If Reality is Gamified

After the protagonist enters college, the author's description of the plot and the character's dialogue are extremely embarrassing. There is also the singing and goose-stepping. It's really embarrassing. Why does the author think this can be pretentious? Also, the dialogue about the previous competition for class president was also awkward. I don't understand why the author wrote this plot about being the class president. Also, the female president was so nice to the male protagonist for no reason. She borrowed a 2 million luxury car at any time. Even if she did a favor and got a contract, there was no need for it. It was written like this. It was weird. The author wouldn't just keep writing about campus pretense like this, right? It's really unbearable to watch. The supporting characters are talking about trivial things like they are elementary school students. I suggest the author change the background to kindergarten to elementary school instead of high school to college.

The subject matter is good. You are the originator of this type of subject matter. I have read almost a thousand books (some are fragmented, some are restricted, and some are enriched). There are three or four hundred in QQReading. This is the first five-star book.

In the early stage, the writing was quite good, but in the later stage, the writing got worse and worse, and I got stuck in the student union and couldn't get out? The protagonist is still a student

The classmates around him all turned into NPCs, and they could also see their levels and attributes. After passing various experiments, Chen Yilang finally realized that being able to see the game board was like a golden finger bound to him.

Isn't this a bit embarrassing?

What if life became a game, classmates, teachers, and relatives all became NPCs, everything could be explained by the system, and everything that needed to be done became tasks.

In fact, I don't think the protagonist should accept any mission. When I saw that you didn't have a lot of money to write the protagonist, I was thinking: This book is very good and much more real than other urban novels. But when I saw the e-sports scene, I felt it was a bit fake and outrageous. The protagonist was about to become a decathlete, which was different from what I expected. I hope the author would take a look. (This is the longest day I've ever commented in a book club)

It's a bad ending. It's just one word. I don't want to say anything. I'm speechless.

The author challenges his own weaknesses and updates four times a day😎️😎️

The voice-over was cut, so I can update this.