I Live Forever under One Person

The writing is really not that good. If you don't understand the background and the characters, why write a fanfic? Did you know that one person is also called a hot-blooded old man? The younger generation is more sinister than the last, and the older generation is more passionate than the other. Even if you don't understand the fanfic, this fanfic is completely wrong. The second creation must be based on the foundation of the original work to build a building. If you want to build a high-rise building on the ground, Sister Baoer started from Zhang Chulan's novel. I watched them at that time. Don't say you just left after watching them fight. If you met Zhang Chulan a few times while eating, Xu San and Si could find out the eighteenth generation of your ancestors. If you can't understand the original work, go to the next station B to find a video and learn it carefully.

To put it bluntly, you know too little about the original work. It's better not to travel through time. Just write fan fiction. Adding a character abruptly has little effect on the development of the plot. There is no difference between writing and not writing.

That was just Hua Sheng's feeling. The world he came to was different from the previous world. Only later with his father's guidance did he slowly discover the differences in this world.

Anyone who has watched Renren's anime will know that Lu Linglong is a high-profile character who is usually dull-witted, but will not panic when encountering big problems. It can be seen from the Quanxing Siege of Longhu Mountain that Lu Linglong knows right and wrong. However, when the protagonist escapes to the island this time, the protagonist made an explanation before departure. He hopes that Lu Linglong can help him take care of his family. Then she can stay in Shaanxi. Why is she running around? What's the use of her running over? The soldiers have more combat power than her, one is not more than the other, so it is better to let her guard the house well, so that the protagonist can still seek opportunities to develop his power. Instead of like this, Lu Linglong followed him stupidly. Also, couldn't the author change his mind when writing it? The protagonist goes dark, then destroys the boss, loses himself, and then the heroine appears, and the protagonist finds himself again. This most clichéd plot is better than the current heroine.

In the early stage, Lu Linglong was too smart. I couldn't stand the first ten chapters. She said she didn't want to get involved in the alien world, and she helped Zhang Chulan for no reason. What did the author think?

The routine of ten years ago, whatever the protagonist gets, he will be beaten badly, and then whatever he gets again, the cycle continues.

Come on come on! Hope to achieve good results

The Eight Magic Skills have been belittled from the beginning, and in just one chapter, they are belittled several times overtly and covertly. Gee, the grapes are so sour! And Lu Linglong stalked the pig's feet as soon as they met. Why are you so pinched? There are too many plot points that are embarrassing and full of poisonous points.

I hope it's Chen Duo, I hope this book is as popular as the Fox Demon one

In the following plot, the protagonist's father died, and he was pierced through the heart by the protagonist's hand. This had a great impact on the protagonist. In the following chapters, the author also described the protagonist's mentality very well. However, it's not that the author forgot about the protagonist's father because of too long a period of time or something in the following chapters. The first step is to explain the funeral affairs, and prepare to seek opportunities and gain the power of revenge. The second step is to arrange for the heroine to search for the hero thousands of miles away and fall in love sweetly. I really don't know what the author is thinking. In some places, it's good for the protagonist to be alone. There is no need for the male and female protagonists to follow each other closely. Similarly, the protagonist's father is dead. The person who has raised him for more than 20 years, even if he is a time traveler, even if he is a white-eyed wolf, must have a lot of feelings for his father. According to the setting here, the protagonist should turn dark, because whoever he encounters in this matter will turn dark. At the very least, he won't be able to forgive until his revenge is successful. This is what many readers want to see.