Daojun: I Have a Monument to Enlightenment

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the plot rhythm is wrong! This is not the traditional Taoist or mortal stream. Since the author is writing about the sect's genius start, the rhythm is seriously wrong! The protagonist Gou Daoliu lacks skills, resources, and backers at the beginning, so the Qi training plot can be longer, because the protagonist needs to use plug-ins to monetize the game, and also collect the required skills and resources. In this way, there will be a lot of plots to write, and it will not be too boring to watch. However, the protagonist of this book has a plug-in that ignores the bottleneck, and has obtained top-level skills and top-level skill inheritance at the beginning, and has a top-notch sect as a backer. As long as the performance is relatively talented and outstanding (as long as the protagonist deliberately controls his performance to keep up with the first level of the sect's genius), there will be no shortage of resources. This makes it unnecessary to write more plots in the early stage, because the plots of the Qi training period and even the foundation building period are not attractive. This kind of novel that starts with a large number of sect geniuses has conflicts and conflicts that are difficult to write! Either write a cross-dressing style, or be a big boss behind the scenes and recruit disciples or cultivate a family, or write a world crisis style (such as Weird, Demon Realm, etc.) To force King Kuanglan, or change the style and write the protagonist changes the map and opens a new map after the sect collapses. Generally speaking, this kind of start is not suitable for writing the kind of "mortal flow" plot where one rises step by step. Moreover, this kind of panel is very taboo because the data is not clear. Upgrading the data blur will indeed allow the author to better control the rhythm, but it will also make the reader lose the sense of substitution. This kind of cheat must be written clearly, how many days can the protagonist improve a little proficiency without using resources, how many days can he improve a little proficiency after using spiritual food and elixirs, etc. This will definitely be more difficult to write, but the reader will have a strong sense of substitution and a strong sense of anticipation. If an online novel wants to do well, it must either be well-written with Goldfinger's imagination to increase the reader's sense of involvement and expectation, or the plot must be very strong and story-telling to attract readers. If it has both, it is basically a work that will definitely be a god. On the contrary, if it doesn't have both, there is a high probability that the result will not be very good! In short, in my personal opinion, after reading the product in one go, and then flipping through the catalog, I felt uninterested! To put it bluntly, I have no expectations for the future development of the protagonist in the book!

Can you still not catch up with others after 16 years? ? ? You golden finger, learn a sub-career before it can take off.

With your cultivation level, you only talk about elixirs? You don't need anything but resources, right? Otherwise, you, the golden finger, can just learn a talisman and you won't be unqualified in cultivation.

There are at least a few female protagonists, right? There are at least a few female protagonists, right?

It's enough that the protagonist borrows money from others and lends it to others

He didn't write about the Immortal Lord of Ten Thousand Beasts either.

This book is pretty good. Take your time. All novels grow slowly. Just like Qinglian, things didn't go smoothly at the beginning. They only gain popularity later. You have to write more good books, and at least books with ratings above 9.0 Can be considered successful. Your book writing experience needs to be gradually improved.

It's better to concentrate on writing your Ten Thousand Beasts Immortal Lord. You can't write one well, and you still want to write two at the same time. It's all water.

Zongmen cultivating immortal family Zongmen cultivating immortal family

It's not enough. It's not enough. It's not enough.