Setting up a Stall Starts with Malatang
by Ye Chaofan
About This Novel
A mediocre story about setting up a stall written by an author who has worked in catering. Although it is systematic, it has little impact. It is not a cool novel, and there are only a few supporting female characters.
What Readers Think
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Official(13)Scraped 17d ago
My writing capacity is limited, please bear with me.
Recently, some readers have reported that the protagonist is too stunned. Maybe it's because I prefer to use the word dazed. In my opinion, it is unrealistic for an 18-year-old dropout who just started his own business to become as savvy in one month. During the writing process, I also incorporated a lot of my own feelings when I first opened the store. Many of the scenes were the mistakes I had suffered before. It's okay to give opinions, and it's okay if you don't like them. I hope you won't curse people. Some people feel that the plot is not exciting enough, there are no beauties, and there is no sudden wealth. This is related to my personal style. I know that the get-rich system is popular at the starting point, and you can become stronger by breathing, but I don't like it very much. Although the food system is already a golden thigh, I still hope to proceed step by step. If the pace is slow, I can collect it first, and occasionally vote. These popular elements will gradually appear. This book has been signed. No matter how busy I am at work, I will try my best to update it every day until it is published.
Let me comment objectively
First of all, the author's writing style is quite good and suitable for writing novels, but the plot is too cliche and the emotional line is not very well written. Come on, the author writes more and practices more!
Coming
Actually, I really hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. Lately I've been enjoying reading novels without female protagonists. This book is also good, thank you to the author＾0＾~
May I ask who the heroine of the author is?
Who is the heroine?
Who is the heroine of the author? Is it Xiaoshuang? Is there a female protagonist? I have decided not to continue watching.
Not for my taste
First, the protagonist is a fool, like a fool, and should be persuaded to quit. Anyone who has seen it should feel this way! Second, some settings are unreasonable or unclear, resulting in some things being made out of nothing.
Overall, it was okay, but I didn't like the character of the main character.
Does the system have little impact?
It seems that the introduction of your book is systematic and has little impact? Everything is a system but it's of little use?
this
This is the end, I still have more to say
You can watch it at the beginning. The more you watch the protagonist, the more he looks like a fool.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 17d ago
My writing capacity is limited, please bear with me.
Recently, some readers have reported that the protagonist is too stunned. Maybe it's because I prefer to use the word dazed. In my opinion, it is unrealistic for an 18-year-old dropout who just started his own business to become as savvy in one month. During the writing process, I also incorporated a lot of my own feelings when I first opened the store. Many of the scenes were the mistakes I had suffered before. It's okay to give opinions, and it's okay if you don't like them. I hope you won't curse people. Some people feel that the plot is not exciting enough, there are no beauties, and there is no sudden wealth. This is related to my personal style. I know that the get-rich system is popular at the starting point, and you can become stronger by breathing, but I don't like it very much. Although the food system is already a golden thigh, I still hope to proceed step by step. If the pace is slow, I can collect it first, and occasionally vote. These popular elements will gradually appear. This book has been signed. No matter how busy I am at work, I will try my best to update it every day until it is published.
Let me comment objectively
First of all, the author's writing style is quite good and suitable for writing novels, but the plot is too cliche and the emotional line is not very well written. Come on, the author writes more and practices more!
Coming
Actually, I really hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. Lately I've been enjoying reading novels without female protagonists. This book is also good, thank you to the author＾0＾~
May I ask who the heroine of the author is?
Who is the heroine?
Who is the heroine of the author? Is it Xiaoshuang? Is there a female protagonist? I have decided not to continue watching.
Not for my taste
First, the protagonist is a fool, like a fool, and should be persuaded to quit. Anyone who has seen it should feel this way! Second, some settings are unreasonable or unclear, resulting in some things being made out of nothing.
Overall, it was okay, but I didn't like the character of the main character.
Does the system have little impact?
It seems that the introduction of your book is systematic and has little impact? Everything is a system but it's of little use?
this
This is the end, I still have more to say
You can watch it at the beginning. The more you watch the protagonist, the more he looks like a fool.
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