give me food or I will kill you, it will be like the old man in the mental hospital holding two kitchen knives and saying that if you don't give me good things, I will chop you to death. One moment, you will act like a calm person, and the next, you will act like a madman. There is also a paragraph where I feel that the protagonist is unusual, and then the next second, if you don't give me food, I will kill you. This is how sane you are. It's like a person who thinks that a stranger dropped a few wads of one hundred yuan on the ground. The next second, he thinks that this stranger is extraordinary. The next second, he thinks that he is a second-generation rich man or a second-generation official. He will chop you to death if he doesn't give you money. He doesn't think twice about this.
I found that I always had an inexplicable feeling when I read this book.
It made me feel a little uncomfortable. After thinking about it, I finally found that there should be some problems with the author's changes between plots. There is no foreshadowing in the middle, and the timeline changes are not clear. Often there may be only a few days between the upper and lower chapters. Sometimes it is difficult to switch between the upper and lower chapters. It is a bit uncomfortable, that is, the narrative is a bit confusing? But fortunately, the author has done a good job in other aspects, which made me continue to read it. But if the author can improve these problems, more people will read this book, and the results will be better. In short, cheers for the author! By the way, I haven't seen the paid chapters yet. If it will be better after the author puts it on the shelves, then what I say is nonsense.
Long suite building
Some characters will appear in the near future, mainly grassroots officers and non-commissioned officers of the Red Police Force and Militia Force, as well as leaders and important figures of various survivor forces. You can leave a message below to sign up to be a supporting actor for this book. Note that except for Yuriko and the possible appearance of Yuri, no one else in this book has superpowers. Mutations like wild orcs don't count. Therefore, when everyone signs up to be a supporting role, do not use supernatural powers such as fire magic, ice magic, war god, sword master, etc. In addition, the more powerful characters may appear later, such as the leader of a super power, the final boss, etc., They will definitely appear at the end. Also, it's best to Chineseize your name. Currently, you won't encounter many foreigners on the plateau. Well, that's it.
Friends who like this book can join the Penguin Book Club: 854115290 (Steam Storm)
Be careful of being blocked
In the Red Alert series of novels, Wasteland Commander was banned because of the military association. It is recommended not to write about the military association and the establishment of the army.

















