Perfect: the Immortal King Starts the Game, Bearing the Name of Kong Xuan!
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Introduction The sea of boundaries has no boundaries and has been dead for eternity. Only the remaining world is ups and downs, which is the end of the world. However, a figure actually triggered the Immortal King's calamity wave here. The calamity cloud covered trillions of miles, and the lightning was like a prison, shocking the silence of the heavens. All thoughts looked down indifferently, regarding the true immortal in this calamity as a mayfly shaking a tree, and instantly regarded it as dust. But I saw the five-color divine light rising into the sky, sweeping away the thunder prison, annihilating all dharma, and rolling back into the sky! The dark giant was horrified: "What method is this?!" Qin Feng's green shirt fluttered and he smiled calmly: "This is just a little bit of innate Taoist roots." Inheriting the origin of the first peacock in the world, and bearing the blood feud for the overthrow of the Yuanyang Ancient World, he managed to survive in the danger of the sea and fell into a place called the Primitive Ancient World. However, as soon as it arrived, it attracted the solemn scrutiny of the guardian of this world, the Immortal Monk King. In front of you, there is the Immortal King staring and investigating, while behind you, there are the minions of darkness raging in the borderlands. This world's spiritual power is exhausted, its laws are incomplete, and its undercurrents are as turbulent as the abyss. Wherever Qin Feng steps, the five-color divine light is dim and uncertain, searching for the innate residual charm among ancient ruins to benefit himself. Wherever the divine light sweeps, all dharmas become empty and all evils are warded off. The Immortal Monk King sighed and said: "This son is unpredictable, his magic reaches the sky, like an enemy and a friend..." The dark creatures were frightened: "It is difficult for all magic to get close to him! Why are they all brushed away?!" In this world, Qin Feng, carrying the supreme inheritance of Kong Xuan, rose up from the wilderness on the seaside and made camp step by step. Its goal is clear: sharpen the edge, avenge old grudges, explore the source of darkness, and bloom the brilliant brilliance of the five innate colors in the eternal night!
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Official(75)Scraped 3d ago
Don't forget to reply when you see it, don't pretend you didn't see it
Can the author create an original female protagonist? Don't write about the heroine in the original work. Or the female fairy king who came from the ancient Yuanyang world of the protagonist. It can be either a heroine as the protagonist or a story about Empress Huafen and Empress Luotian. What do you think, author? It would be best if the two heroines, Empress Pollen and Empress Luotian, are written as protagonists and sisters. You know the author. Also, why do I feel that the author is going to clear a single copy of this world soon? There is no need to wait for the Shi Hao to be born, the protagonist can complete the level. There should be no such thing as Zhetian and Shengxu. The protagonist can find something to do, travel around the sea or be trapped somewhere. Pass the plot in or through time and space. After the ancient immortal period has passed, at least the protagonist's abilities must be restricted, at least in the primitive ancient world. You cannot use your power casually to provoke cause and effect. Although the protagonist is not afraid of cause and effect. But. If Shi Hao cannot grow up, the protagonist will have no allies.
The opening describes how powerful the Immortal King Tribulation is, but the breakthrough is just that of an ordinary Immortal King. He has the five-color divine light of the Confucian Propaganda Inheritance. Not to mention fighting against the giants, at least he can't be timid. Here, he was made to swear, forced to retreat, and his strength was suppressed at the beginning. He even decided to start the Immortal King, and there is no Immortal King style at all.
I feel like the author's perfect world is not that interesting at all. The protagonist starts out as a true immortal at the peak of his power and transcends the tribulation of the Immortal King. He overcomes the tribulation effortlessly. It only takes two swipes of the five-color divine light. After the tribulation, he becomes an ordinary Immortal King! This is a step to reach heaven. The true immortal can directly overcome the tribulation of the Immortal King in one step, then the ordinary Immortal King, and then the subsequent description. I feel that the author has no idea about the strength of the Immortal King. The description of the strength of the True Immortal to the Immortal King has not changed qualitatively in the author's writing, but has only doubled several times.
Emmmmm, what do you say? The three golden cards are not even a little bit worse than the three golden cards at 7 o'clock. It's too big.
Too cowardly
I saw the protagonist calling the Immortal Monk King "Master," you are the Immortal King. Even if you have just broken through, you are still an Immortal King. The Immortal Monk King is the ultimate Immortal King. Shouldn't you call him a fellow Taoist? And he forces you over and over again, and you don't even dare to let out a fart. Are you the Immortal King? Those who don't know think you are a supreme being or a true immortal. You are too cowardly and cowardly.
If someone of the same level is called an ant, will the Immortal Emperor also be called a junior?
Protagonist's weapon
How about choosing the Seven Treasures Tree as the main character's weapon?
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The writing is good, but there are too few updates. Author, you have to swear that you can't be a eunuch, or that the 10 children are not biological. Come on, author. Also, are pig's feet in the form of a peacock, or are pig's feet human, or pig's feet have two forms. There shouldn't be any other revenge stories like this about pig's feet. I'm looking for a heroine, even if I'm looking for one, it should be a single heroine. If there is a heroine, I hope she's from the Phoenix clan. Did the author Pigfoot marry a wife and have children before the demise of his ancient world? After all, Pigfoot can cultivate the Tao to the peak of a true immortal for tens of thousands of years. Or Bai Wannian can't just practice cultivation for such a long time. After all, the protagonist has the most inheritance and is also a genius.
The writing is too bland. The protagonist is an Immortal King, and there is no description of the protagonist or other Immortal Kings being filled with immortal light, the Dharma being overwhelming, and the universe being disillusioned. It is relatively plain, just like a few Nascent Soul Stage monks. Some can be added later.
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Official(75)Scraped 3d ago
Don't forget to reply when you see it, don't pretend you didn't see it
Can the author create an original female protagonist? Don't write about the heroine in the original work. Or the female fairy king who came from the ancient Yuanyang world of the protagonist. It can be either a heroine as the protagonist or a story about Empress Huafen and Empress Luotian. What do you think, author? It would be best if the two heroines, Empress Pollen and Empress Luotian, are written as protagonists and sisters. You know the author. Also, why do I feel that the author is going to clear a single copy of this world soon? There is no need to wait for the Shi Hao to be born, the protagonist can complete the level. There should be no such thing as Zhetian and Shengxu. The protagonist can find something to do, travel around the sea or be trapped somewhere. Pass the plot in or through time and space. After the ancient immortal period has passed, at least the protagonist's abilities must be restricted, at least in the primitive ancient world. You cannot use your power casually to provoke cause and effect. Although the protagonist is not afraid of cause and effect. But. If Shi Hao cannot grow up, the protagonist will have no allies.
The opening describes how powerful the Immortal King Tribulation is, but the breakthrough is just that of an ordinary Immortal King. He has the five-color divine light of the Confucian Propaganda Inheritance. Not to mention fighting against the giants, at least he can't be timid. Here, he was made to swear, forced to retreat, and his strength was suppressed at the beginning. He even decided to start the Immortal King, and there is no Immortal King style at all.
I feel like the author's perfect world is not that interesting at all. The protagonist starts out as a true immortal at the peak of his power and transcends the tribulation of the Immortal King. He overcomes the tribulation effortlessly. It only takes two swipes of the five-color divine light. After the tribulation, he becomes an ordinary Immortal King! This is a step to reach heaven. The true immortal can directly overcome the tribulation of the Immortal King in one step, then the ordinary Immortal King, and then the subsequent description. I feel that the author has no idea about the strength of the Immortal King. The description of the strength of the True Immortal to the Immortal King has not changed qualitatively in the author's writing, but has only doubled several times.
Emmmmm, what do you say? The three golden cards are not even a little bit worse than the three golden cards at 7 o'clock. It's too big.
Too cowardly
I saw the protagonist calling the Immortal Monk King "Master," you are the Immortal King. Even if you have just broken through, you are still an Immortal King. The Immortal Monk King is the ultimate Immortal King. Shouldn't you call him a fellow Taoist? And he forces you over and over again, and you don't even dare to let out a fart. Are you the Immortal King? Those who don't know think you are a supreme being or a true immortal. You are too cowardly and cowardly.
If someone of the same level is called an ant, will the Immortal Emperor also be called a junior?
Protagonist's weapon
How about choosing the Seven Treasures Tree as the main character's weapon?
Join a group
If you want to discuss the direction of the plot, you can join the group 959523301
The writing is good, but there are too few updates. Author, you have to swear that you can't be a eunuch, or that the 10 children are not biological. Come on, author. Also, are pig's feet in the form of a peacock, or are pig's feet human, or pig's feet have two forms. There shouldn't be any other revenge stories like this about pig's feet. I'm looking for a heroine, even if I'm looking for one, it should be a single heroine. If there is a heroine, I hope she's from the Phoenix clan. Did the author Pigfoot marry a wife and have children before the demise of his ancient world? After all, Pigfoot can cultivate the Tao to the peak of a true immortal for tens of thousands of years. Or Bai Wannian can't just practice cultivation for such a long time. After all, the protagonist has the most inheritance and is also a genius.
The writing is too bland. The protagonist is an Immortal King, and there is no description of the protagonist or other Immortal Kings being filled with immortal light, the Dharma being overwhelming, and the universe being disillusioned. It is relatively plain, just like a few Nascent Soul Stage monks. Some can be added later.
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