Full-time Master: Gun Soul

Great, there is a new Total Avatar fanfic. I personally think this novel is quite interesting, a bit sparse, but I can understand it. After all, it just came out. Su Muqiu is also very good at this, she has a kind of chess soul. Author, can this novel feature the protagonist competing in an international competition? I have read a lot of full-time fan fiction, and I have won one title and ended it early. I have not read enough at all. I hope the author will continue to write more words in the future, and don't cut off the ending! The protagonist could have more interaction with Su Muqiu

The first half is okay, and the pacing is also okay. After that, except for the plot expansion in the game, the rest is just a mess. It's nonsense to have a harem in e-sports no matter how well you think about it. Su and Ye have been in a relationship for many years. As a result, Su became the male protagonist in the harem. The male protagonist is invincible in the competition. Yinwu's designs are more outrageous than the last. He kills at every turn and doubles and triples the damage at every turn. I'm bored. The other club researchers are all idiots. What is that thing at the back? The weapon has a mobile ghost array + high-value beheading. It's simply outrageous that you let the Ghost Formation become a casual profession and turn the Ghost Formation into a halo. The last part is pure poison. Mu Qiu comes back from the dead and instantly falls in love with the protagonist's sister. The male protagonist also uses his connections to recruit people into the World Championship team. Okay, okay, is this Long Aotian or a professional player? ? Simply insulting eSports

I've basically read all of the Avatar fanfic. I really read this book. It poisoned me to death. I was persuaded to quit after 50 chapters. I really couldn't stand it when The Psychic pulled it out. Isn't it embarrassing for the author to read the plot of those chapters twice? No more tricks, brothers, don't look if you're afraid of embarrassment

It's too strong. If they hug each other, Su Mucheng and Chu Yunxiu will most likely win. Su Mucheng has been eaten. She is suspected of being a double heroine. It looks good. I love watching it. I am a native dog and I love watching it!

The overall feeling is very good, but the game plot is a bit cumbersome. I hope the author can add more words.

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Good-looking, explosive, love to watch, just watch it

Not yet. How come it's over after reading it? ? ? ? ?

Very nice. Highly recommended. It's the first time I've seen something like this.

Everything was fine in the previous section, but I was a bit speechless about the ghost. The ghost was my woman's biological brother. I didn't dare to think about it. They slept together the night before and then changed bodies the next day. Although they weren't doing that kind of thing, they were somewhat borderline! And towards the finale, you could resurrect Su Muqiu, but you also brought out a biological sister to accompany Su Muqiu, and they even got together. Your sister is also a love brain. She fell in love with Su Muqiu a week after the car accident. Why, you want to compensate your own sister for sleeping with her sister? The key point is that Su Muqiu flirted with your sister. It was outrageous. There was no emotion at all. After waking up from the car accident, she immediately forced the flirtation. And knowing the relationship between the male protagonist, it felt more like revenge on the male protagonist and sacrificing his sister. The male protagonist was also punched. There are two male protagonists. Su Muqiu knew it all the time. But as soon as you came back to life, you hugged her sister and turned around to hit her. I can only say that the author 666, sisters send each other, right? You are here to play the finale.