Staying in the World of Martial Arts, I Picked up Entries on All Things

Idiot, Qinggong requires reminders to know it is useful. Kill coins.

Forget it if you write about modern times. What you write is fantasy. He didn't even dare to kill a handyman who bullied him. Write a fantasy novel about Mao

Your opening seems very boring. There are too many written like this. I'm a bit tired of reading them. You learn martial arts from a master, then join the court, or open a martial arts gym. There is nothing new. You might as well open a hotel.

I just happened to read the latest chapter, and I can't really compliment the author's writing skills. The characters of the supporting characters in the early stages of the novel fell apart in the later stages. The whole novel is very fragmented. Many places want to be tragic but in the end it feels like reading a mock novel. There is no sense of substitution at all. It is not that enjoyable as a novel. I just say that it does not overwhelm the protagonist's level and the cheating is quite reasonable. Although there are many logical loopholes, if you really don't have anything to read, this book can be read to pass the time.

After all, he is a new author, and being a little poisonous is a common problem. The protagonist is too awkward to pretend, and he is pretending for the sake of pretending. In the life and death arena, there is no need to talk nonsense, and the protagonist can directly start the ring instead of waiting for the opponent and then preach to Wang Jie afterwards. No doubt at all? The protagonist has clearly talked about eye skills, so he has to be suspicious of Dianshi and the female family to some extent (to express his attitude). In his spare time, the author can read good reference works written by similar martial arts, and read through the comment sections. Basically, good and bad will be pointed out in the comment section, so as to brainstorm ideas😣

You have to read the anti-theft chapter if you subscribe, it's really interesting

It's not bad, it keeps people watching, and I hope the follow-up will be more exciting.

There is also a chapter on anti-theft, and I am not in the mood to read it.

The author is really a genius. The anti-theft chapter got a lot of free subscriptions.

The golden finger is too wide, and it's not interesting. Let's put it this way. If the protagonist touches a dead martial saint in front of him, he will become a martial saint.