My Surname is Wang

I thought I had found a good book, but the further I read, the more awkward it becomes. If you write it in a modern way (although I don't think it is modern), what you want to write about is a dynasty. The prince and the emperor eating barbecue together are like brothers and friends eating barbecue together at the barbecue stall at night. There is no foreshadowing, and the second is inappropriate. The lack of foreshadowing is that a prince who only meets once a month behaves like a brother with deep feelings. What is inappropriate is that even if there is foreshadowing, there are palace maids and eunuchs by his side. Normally, this will not happen.

I just read the latest chapter, and the heroine rolled her eyes. Lao Ba thought it was unique. It's understandable that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. But judging from the content of the book, I personally don't see why Wang Biquan fell in love with Yan Rongrong. If it was just to have a female protagonist, there is no need to write it like this, it feels too abrupt. Coupled with Yan Rongrong's character setting and the descriptions of the few appearances, it is really unimaginable. You can consider changing the heroine. The overall design of the book is okay, with strategies, chivalry, and dramatic conflicts. I look forward to the following content. The author could really seriously consider changing the heroine

I see that there is a lot of controversy over the first two chapters, mainly focusing on the protagonist letting the assassin go, and then being surprised that no one assassinated him. First of all, we are neither immortal cultivators nor martial arts masters, so we cannot generalize about their strength. The protagonist is currently only tempering his body. Apart from a substitute technique, he has no other techniques, such as shrinking to an inch or killing with a sword, so his strength is only at the level of a top master. Secondly, he has no determination to kill, and the assassin buys time by placing a hidden weapon close to his face. Then, the enemy around the protagonist is never the same person, which I have been writing about, so when the number of enemies is uncertain, it does not mean that if one is repelled, the others will not take action. After all, the villains will not get together to collude with intelligence. So it's normal for the protagonist to wonder why no one assassinated him. And even if this fails, you can still find a more powerful killer. The article will also mention later that there are many people who are equal to or even stronger than the protagonist. From the beginning of the book to now, I have tried my best to write in a balanced way. I don't want to write an invincible flow that has a smooth journey and is quick to meet everyone, nor do I want to write a protagonist who is invincible at the same level and kills people at higher levels. Thank you all for your support.

It's quite good. It's humorous in the early stage. The protagonist Xianyu has a sense of justice, but not a holy mother. It's close to daily life. It's easy to read without being abusive. However, the plot has gradually heated up recently, and various hermit bosses have come out to compete for the throne.

The recent plot has gradually reached its climax. The dynasty is fighting for the throne. The old men and women are often capable and strangers. The emperor's secret guard leader has also come out. The hidden old monster's strength is beyond the limit. The second child has successfully escaped from the capital. The next step should be to raise an army to rebel, and the protagonist Lao Ba is on his way back on horseback.

Qingxing and her sister Hongxing are both the oirans of the Zuixing Tower. At this time, Wang Biquan is in an antagonistic relationship with Wang Pingyu, the man behind the Zuixing Tower. When the protagonist Wang Biquan inquires about information from Hongxing, why does Qingxing say something to remind him, "Young Master, please do what you want"? But later Wang Bingqian failed, Hongxing followed Wang Bingqian and left, but Qingxing was missing. Is this reasonable? This is unreasonable! Author, Qing Xing must have a role in the future, right? ? ?

It's been a bit esoteric since the war, and I gradually started to not understand it.

I don't see anything about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, only waves from head to toe.

I don't understand. If you don't want to be an emperor, why should you worry about the rebellion, disaster relief, muskets, and cultivating immortals? If you don't want to be an emperor, why should you worry about these things?

As a historical text that travels through ancient dynasties, it incorporates elements of farming and cultivating immortality, and writes new ideas. There were some minor pitfalls in the early stages such as the assassin incident, but the overall plot is getting better and better, making people look forward to subsequent developments. It's just that the emotional scenes are a bit awkward. I really don't understand the relationship with Yan Rongrong. It's very abrupt. I hope it can be improved in the future.